It had been seven years since Queen Chrysalis' invasion terminated with the obliteration of Celestia's palace and half of Canterlot. Now the Great and Powerful Leader and her allies have all but eradicated the blight of the Changelings and thrust a war-torn Equestria into a golden age of unsubdued innovation.
There's only thing that can stop them now.
WARNINGS: Indepth discussions of body horror, mental illness, various forms of elitism and racism, genocide, torture, and other various human rights violations
Created for 2023 Cyberpunk Nightmare Night Story Contest.
Chapters (1)
Excellent.
Loved that line. You could have ended it there and i'd still have loved the story.
nice...
Uh, around her horn?
Poor ol' Great & Powerful...
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Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad you liked the story. It would have been more elegant to end the story with Luna waking up, but the come-uppance of all the villains felt important too.
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Absolutely agree.
After letting this stew in the back of my exceedingly tiny mind for a while i have one further comment. Using the "tell me again what we did to..." device to frame info dumps too many times could easily fall flat, but with Trix it's believable 'cos she is (at her worst) self centred enough to literally not remember who she's condemned to death or worse.
Hoping for a sequel with a mesianic Luna leading her herd out of Nod
in conquest. (Oops, that last bit just slipped out. My bad.)