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Smatterhorn
Smut from the mountains, with love.
Smatterhorn
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Any idea how long it will be between updates?
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My goal is no more than a week or so in between chapters, but I'm very much writing this on the fly– so I sadly can't guarantee that much when push comes to shove. Still, that's the intent! Next chapter should be out sometime tonight or tomorrow, depending on what I can get done!
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Cool!
First chapter was a good setup, I'm hoping some of those Spoiler Warnings are in the next update.
I trust the depravity will pay off. The paragraph with Coco makes me hope we'll meet more characters already captured by the changelings and embracing their place under their new masters.
I also hope we find out how all the changeling structures contribute to the perversion (what do the cocoons do? what are those pulsating buildings? slightly related, if changelings lay eggs down every orifice of the mare, which way does the hatchling leave?)
Finally, I'm guessing that the genderbending spoiler in the plot description is related to what will happen to the stallions eventually.
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Hehe, you are asking all the right questions! All of that and more will be explored in due time. I'm just a huge sucker for trying to paint something of a 'why? for it all– even if it's not really necessary for a story setting out to be what this is.
And as for your spoiler... bingo~. There's more to come in regard to that kink list in the plot description, too– I didn't want to overwhelm both potential readers & myself with the promises of kinks that weren't even in the story yet, though. I figure I should probably start using the Author's Notes as a kink warning for the chapters that come after this point... We'll see!
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I get where you're coming from. Before it became clear that I simply did not have time to write a drawn-out clopfic, I'd get trapped between having no setup for a clop scenario, and having way too much setup and worldbuilding for a clopfic.
I think you made the right call not listing too many specific kinks, it would set up too many expectations about what happens and when.
Anyways, I'll lay off of commenting here for a bit to give other people a chance to share their thoughts.
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No worries at all! I certainly appreciate it all the same– feel free to reach out through PM's if you'd like to talk or discuss further!
How did you come up with the name Hivesprawl?
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Just tried to think of something a bit strange to sound foreign while also wanting to illustrate the biological, natural aspect of Changeling society. Everything in the Hive is alive, including the Hive itself. In that same sense, even the smaller outpost hives now being built into Equestrian cities are more like limbs to the main organic body– rather than a mere population center connected to a highway. Always trying to up the Xeno-Factor while still keeping things familiar!
The way I see it, how you approach the next chapter will affect how Fluttershy gets converted to the Changeling's side.
If you skip over her trip with Cerana and right to Chrysalis, then Chrysalis will be the one who fully corrupt Flutters
If you show the journey through the hivesprawl, whatever Fluttershy sees (and whatever Cerana feels like explaining) can be part of her character development towards embracing her broodwife future
Also, I hope the Canterlot tunnel expedition discovers that the forcefield went underground to form a complete sphere, both because it would be funny and it would give Fluttershy an active role later to either convince her friends to surrender, or to help the changelings sneak into the city.
I really like reading stories where Changelings and their Queen comes out 'victorious' via dark and sexy, kinky way, so I will definitely stay and look forward to read more!
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Glad to hear you're enjoying! These Changelings certainly feed on a different kind of love, and Equestria's a total feast!
I'd say the build-up is worth it, seeing how deep Fluttershy literally is in the hive. Chrysalis is gonna have fun with Flutter's love for animals...
I just look forward to the queen pummeling the innocence out of her
It would be really clever if Chrysalis actually started sending supplies to Canterlot to feed the ponies. That they have her to thank for their survival and that it's clear she will treat them well.
Starving a population will confirm notions they have that you will do horrible things to them so they will resist you all the more. Also as a conquerer taking over a completely ruined city with a starving population is more expensive long term than to send supplies to them every day.
The image of the symbol is broken.
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Hm... thanks for pointing that out! I received no notice it was removed for any particular reason, so I figure it's an issue in regards to where I'd uploaded it. I'll see to fixing it quickly, thanks again for telling me!
Really good stuff. Some of your sentences run longer than they should, in my opinion, but I can usually follow everything well, and the pacing is much appreciated. It was smart to mix sexiness with the exposition, kept me hooked. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)