• Published 5th Mar 2024
  • 1,423 Views, 26 Comments

A Butterfly's Hive - Smatterhorn



With the Changelings seemingly hellbent on swallowing up all of Equestria, a desperate Fluttershy seeks to make a difference. There's a new apex species in Equestria now, though– and all others will learn to serve under them. Fluttershy included.

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Comments ( 11 )

I'd say the build-up is worth it, seeing how deep Fluttershy literally is in the hive. Chrysalis is gonna have fun with Flutter's love for animals...

I just look forward to the queen pummeling the innocence out of her

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Hm... thanks for pointing that out! I received no notice it was removed for any particular reason, so I figure it's an issue in regards to where I'd uploaded it. I'll see to fixing it quickly, thanks again for telling me!

Really good stuff. Some of your sentences run longer than they should, in my opinion, but I can usually follow everything well, and the pacing is much appreciated. It was smart to mix sexiness with the exposition, kept me hooked. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Congrats on 1000 views!

This has been a delightful read so far, when will the next update be out?

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Thanks for the advice! I know I'm 100% guilty of that– I can get really hung up on trying to ensure I illustrate a certain concept or visual in my mind, which can quite easily end up 'lost in the sauce' as a side effect regardless.

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Appreciated as always, Nameless!

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Happy to hear you like! I've been busy the last half-month or so, but I think I'm all set to start chugging once more. I don't want to immediately bite off more than I can chew, but... whatever– I'm gunning for the end of the weekend for the next chapter!

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That actually usually was what conquerors did. Starving a city was something looters did. As they just wanted to rob the valuables and then leave. However if you want to conquer a city you want to win the hearts of it's people and you also want to keep the damage to a minimum. After all they are soon going to be YOUR things and so you have to pick up the bill for any damage you do.
Also a city is useless without a urban population to occupy it. If you let a large portion starve that is citizens you are missing out on and they have urban skills that are useful to you.

Great story, any eta on the next chapter?

Uff i like this history

A fun fic. I do very much enjoy changelings playing up a little philosophy of supremacy :raritywink:
Looking forward to seeing where this goes...

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