• Member Since 27th Dec, 2022
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Ms Rarity


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After a bad break up with Bon Bon Lyra decides to win her back by the only way she knows how...to express herself through her music 🎶

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

I actually just listened to the song as I read along and the scene came alive in my head! :raritystarry::twilightsmile:

That was actually really cute and enjoyable, if the pacing was a little bit slower it would be better, but still. Also I would like to say that strangely, the first chapter had me feeling so strange. Which I can assure you it's a good thing.

Apart from the already said thing of the pacing the whole story was wholesome :moustache:

Keep it up :)

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Oh that's wonderful darling, thank you I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :raritystarry:

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