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Shadic Midnight Blitzer


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very interesting you gave him a sister. Both have no same, eh?

well, starting from the fact that the story has very sensual touches e. Reading, with that, is to my liking

Now we are presented with an interesting idea, the orgy and this door, I must say that both work well, regarding the progressive advancement of the story, I cannot say more, but both the sister and the girlfriend give indications of how big Midnight is. compared to other studs and even sex toys, which leaves it far above. so I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this, really and I really hope you don't make us wait too long like in other stories you have friend. That being said, I hope to read the next chapter soon.

11753021
What do you mean gave him a sister? Lightning exists in Lightendark and was part of Just Adore Me (before I deleted it)

11753042
Yeah, I really do hope I don't take that long to post another chapter. Thanks for the comment!

11753174
Just couldn't remember having seen her before

This is really cute and flirty and fun! I'm excited to see what kind of weird depraved stuff they get pulled into.

11753321
Thanks! Yeah I do hope to continue posting!

A fun start! Bit surprised at how openly sexual the trio is here, as I usually think of Midnight and Lightning to a lesser extent being a tad more innocent before the lewdness sets in. Also surprised Lightning seems open to incest! Figured it was something that would be worked up to.

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Well, Midnight lived a normal life unlike other timelines, and who can resist the temptation of having a Stud in the house? Midnight's parents are also active in a certain department, thus Midnight and Lightning are more open to sex.

Lightning has always teased Midnight, but ever since she mentioned about having a coltfriend, her lewdness has increased a ton. Which means openly asking Midnight if he's willing to creampie her is something she'd say, though she knew he'd say no. If she was unsure of that fact she might not had said that.

Enjoying the new OC, sexy Moonlight in the mummy costume, and always nice to see Zafira and the Dazzlings! Cool concept with the library!

The meta stuff is pretty hot and fun; and being thrust into all this wild canon without... really knowing Midnight and the rest of all this from other stories is interesting. Glad to report that your sense of fun and love of your characters still shines though.

Very appreciative on you re-publishing stories — I know the wear of feeling like you should go back to them, or having people ask — but no one being able to revisit to read them for the first time is even sadder, I think. Definitely interested in taking a look sometime!

11761990
Thank you! It was fun writing this chapter! What's your favorite part so far? The last bit of the chapter was my fav!

11761993
Yeah, those reference to the other stories are mainly for those who read them, but I guess it would be unfair for those who hadn't read them. But thank you for saying that I'm doing a good job, I was worried that after not posting anything for so long I'd become very rusty.
I guess I'll publish the rest of the stories where Midnight was mentioned. Who knows, maybe I can rewrite them and turn them into better stories? Already a friend recommended me a very interesting idea.

11762017
Probably unraveling the mummy costume?

11762025
Ah cool.
By the way, I think I will reupload all the stories, though some might be cancelled for the moment. "What Do You Mean We Can't Eat Nuts!?" Is back on but is one of the cancelled stories. But it might come back in a different form! I liked the lore that the story had in terms of how the event itself and the effects it had was described!

Nicely done! Ugh, now the old thought comes up again...

But now I wonder, given Blitzer's size and cum production, would protection even work?

11762220
Potions would probably be the best protection.

11762369
yeah, a condom would probably burst from the amount of cum.

and the silly thought, i think you can imagine what i mean

11762411
Yeah. Though given that Equestria has magic, an enchanted condom might be able to hold more cum??

11762416
maybe. there was a futa story with that idea.

11762443
yep, can link it if you want to read it

The chapter was quite interesting, and revealing at the time, as they let us know that Tagiosa is a dimensional traveler and that, for her own reasons, she chose to stay in that reality, either for comfort or simply because it seemed better to her.

Now, the concept of this curious and strange library is interesting, although I rather see it as something disastrous due to the fact that it does not exist at any point in reality, but at a midpoint between the existing universe and the multiverse, that is why chaos in the library, and I say chaos with a certain limitation, because there are even shelves for books.

Now continuing with the character interactions.

Tagiosa seems friendly and curious enough about her guests at first, even to realize that she needs company, because apparently being alone affects her sanity. Well, she acts strangely to what these young ponies are used to from someone Tagiosa's age.

It is understandable if you isolate yourself from the outside world.

On the other hand, Tagiosa's reaction upon finding out that Midnight is a Hyper Stallion is a bit... Exaggerated? which can be understood by how she reacts and at the same time explains what happened in her reality. But this also contrasts, because according to her, when reading stories where Midnight is a Hyper Stallion, then she already knows that he can control himself, especially in the story you did about NNN. Because that version of Midnight is a perfect example of how he can control the wilder side of her as a stud.

Now, another reason why she seems exaggerated to me is the fact that she wants to eradicate Midnight in the apartment, since she does not agree with her initial attitude where she gets along well with her guests. .

Which leads me to think that she has mental problems or simply what happened in her reality was too much for her or the Hyper Stallions abused her. Which would be the most optimal given her exaggerated reaction.

But this fills me with intrigue, to know what there is more to that story.

And you make it clear to us that Zafire, being a Futa, can easily handle three mermaids who feed on Lust. XD It's interesting how you use Zafire in this story and I love it.

I really hope to see what you have prepared for the next chapter, because I really liked this one a lot.

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Well, Tagiosa isn't a dimensional traveler per say, she originates from this world but decided to leave it and live in a subspace dimension that's both in between dimensions and also is still connected to the original dimension. She didn't travel to other dimensions but living in the subspace allowed her to see other dimensions thanks to her magic becoming strong enough, which then led to her making her library.

well, there is a lot of stories from multiple dimensions that the library is collecting and turning into books for Tagiosa to read, but she managed to organize that wild amount of chaos.

Yeah, she is a bit... eccentric after isolating herself for a very long time. The reason of both why she isolated herself and why she fears Hyper Stallions will be explained next time.

But think of it like this. She knows that Midnight is a Hyper Stallion in other dimensions, dimensions that don't have her lore. And yet Midnight does become extremely lustful even without the lore that she knows exists in this dimension.

So imagine combining whatever lore she knows about Hyper Stallions + Midnight always becoming lustful. Like, Midnight pulled all the Zebrican Princesses to his side in Riding In Zebrica, they love having sex with him. Imagine how chaotic it'd be if every mare became addicted to his cock?

There are indeed things she knows that will be revealed next chapter as Lightning, Moonlight, and Midnight question her.

And yeah, writing Zafire's scene was easily the best part of this chapter. Can't wait to write another cool scene of her!

11762582
I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter as soon as possible little friend.

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