Complications exist.
Celestia finds that she must overcome these in order to achieve her goal.
But discovers, perhaps, that she wants to go a little bit further.
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Strange, unknown being with cynicism and/or depression? Yep.
Odd, ice enchantement/curse? Check.
Misunderstanding followed by correction? Check.
Celestia not knowing she's in a fic? Checkity check.
Appropriate tags? Uh-huh.
Alright! Let's melt this heart of ice, shall we?
pretty great story, providing this quality keeps up then i foresee at-least 600-800 maybe more likes in your future
You've caught my interest. Please, do continue.
Beautiful chapter.
Have an upturned thumb sir/madam. And a handlebar mustache:
Now this looks interesting... And I do love me stories with human x sun butt, rare as they are. Watching.
Wow, I'm very intrigued by this. Great way of starting this off. The descriptive detail was done well and everything flowed nicely. Definitely watching this.
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This is pretty good stuff.
Hmm, Im intrigued.
Adventure!
With a weird ice guy. Ice Mage? Ice Wizard? King of Ice? Maybe, Ice King?
heheheheheh
yerp
I'd like to read more sir.
Aside from this the scarf that fluttered--
Nice second chapter.
Huh I'm liking this first chapter, o.0
I shall keep reading.
I'm anticipating the next chapter great read so far!
....Wait what?
O.K. we all know this needs to be done
3649477 Damn I was gonna say Ice ice baby!! Now it just Argh!!!!!!!
A rather abrupt change of pace, don't you think?
That was a bit of a left turn.
I wish there could have been more characterization with Tia and this mystery human.
Also make your chapters wayyyyy!... longer.
I have high hopes for this story. I'd like to see where it goes.
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When I see that, all I can think of is the scene in TNMT 2: Secret of the Ooze.
Go Ninja, Go Ninja GO!
Your writing style is...interesting. A little more formal than I'm used to on this site. Definitely a welcome change of pace, but when I read the chapters I'm not entirely sure what to feel (gloomy and closed off in my case, assuming that was your intention).
Also I do agree that the 3rd chapter was a bit surprising. Spending a little more time on a smooth transition/explanation for future "surprise events" would be helpful.
I still like the story and look forward to more. Definite fav, but thumbs will wait until more of the story is available.
He's back!
Guessing the nature of his power being purposely held back is what is keeping him cold. Either that or what he did to save Celestia had some side effect.
3657100 He said he was containing it, so all that coldness that follows him where ever he goes is currently inside of him. He probably needs to release it constantly in order not to freeze.
I do so love a confused celly.
This is more like it!
Excellent work my good (insert gender pronoun here).
you completly cut off the middle of the story... when do they even get captured? atleast put some sort of extension / cliff hanger onto the second chapter so this makes sense
Cool. Zero downs.
110 likes and 0 dislikes.
I already know dis gon be good.
Ummm, okay. How did they get there again?
The transitions ughhh, I don't even know what's happening anymore. The last thing that made sense to me was the second chapter after that, it all went confusing to me.
3659034 You fucking jinx.
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Why would you downvote a story just to make a joke about Appletank being a jinx?
That's just rude.
3660920 So now just because I stated the fact, I'm guilty of it?
Buddy, I LIKE this story. I have it faved. I don't have a reason to thumb it down; in fact, I did the opposite, ages ago when I faved it.
I don't know where you come from, but where I live, making defendants out of witnesses with no evidence is just plain rude, author
EDIT: Hi there, peanut gallery
Still not tired of thumbing down every comment of mine for all the good it does, you loser?
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Well, up until a few minutes before you commented on this story there were no dislikes, then, you make a post talking about the one dislike.
So either you checked this page fast enough that you caught it before I did, mere minutes after I had checked it as well, or you downvoted so you could make a joke.
3660948 So you automatically assume I'm the dick instead of any of the hundreds of other fimfiction users that roam this site JUST to capitalize on that kind of thing or simply downvote for no reason, much like it was done with MY stories as well. Good to know your sense of judgment is that correct in its ways
Seriously, if you're gonna keep wrongly accusing me with no conclusive evidence, I'm outta here. I got better things to do than to support an auhor that keeps giving me shit over something I didn't do.
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If you honestly didn't do anything than I apologize.
Simply understand it from my point of view please.
No downvotes, then ten minutes later there is one and someone talking about it.
I apologize if I, a random person on the internet, have somehow shamed your honor by stupidly jumping to conclusions. I'm sorry, I really am. Let's be friends.
3661066 Sure enough, my brother. Just... mind your words in the future (and not just with me), alright?
3665674
Fair enough.
This is odd...
And I can't help but like it...
Good to see you are focused on this story! I'd like to see more of it.
A human Celestia and Daring Do together on a Epic quest.....now this will be good!
Can I just say how much I enjoy your writing? Again? Cause it's good.
well... I honestly do like this but there seems to be holes in the timeline
it helps to look at it in a bigger picture
try re reading from the beginning of the story and see if you can catch those places
I don't know if it is because of time or whatever, but everything feels a bit disjointed. Probably because I keep forgetting how the plot is running.
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As do I, let's see where this goes anyway huh?
I found it humorous how this Cloud expected to escape with the knowledge it obtained only to be caught by James right after
Oh bummer. 
I wonder if James will share the capture with Celestia. It's bound to be interesting, especially if Sombra is somehow involved.
A few mistakes, but nothing story-breaking.
Maybe put a 'the' between 'held' and 'trap'?
There's a double space between 'idly' and 'as'
Her dreams were*
3824265
Fixed, thank you.
Well, your grammar is a bit off in places; but other than that, you've got a pretty interesting story here! I look forward to reading more.