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Heavy Rains


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Comment posted by Heavy Rains deleted Jan 13th, 2013

Just read it an YOU MONSTER!! Not really, but I'm hooked. Can't wait for more. Brony on!

You may want to break up paragraphs of speech. EX:

"Hi." I say as I walk in. "Sup." He responds. "Eh, not much." This should look like:

"Hi." I say as I walk in.

"Sup." He responds.

"Eh, not much."

Can't wait to see what happens next. Brony on!

1607695 Alright. The next chapter is going up soon. :twilightsmile:

Le plot thickens.... brony on!

Lets hope the assassin actually kills someone soon b(^_^)d

I think I know where this is going.... ONWARD TO LE PLOT! Brony on!

*sigh* this story needs more views.

1646691 Indeed.. It's funny how i write something like The Dark ones and get over a hundred on the second day. (Not too many considering how many use the site but big for me none the less.) And then I write this (With your help of course) and after a week only 82 views. :fluttershysad: 45 on the first page and like 6 on every other. It's disheartening but we shall proceed none the less. :ajsleepy:

Keep it up man, good things to those who wait. Brony on!

1647962 Thats what I needed to hear. Thanks man. :pinkiesmile:

"SHIFT! WHO IS THIS?” LOL Shift you dun goofed now :rainbowlaugh:

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