Stars Before Sunrise

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On the eve of Luna's first Summer Sun Celebration the sisters try and close the gap between them. Forgotten things are remembered, lost things are found, and the darkness becomes a little brighter.

Entry to the Thousand Words Story Contest II. Slice of Life category

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Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #1 · Jul 30th, 2023 · · ·

This was a pretty good story. Nice premise, with a solid execution. Good job!

Bicyclette

Bicyclette #2 · Sep 18th, 2023 · · ·

Luna's face scrunched in mild disgust. Celly? They hadn’t used that name since they were children.

aww it’s such a good nickname!

“No. It was a reunion of Celly and Lulu. Two sisters together against the world, unaware of the greatness that would soon be thrust upon them.”

aww! and that does seem more the vibe the two sisters have going forward

“My night?” Luna asked, correcting her previous guess to something more likely.

aww!

Tears burned on Luna’s cheeks as the revelation came together in her mind. She felt terrible, to think she’d taken their star away!

oof! and that does sound totally like something Luna under the influence of Nightmare Moon would do

When at last she opened her eyes she saw it, twinkling as if being lost for one thousand years had hardly been an inconvenience.
Both sisters stared at the star and knew that it was their star more than it had ever been before.

aww! the two sisters finding each other again as sisters, and the first step in healing. a heartwarming work, thank you for it!

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #3 · Sep 18th, 2023 · · ·

Lovely work. I do love seeing Luna crafting on the celestial canvas, and the sisters’ cooperation just after being reunited is a truly beautiful moment. Thank you for a great little tale of the diarchs.

TheOneAJ