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Up until he end, I was intrigued...
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If you want to help edit it, shoot me a PM
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Very well...
The police and the rodeo's "security" are totally pathetic in here.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
Their are tranquilizer darts for a damn reason!
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I can't believe I didn't think of the rodeo security TQ darting the bull, NGL, this fic was inspired by the scene in Family Guy where Peter gets raped by a breeding bull
This needs a lot of fleshing out, world building, and story. This just jumped from scene to scene without much between, and if you want it to be a rapey story, you have to detail something. How'd the bull get on top, how'd he have enough time to get inside her, and how long until he was forced off.
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Would you be willing to help me with that? I admit, it's bad, because I focused too much on the big parts instead of the small details, and like I said, it was based on the Family Guy scene, and I didn't build upon the scene, it was just as inconsistent as the scene itself was
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Sure thing. Pm me and we'll start a conversation.
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Oh, I seen that particular scene. That was actually funny. This one isn't.
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This wasn't supposed to be funny, I wouldn't have labeled it as Dark if it was supposed to be funny