Our Day 💞

Hearts and Hooves Day has once again arrived 💕

🦄🐴Two mares, spending one magical day together.

Now experience both sides of the same love story 💝

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Real Solaris

Real Solaris #1 · February 16th · · · My Applejack ·

I ran my fingers through her golden locks, treasuring every moment with her. But I couldn't resist the strong pull towards Applejack. I traced my hooves along her jawline and leaned in, capturing her lips in a sweet, passionate kiss.

Woah, woah, woah, woah, hold up.
Rarity got fingers? Then has hooves again two sentences later????
EH???????????????
Which one are we in, Equestria or the EQG Universe?

As we drifted off to sleep, I knew that I was the luckiest woman alive to have found someone like Applejack.

I think the term you're looking for is mare. Don't think Equis has any of those the last time I checked.

Those only two issues aside, adorable little short story. Frackin' loved it.

Ms Rarity

Ms Rarity #2 · February 16th · · · My Applejack ·

Hey darling!

Thanks for pointing that out
My spelling is set to human on my device, so as I've been editing on my way to work and not on my pc, it's unfortunately changed the wording.