• Published 1st Jan 2013
  • 9,861 Views, 202 Comments

The Poison of Passion - Crowley



You fall in love with Zecora, but you're too nervous to tell her your feelings.

Comments ( 113 )

My only regret, I didnt draw my extra special image in time.
Oh well family life calls haha.

Dammit Crowley I was about to go to sleep. :raritydespair:

The crap I put up with for good pone fiction. /reads

Edit: Grumble grumble. Awesome as usual. I'll read the remaining four chapters once I wake up because now I really need sleep.

Love it.
Zecora is tough to write... you did good.
(inb4 featured.)

I am not following you and I don't have any of your stories favorited. So why did I just get a notification for this story?

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I don't really know. Maybe we're both following a similar group? But it would've said that. Huh.

Starcat5 #6 · Jan 1st, 2013 · · 25 ·

You are a weather-pegasus.

*Thinking* Second person fic. Ignore.

1885594 If I find anymore I'll be sure to keep you informed. So far, I like where it's going.

Oh my gosh, a new story from Crowley!! :pinkiecrazy:
Must... bucking.... read!!!

Y-you explained the philosophy of zebra speech with rhyme... Are you some kinda wizard?
(Great story... As always)

20 rounds?
GREAT SCOTT!!
(and yes, that was obligatory)

Waking up ungodly too early after New Year's Eve? Check.
Seeing a Crowley story in my notifications. Check.
Reading it and realizing that was totally worth it? A very enjoyable check.

Now that's what I call a marathon. Good on you, Slacker.

Those last two lines...
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19 times, if we assume each climax had a similar expulsion, that is at least a champagne bottle's worth of pony semen... they should really hydrate. :rainbowlaugh:

... FUCK!
new fetish, DAMN YOU!!

You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this story. Masterful work as always, Crowley.

Commence read.
Glad to see some Zecora.
Nicely done Crowley.

So twenty times last night, wonder how many I'll manage during the day!!! And Zecora, do you something to bring back some feeling in "my" crotch??

So, who's next??
1885576 Nope, it's a second person fic. First person would be "I am a weather pegasus"

That was great as always Crowley :rainbowlaugh: 20 times wow talk about blue ball lol :pinkiegasp: So who is the next Mare you will be gracing us with a story. Whoever it is I can't wait :twilightblush:

Zecora invented Super Cialis. All she needs is an endorsement from a has been celebrity that is both low on money and dignity, then BAM billions of bits!

"Hi, I'm Prince Blueblood and like many stallions I suffer from ED, but there is hope when it comes to putting venom back in the cobra..."


Another great Crowley fic, but when I read: "Flash flood" I was expecting more pony drowning.

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Well, at least there was a lot of rainfall; there had to be something water-related! :pinkiecrazy:

I really need to not read any 'relationship' stories anymore. Do you know how hard it is to keep my "relationships suck" point of view when I spend a part of my day reading this awesome story and imagining myself dating Zecora...and then ending with THAT?

Almost makes me want to consider trying dating again.

Anyways, excellent story, loved every bit of it.

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:facehoof: To be fair, I was trying to post that while my ride for work was ringing my doorbell 10 min early. I'll edit it.

Edit: Also, I did not downrate this story. I simply did not rate it at all.

Well done sir. Your stories are always a pleasure to read. Can't wait for the next one :pinkiehappy:

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It's OK, I know second person isn't the most favoured kind of writing style, but it's the best thing for the fics I have in mind right now. Might make a proper third-person fic in the future, but either way it's cool. :moustache:

Aw yeah, new Crowley fic.
Preparing for incoming feels!

I don't know why but I felt the urge to tell you your story is nice.

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Try not to spill the coffee on your lap during the Mature scene... I'm not responsible for burns! :pinkiecrazy:

I'll admit that the sex came somewhat out of nowhere, but it was pretty well played out. Nicely done once more Crowley.
-Glassed

And the first fic that I read this year goes to Crowley!

Nice fic, Crowley! :ajsmug:

Interesting. Not many Zecora fics out there. I'll have to add this to my must read list :pinkiesmile:

This story between OC and Zecora. I like it.:pinkiehappy:

Since you write such awesome fics, here is a little rhyme for you Crowley.

Your fics between ponies and me, always fill me with glee.
For every new fic from you I see, I read it immediately.
So I thank you Crowley for whom wears a Fedora, for this beatiful story involving me and Zecora.

Keep writing.

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Considering the amount of time I had to think up Zecora's dialogue, you'd think I'd had enough rhyming for the past few months! :derpytongue2:

And thank you, my fedora is my sexiest feature. In fact, next fic's a clop between me and my own hat, every gory detail included. :pinkiecrazy:

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I can't help it! I'm overwhelmingly classy by default! :raritydespair:

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Oh yeah. Gonna fix that now.

This story... Holy crap, I love it. But why am I surprised? This is a Crowly story!

Nice story. Also I give huge props top wipe who write about zecora. Thinking of rhymes is always really hard for me.

Fecking auto correct!!!!:flutterrage:

I don't know if there were actual rhymes besides zecora's dialog but I swear I kept reading rhymes throughout most of this story, and very well written if I may add:twilightsmile:

Another Crowley fic? Insta fav and vote up, and shall commence read later.

Zecora doesn't get nearly enough fics considering how fun she is. Thank you for this most enjoyable little tale. :heart:

1889567 :twilightblush: Fraid not, sorry. I just don't do clop. Read the very beginning and end, but it won't be enough to leave a proper comment. XD (It's not you. I just... I don't wanna say I'm a PRUDE, but that's the closest word I can think of. :twilightsheepish: It's not me, it's you. Wait a second... strike that, reverse it, thank you, moving on! :3)

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Yeah, I know, it's OK. It's why I put the warnings there in the first place, and the only time they aren't are if something storyline-relevant is happening during the scene (like the Rainbow Dash sequel fic).

Meh, already had a thing for Zecora.

YUS YUS!!!

A new Crowley fic!

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