The Birth of a Beautiful Friendship.

by ROFLBED0

Epilogue

Cadence put down the photo album containing the picture of the sleeping foals. “Oh that’s such a cute story.” She said in a sweet voice. Shining blushed a bit as he looked back at the photo, the memories from that night were as vivid as ever. Orion and Dazzle sat across from them. “What time do you think Twilight is going to arrive, she should have been here almost an hour ago” Dazzle said. “Well it is a long ride all the way from Ponyville.” Orion said rubbing his wife’s back. Dazzle let out a little giggle as he rubbed as did he. Shining sighed and facehoofed as his parent cuddled on the couch right in front in front of him. Cadence smiled, she loved the sight of love. “Um, mom dad why exactly did you call us all to come here?” Shining asked.

“Is it too much to ask to see your kids?” Orion asked. “Well no.” Shining said back as he looked down. Cadence spoke up. “I think what Shining is trying to say is, is there a reason in particularly that you wanted us all to be present. “Actually yes, we do.” Dazzle said. “but he aren’t saying anything until all our children are present.” Shining sighed once again and poured himself a drink.

Within the hour a knock was heard at the door. Shining quickly moved over door and opened it. On the other side of the door was a purple unicorn mare. “Shining!” she yelled and she jumped on him and knocked him to the ground. The two got up and went to the living room to join everyone else. Upon entering, Cadence walked up and hugged Twilight. “Sunshine, Sunshine ladybugs awake! Clap your hooves and give a little shake!” The two mares said as they did their dance. At last Twilight had reached her parent and gathered them both in a hug. “Mom dad.” Twilight said. “I was so happy that you invited me for dinner.” Twilight said.

Everyone sat down at the table for dinner. Shining took a bottle of Sparkling Cider and started pouring it into everyone’s glass. When he got to Dazzle’s glass, she had declined. Everypony sat back down and began to eat. “This is delicious,” Twilight said. As she ate her food. Dazzle had eaten rather quickly. Suddenly he remembered Shining. “Umm mom and dad, are you going to tell us the news you wanted to tell us. Dazzle suddenly grabbed her husband’s hoof and swallowed. “I’m pregnant.” Dazzle said smiling. Twilight, Shining and Cadence suddenly stopped eating. “But you two are in your early fifties.” Twilight said. “Only on the outside.” Orion said kissing his wife. Twilight slowly opened her mouth and spoke. “So I’m going to have a new LSBBF or a new LBBBF.” She said getting a little excited. “Yup,” Dazzle said. Twilight and Cadence walked over and hugged her. Slowly Shining also went over and joined in them in the hug. “Our family going to get even bigger.” Cadence said.

Later that night Orion and Dazzle laid together in bed. “Are you ready to go through this all over again?” Orion said as he rubbed her belly. “Kinda, I’m really nervous believe it or not.” Dazzle said. She reached over and pulled something from her bedside dresser. “What is that?” Orion asked. “Hold out your hoof.” Dazzle demanded. She pulled out a small blade and poked his hoof. “Ouch he said as he grabbed his hoof and placed it in his mouth. “Hehe, I told you if you got me pregnant again that I would cut you.” Dazzle said with a giggle. “I love you Orion.” “I love you too Dazzle.”

Chapter 1 of The Birth of a New Friendship.

Comments

[pinkiepie3232]

The ending was wierd, but funny. Great story overall.

[SuperPinkBrony12]

Was this epilogue REALLY nessescary?

[WezaQ]

1434899
I"m going with no.
This was completely pointless, not bad, just pointless.

[Pino Graham]

now need to see the sequel, the newest sibling will have some interesting pressure on them

[ROFLBED0]

No the epilogue had a point. I wanted to see if I should actually try and Persue this thing and turn it into a full on story. But reading wise the epilogue was completely pointless.

[Xuncu]

Last paragraph read kinda crappy. Like pacing all of a sudden felt wrong.

[r14]

mmm i feel this adding on to your runnign world.

[Willow Arqueiro]

Strange writing in this chapter

[Blue Streak]

Funny pointless epilogue is pointless and funny

[ROFLBED0]

So should I do it or not?

[xXSilverLiningXx]

Like I said before, this story has potential, but for the love of Luna, get a freaking proofreader. Your grammar (in this chapter) was worse than a third grader's. Before you even consider making this a "real story", go back and fix the original.

[fatmanspencer]

I'mma not be as mean or rude as others. I fairly enjoyed this story, and while I myself am no expert, you do need to get a proofreader or at least office 10. it has a very improved spell check. Anyways, I am curious ot a sequel, but not so much so I would demand it right now. Right some more smaller fic first,

[Alaborn]

Remember, a new paragraph with every new speaker.

[Pino Graham]

1436803 yes a sequel would be good

[ROFLBED0]

Okay then I need a proofreader if I am really going to write because I am a S#&t writer

[Lemon Curry]

“So I’m going to have a new LSBBF or a new LBBBF.”
LSBFF / LBBFF (Best Friend Forever)

[Lord King Cocoon]

I actually saw that coming...the part about Dazzle being pregnant, not the part about Dazzle cutting Orion. Although I did kind of see the cutting as well.

[mines5]

I got only part way through and I immediately knew she was pregnant. My only concern with this is from a realistic point of view, mating abilities usually (not always I'm sure) stop working properly after the age of 40 and/or become "damaged", making a baby at 50 would cause some interesting genetic issues assuming that long-term exposure to just ambient radiation from the surrounding world will cause damage. Eggs do NOT last THAT long (usually), and and sperm start having increased amounts of data degradation.

But this is fiction, so do whatever the hell you want.

[Mehnlo]

Aaaww, the cuteness makes up for all of typos.

[Evil Paladin]

What 1437264 said.

Fix the original and the epilogue before departing for a new story.
My comment for the original still stands.

[Mlp Fan Celine]

It is "do a little shake. Not give a little shake. But it is a cute Story