Finally! Been waiting for this one!

This is an awesome story, mate!

The perfect story for Halloween.

A ghost story of the Factory, back to haunt once more...

So I take it the ghosts killed her or something. I'm not entirely good at reading clues

This story makes me laugh more than feel bad for them. Especially when I read about them getting torn up. It just reminds me of Happy Tree Friends and when they died in horrible ways. Funny stuff. I mean you cringe when you read it, but then a second later I just see one of the HTF cast and the way they usually die in over the top silly and brutal ways. Do! Do! Do! Do! Do! Do!

Rainbow factory

there is nothing new here

You know, it would take the complete dissolution of magic to thwart the factory. Did... Did Sunny just doom the world all over again?!

Your prose is somewhat reinvented. Your dialogs haven't changed since '12

Also, be careful. All this recent calcium is going to cause iron defficiency anemia, not to mention kidney stones

“You’ve been staying up late reading those horror fanfictions again, haven’t you?”

I feel called out here, lol.
I glad I finally got around to reading this one. It's always great seeing an OG brony who's still around and how their writing has matured over the years. I especially liked the ending and the implication that the factory, if not the city itself, is somehow alive. It adds a nice bit of surrealness that helps it feel different than it's predecessor.

It's good ! I wonder if there will be exploration log about scrapped factory.it must be awesome!