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Fruit Cake: Carrot's niece. She's been kicked out of her parents home..., again. So she's staying with the Cakes, and the Cakes aren't too thrilled about that... Not only are they scared about her and the twins; they're terrified of what madness Fruit will unleash with Pinkie Pie....
Join Ponyville as they brace themselves for this crazy mare and witness her antics that all end in hilarity.
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Hot potato!
haha I will like and fav to see where this goes. Great chapter by the way!
I can tell that many a lol will be had with this story.
I hope Pinkie doesn't tear a hole in the universe.
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Indeed so!
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Not anytime soon though, just started this story.
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(throws back GladOs) I found it in our garden, you can have it!
Keep it away from birds! It freaks out!
MMMYES, I like where this is headed.
I have a bad feeling about this
so me fav and see what happens
From what I can tell from her now, Fruit Cake and Pinkie Pie together...would...mean...uh oh.
1422755 THE SPAAAAAM! IT BUUUUUUUURNS!!!!!
*as everyone in Ponyville feels the impending singularity*
This is way too fast paced with way too much dialogue
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That's Fruit Cake for ya!
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Same here!
I read and I thought 'wow, Pinkie has a twin.'
Setting up the relationship between Fruit and Pinkie, and giving more depth to Fruit's character.
Though I'm not sure if I wrote Pinkie well though...
Pinkie wasn't half bad in my opinion.
Um....some sentences didn't make any scenes. Like when Mrs. Cake said "I know, dear, but we next on the list" Did you mean to say they were next?
Sorry, just thought I'd point that out, don't be offended.
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My first spelling error!
But I still think I could have done better...
Sweet Celestia!!
Annnnnnnnnnd... fixed.
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Thanks.
Myopinion is, if it bewtter than I can do, its good. (Makes everything I see good)
Another good chapter, keep it up!
Great chapter man!
Wonder what's in the box. Also, "I know dear, but they were next on the list" What do they mean by that?
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List of relatives Fruit hasn't stayed with yet.
Lol
Dun, dun, dun! Barf fest!
Why do I get the feeling she threw up
that would be funny and disgusting at the same time
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I like having the audience imagine these sort of events.
This was a very funny part of the story.
There is just one problem. When you are talking about why the party is outside, all u put down is Pound and Pumpkin. Now we all know what they are doing or come up with an idea of what they are doing, but it just makes the story sounded better if give more detail. Like say, The party was outside Sugarcube Corner, because Pound and Pumpkin were sleeping or something.
Still it was good.
Sorry for the filler ch.
but I need to end the party thing somehow, and this was the best I could do. 
Check my blog for more info 'bout this stroy please
Oh no
I have a bad feeling here
SHAMELESS SELF ADVERTISEMENT!
yeah, anyway, just wanted to thank Alpha Sorpii for giving me some ideas
also, wanted to promote myself here bout my blog. Trying something new and would like opinions, but yeah still can't believe how moderately successful this story's been so far! Thanks ya'll 
The Master of Metallicato,
BludgeonWarrior.
PINKIE! That is like leaving the twins with a much more younger version of yourself! How can you be so foolish!
1536099 You're welcome
I'm happy to help.
Ponyville's officially up shit creek without a paddle...and the canoe just sprung a leak.
The last line mane me laugh hard
1571766 I got one that might be funnier.
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Praise to pronuciationitis!
Nice thing with the SpongeBob reference
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There were at least two, I think...
Fruit's mean to little fillies.
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No, she just knows who's important.
Fruit as teacher.
This situation requires an specific meme:
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I always wanted to use one of these...
haha wow Fruit is such a dits lol
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"It's not my fault!!"
It's a lie! The battle of Little Big Horn really happened that way, with the robots and the hydra-pony! Fruit Cake knows the truth! The 'official' version of the battle is a lie! It's a conspiracy! Quick, we have to tell everypony!
(Alpha Scorpii runs to the door. As soon as he opens it, two stallions in black suits and wearing sunglasses flash him with a strange device)
There is no conspiracy... No robots in the battle of Little Big Horn... And no stallions in black suits working for Celestia... And this comment does not exist, it's an illusion caused by the light of Venus being reflected by swamp gas from a weather balloon trapped in a thermal pocket... I'm fine...
Well now, whats next on the list of crazyness I wonder.
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"AHH!! 80's ruffians!!!"
"I swear, it was just a guess!"
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Fruit is crazier than Pinkie.
I didn't even know this was possible! .............Don't tell her about the mirror pool. We barley survived the Pinkie wave. :Hides: Everypony run!
I worry about myself.
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"Don't bother... I've seen that episode. I won't do anything THAT crazy........Hey look, a cannon!"