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Lolxdnoobxd


An Idiot Brony with Good Story Writing Skills

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Here's what it would look like in an Alternate Universe in Equestria Girls in this Universe the Mane 6 are replaced by the Shadowbolts and Sunset and Twilight also Switch places I decided to make this story because I've seen a lot of images of these Online but not a lot of stories about them in Fimfiction so... I decided to make one!. alright, all jokes aside I hope you all enjoy this story and I'll also be focusing more on my other stories like the A.B.T.T.M Universe, and this one.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 29 )

Cool chapter, i liked that history! Will be new chapter?

Awesome beginning can wait to read more.

out of curiosity will you give sunset a big brother in the form of sunburst or give her friends siblings like their counterparts?

11578949 the first question yes the second I’ll go think about what the alternate CMC will be here

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Weird way to say it but yes there will be more I might even make a sequel which will be Rainbow Rocks

I bet most of you reading this from the prologue didn't expect me to release the Next chapter only 1 day after release! it wasn't easy but I pulled through so you guys can have a great experience reading I hope you all have a good day or night where you are from!

Comment posted by RomaTsarenko deleted May 9th, 2023

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Awesome can’t wait to see

I’m assuming for the cmc counterpart would diamond tiara, silver spoon and bans seeds. But if you are looking for alternatives how about sunny daze as sunny flare sister, silver spoon sugarcoat sister

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Hmmm that does sound a lot better than diamond tiara for sweetie belle I’ll go think about it and see if it fits in with the characters and Silver spoon is already Sugarcoat’s Sister in this Universe

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Awesome can’t wait to check it out. Of ho what do you think principal cinch as sunny flare mother?

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Ehh kinda wish to make cinch the granny smith in the universe since well not to spoil ahead but of course you know since Sci-Twi basically replaced princess twilight in the original universe I guess why not make sunset Sci-twi’s Alt i might even call er Sci-set for the same reason as Sci-twi

Also your spelling needs some work my dude because I couldn’t understand what half of it meant “Principle” Cinch and Sunny “Glare” got me confused on what it meant

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Sorry about that, my phone sometimes the auto correct and I forget to proofread

If this is the prologue then there is no need to continue this story... I mean if you are going to make an AU just to see how it goes but you use the same plotlines, dialogues and scenes then I might as well watch the movie and imagine them as Shadowbolts rather than wait for the next update of this fic.


Also the lack of using Sombra for Flash Sentry is the cherry on the top of my dissapointment.

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I Understand the criticism don’t worry I there would be some changes to the story than just recallling the movie remember this is just the prologue and chapter 1 remains mostly the same but later on in the AU movie there would be some differences to the AU and original so sorry if this disappointed you but this is only the prologue so no need to make a bug fuss about it I respect your opinions and I wish to make it better in the future :twilightsmile:


Side note: The reason I didn’t use king sombra is more of a big choice a lot of characters are swapped like Chrysalis and Cadence, Twilight and Sunset, Princess Celestial and Luna. Many more and In the Crystal empire episode I think I’d make sense for Thorax to replace King Sombra you know? Cause he does become king of the changelings in the canon series but with cadence now I think Sombra and thorax switching would make sense because Since Cadence is now the Chrysalis in this AU then Sombra would be Thorax for the AU Since It can make a dinamic for Villians to be good in this AU and for heroes to be Bad in this AU

You misspelled Sour Sweet for Fluttershy...

“Um, uh... Whew. My name's Sunset Shimmer. I-I'm new here, and... Well, I understand that Fluttershy found a crown this morning and gave it to you.”

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I was sleepy that time so I didn’t quite see but don’t worry I’ll fix it thanks for pointing it out 😁

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I also found more Mispells that I fixed thanks for pointing it out I’ll make sure to check again before posting

“Aww, man I wanted to see what she would do...”

Well too bad for them they have to wait Sorry Pinkie Pie

You know, it's funny, even though I haven't read this yet, I was beginning to imagine what it would be like if the roles between Twilight and Sunset were reversed just the other day.
And hands down, I find a story that I look forward to reading now. 😊😊🤩

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Hahaha that's funny I’d made some gags along the way to make it funnier

Cool chapter! Will be new chapter?

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When i feel. Like it…NAH im joking! Just been focusing on school lately so probably in a few months or weeks idk

I had a lot of writing this I can't wait to see you all again In Rainbow Rocks!

Will you make the Sirens friendly?

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Well I dont know what to do with the sirens right now cause I need to find people who can replace them but I think I can Replace them with Trixie’s Band and vise versa

I cannot wait for the next sections!

"Neither can I!!"

PINKIE! YOU ARE NOT NEEDED HERE!

“Tick-tock, Twilight. We haven't got all night. The portal will be closing on its own in less than an hour. So, what's your answer?”. Twilight tries to reason with Sunset to hand over the crown.

“Tick-tock, Sunset. We haven't got all night. The portal will be closing on its own in less than an hour. So, what's your answer?”. Twilight tries to reason with Sunset to hand over the crown.

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