Hiding in the background, we bring his story to light...
1607613 I'm glad to hear that! Brony on!
You may want to break up paragraphs of speech. EX:
"Hi." I say as I walk in. "Sup." He responds. "Eh, not much." This should look like:
"Hi." I say as I walk in.
"Sup." He responds.
"Eh, not much."
Can't wait to see what happens next. Brony on!
1607695 Alright. The next chapter is going up soon.
1607711 How soon? Would you say, really soon?
1607719 Like as soon as 5-10 minutes.
1607758YAY!
1607613 I'm glad to hear that! Brony on!
You may want to break up paragraphs of speech. EX:
"Hi." I say as I walk in. "Sup." He responds. "Eh, not much." This should look like:
"Hi." I say as I walk in.
"Sup." He responds.
"Eh, not much."
Can't wait to see what happens next. Brony on!
1607695 Alright. The next chapter is going up soon.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
1607711 How soon? Would you say, really soon?![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
1607719 Like as soon as 5-10 minutes.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
1607758YAY!