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NaughtSought

NaughtSought #1 · Apr 26th, 2013 · · · Send a heartbeat to ·

Uh.... gimme a little while to reread that.

TrollestiaSubject

TrollestiaSubject #2 · Apr 26th, 2013 · · · Send a heartbeat to ·

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NaughtSought

NaughtSought #3 · Apr 28th, 2013 · · · Send a heartbeat to ·

I still.... I don't know. There's a good story here but its difficult under the awkward phrases. Not to insult you but its apparent you're not native English speaking are you? I'll certainly watch for more but I'm left very confused still.

Furion

Furion #4 · May 2nd, 2013 · · · Send a heartbeat to ·

2495509 Nevertheless, he'll get better as he keeps going along. I'll admit, it was somewhat jarring and looking back through this there were mistakes that the other editors and I missed, but practice makes perfect.

Anyway forgive me for waiting so long to give this a proper visit and comment, I'm easily distracted. I'll be sure to get to work proofreading the next chapter soon.

SolidFire

SolidFire #5 · Jun 18th, 2013 · 1 · · The void that cries through you ·

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Um, you sent me the first chapter to proofread...sweet Celestia. I'm finding this to be quite the nightmare. I kindly request that you change the share settings so that I may freely edit the mistakes in grammar. If you don't trust me, then make a copy of the story before you do anything else. You have no reason to trust me with this, but I have no reason to screw you over and ruin your work either. Please consider what I've said.

Maxsteele