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I think I *nearly* shed a manly tear here... Its just exactly what I set out to be and was more than just a story.
Could be tagged as a Tragedy I guese
The grammar... My eyes... If you need a proof reader I would be glad to help.
3246946 You my friend just got the job, and I'm kinda sorry for you because I don't hate you or anything.
3247115 Haha, sorry, I tried my best to seem as polite as I could, but being me I had to throw in something I found humorous. I'm only good with grammar though, not much else. Just tell me when you have a story or send me a message and I'll see if I can find time to proofread it.
3247115 Ok, I sent you a message (or a few) about a problem I'm having with the editing. I also sent a suggestion.
Edit: Just upload the file again. When I upload it I can't comment on specific words. Put something at the end of it to mark that it's re-uploaded, like (1).
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I agree with that !! Tagged Tragedy
I feel sorry for poor Vinyl
Tragedy? This story needs a "Seriously Fucked Up' tag. And as for Noteworthy, he's completely fine with Vinyl pretending to date him just so she can be closer to Octavia?
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I know this is really late, almost 2 weeks late on this comment, but I think I saw 5 different song quotes.
Not to mention, I never thought about Vinyl being Scootaloo's mom. Nice Twist. (See what I did there?) And as soon as I read that part about her throwing up before the "concert" with Octavia, I knew Vinyl was pregnant.
But it does make you wonder... Who's Silver Spoon's parents? Maybe you can explain that one as well. Who knows. *shrugs*
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I've done that for a friend before. Helped them get closer to somepony close to me by pretending to date them. It isn't as weird as you think. More awkward than anything, really. But, I digress.
Needless to say, it didn't turn out well. She ended up in a psych ward, and he was found drugged and passed out in a bathroom.
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Golden star for everyone who catches the songs referend in this story.
scarymommy.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/gold-star.jpg x5
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Proofreader also got one.
scarymommy.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/gold-star.jpg
There's a total of 9 diferent songs here referenced on purpose.
About Silver Spoon's parents
gmid.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/refrigerator-logic.jpg
One thing you seemed to have missed:
Paragraph 3 Line 3
of watch
should be:
of watching
DANCE DANCE
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Guess we finally know who Scootaloo's parents are.