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I don't even English at all.

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Wtf... Thats some of the worst writing ever

Why's it got the sad tag?:rainbowhuh:

1512611 becasue of all thos yrs of trying to find it, i remmber i wanted to buy this video game for so long on the PS1 but it take me like 10 or 11 yrs just to find it and buy it

I gave it a shot and ... its alright.
Its pretty funny actually, i can see it now Dash going to Manehatten or something like that with her coat dyed bright blue or something with a samll bowlcap to buy a pornomagazine.
Freaking hillarious, and i think its a lot funnier right now then i thought it was at the beginning.... or i was just holding back my emotions, i'm not even sleepy why am i all wierd? .... oh right that's how i normally function, never mind i liked the story.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png

Well i just read all the comments and am i really the only that likes this thing? Hell no, there's only 1 dislike (right?) so all these guys are complaining to much, are to lazy to change their vote, i have absolutely no standards or i am a creative mastermind that can appriciate this kind of humor more than most of the people here.

Hey i was wrong i see 2 dislikes.

3 right now, why am i doing this. I'm not that sleepy so i usually am not this ... how i ussually am, yeah i really am a special guy... in a good way i think.
Its not like i think about fire everywhere... no wait i do but i do not preform those thoughts soo that's makes me sorta harmless. (still want to make homemade tnt, i am studying as laboratorium analist so i'm pretty sure i'm getting the skills to do it and all the chemistry lessons to know how) So that makes me not so harmless but i haven't done it yet so lets go for still harmless... i'm rambling ...a lot. I hope you enjoyed the positive feedback and me being silly i'm just gonna count the dislikes again. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png

Well there still three soo no edits are needed, that's why i made a new one .. i think, maybe i was being lazy or i just wanted to spam your notifications.
Yeah its probably that last one.

1512645 That's not a sad thing by any stretch of the imagination. The only sad thing I could see was Fluttershy giving up drawing, but even that's not a major enough part of the fic to warrant the sad tag.

1512611
I think its for that part where she lost her precious magazine out of her reach.
It still has a happy ending dough but its sad (for Dash i think) during a big part of the story.

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I've actually seen worse stuff that made the featured box, not saying it should be featured but that its not that bad.
If you want worse stuff then just scroll down the new story's part again and take a random pick.
Atleast there is kind of a big chance to get something worse, like that story with rape and incest just really *shudders* you'l get the picture.

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Its not THAT bad i'm pretty sure you could keep it to around 2 ponified facehoofs, its not so bad that dear Picard should be involved. (a bit overkill i think) (opinion can be taken seriously, i stand behind it but it can be dismissed as an opinion)

I'l just put this here for hogging all the place in the comment section.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png
I like this emotion a lot, don't get to use it a lot though.

not really 'mature' XD but hey. its diffrent :)

It's 'pornographic'. But, if you want to be simple, just put 'porn'.
Looks interesting, will read later.

You know I wasnt actually talking litteraly cause if I was itthe worstould have to be spiderses (excuse my typos im doing this on my phone and I cant see what im typing and its incredibly innax:derpytongue2:urate whrn I try and change things)

1513118 I thought it was a pun. Not a very good pun, but... whatever.
Pornygraphic, Pornographic, Pony Graphic.

It doesn't really count as comedy, either.

Wow that sucked.... Tried to place derpy at end of it too lol:twilightblush:

meh porn is porn big deal :facehoof:

Please tell me just exactly WHY you decided to write something like this. The English is better than some of your other stories, but that doesn't hide the fact that it's badly written.:facehoof:
1513160 Woah, does this have the Comedy tag? I thought it had the 'pointless-clop' tag instead.
Edit: And WHY does it have the Sad and Random tag, too?!
google.co.uk/imgres?q=facehoof&num=10&hl=en&tbm=isch&tbnid=_TRrQRBYOsO97M:&imgrefurl=http://prohardver.hu/tema/re_megfujtak_ket_samsung_oled_tevet_az_ifa-rol/hsz_1-50.html&docid=eK1PSxjom9210M&imgurl=http://prohardver.hu/dl/upc/2012-09/154583_mlfw2608-facehoof.png&w=650&h=450&ei=W72LUMejHZKEhQeg2oHgAw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=708&vpy=149&dur=171&hovh=187&hovw=270&tx=151&ty=135&sig=109164471329098940780&page=1&tbnh=131&tbnw=162&start=0&ndsp=26&ved=1t:429,r:3,s:0,i:78&biw=1440&bih=818
YOU'RE NOT EVEN MAKING SENSE ANYMORE!

This deserves thumbs up everywhere. Funny, sad, random...just beautiful. Keep up the work bro!

1512654 The ponies all look like they got poked in the eye and are rubbing it to make it feel better. Except Derpy, looks like she's about to sneeze into her hoof.

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I was paroding a story called "a shit to remember" by Junji Ito.
badly written? :facehoof: well, my standar is from left to right, i dont wanna become lexicologist english master.
Comedy tag? i laughed a lot while writing it
sad tag by the fact that Dash was sad after lost her magazine, and fluttershy was sobbing at one point.
random because it was 3am in the morning, im not sure about random anymore, i'll take that down
oh i remember, the monster at the start was going to be chuthulu, this story was being to be called "Celestia vs Chruhulu" but in some moment i lost the track of the plot.
'pointless-clop' :ajbemused: no, not this one, in fact it's not a lot about clopping, i mean, that was not the purpose.
i'm not making sense? I guess i need an editor.
but serioursly why did u even comment on a Mature tagged story, don't watch these.
btw congrats for your new story, i'll read it tonight, have a nice day.

nope the sad tag is for the readers for having to read this. It might have been good if i did not feel like it was written by the age group this show was made for.

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you know, you're right man, people actually could find this looking by the tags and sad is just out of place, i took out the sad tag too.

uh its not so bad I kinda liked it :twilightsmile:

I was reading along going, mmhmmm, yea and uhh huh. Then i got to the end and i was like LOL!

This story was... Something else. But I liked it:twilightsmile:

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