Paying up

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Delighted Delirium

Delighted Delirium #1 · March 3rd · 5 · 6 · Chapter 1 ·

Welcome to marehood!
OOH, AND I'M FIRST?! SWELL!

doomie-22

doomie-22 #2 · March 3rd · 4 · · Chapter 1 ·

If Rarity thinks Rainbow Dash and Applejack are going to want to be her friends after this, she is out of her mind.

vectorVll

vectorVll #3 · March 5th · · · Chapter 1 ·

I'm going to be honest with the cutie mark crusade. This track marks this probably would backfire like everything goes.

vectorVll

vectorVll #4 · March 5th · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

Rarity stomped her hoof. "ENOUGH!" She yelled. "You three will stay here and you will earn every bit back the same way that I earned it. Bits don't grow on trees if you haven't noticed. So you will stay here until I pick you up this time tomorrow, understood? Now pony up, Shabby here will show you where to clean up before you begin." The girls looked bepuzzled at her. "To begin what Miss Rarity?" Apple Bloom queried. Rarity turned for the door with a wide grin as she left closing the front door she stopped for a second. "Oh I'd like to be the first to say this to the three of you…welcome to marehood." She laughed wickedly, slamming the heavy door behind her.

This raises so many questions. The first one like magic exists. It can't get rid of paint.

And if you're earning money this way why even open the boutique

Ms Rarity

Ms Rarity #5 · March 5th · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Hey darling!

I know the laws of the Ponyverse, for I was there when it was written.
However this story in general is just a bit porn to switch your mind off and get your rocks off to.
Think of it as a porn movie where the plumber comes to fix the pipes but ends up raw dogging the customer instead.

I hope you enjoyed it none the less.

vectorVll

vectorVll #6 · March 5th · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Overthinker this ignore me plus the clop what's good?

EASTON

EASTON #7 · March 10th · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

This story feels incomplete.

Ms Rarity

Ms Rarity #8 · March 10th · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Hi darling!

I do have a completed version of this story, however I decided to leave it where I did to try and make it feel more like a dramatic scene with loss of Sweetie Belle's filly innocence.

Nozimo

Nozimo #9 · March 16th · · · Chapter 1 ·

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By the end it feels hollow with the drama reached, all of a sudden the curtain just drops and the story ends without resolution or finish.

Thepervertedeye

Thepervertedeye #10 · March 17th · · · Chapter 1 ·

Reminds me of this https://www.fimfiction.net/story/360206/the-cutie-mark-crusaders-new-lives

SeashellXOXO

SeashellXOXO #11 · March 28th · · · Chapter 1 ·

Rarity stomped her hoof. "ENOUGH!" She yelled. "You three will stay here and you will earn every bit back the same way that I earned it. Bits don't grow on trees if you haven't noticed. So you will stay here until I pick you up this time tomorrow, understood? Now pony up, Shabby here will show you where to clean up before you begin." The girls looked bepuzzled at her. "To begin what Miss Rarity?" Apple Bloom queried. Rarity turned for the door with a wide grin as she left closing the front door she stopped for a second. "Oh I'd like to be the first to say this to the three of you…welcome to marehood." She laughed wickedly, slamming the heavy door behind her.

Pony up sounds like human up ;-;

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