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Darth Severus


Brony, Star Wars nut, Former Marine, BA in English, minor in creative writing, OCD and on the Autistic Spectrum

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I haven't seen anything relating to Love Hina for a long time.

Loved the anime and the flash game.

Sssooooooooooo are they gonna beat him before or after they fuck him? :pinkiecrazy:

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Probably both, and maybe even during XD

Not sure about this story, i's love hina but on PCP. and not ina good way.

I don't like it, this just abuse abse abuse and spike does nothing but take it.

wow this is promising to be a good story.

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I will admit, I was worried about Spike just accepting the abuse and not standing up. Hopefully future chapters will fix this, and please both of us. I agree, Spike taking this kind of abuse just seems so OOC to me, but I couldn't think of how to write a way where he doesn't accept it and actually fights back, at least for this chapter.

Comment posted by Ryshinki deleted Aug 29th, 2018

Thank you for updateing i really enjoy this story, thank you so much:pinkiehappy:.

Are you planning on continuing?

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I am, but I'm having a block right now for this story

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If there is a block, just remember that this story seems to be a MLP version of Love Hina--so use that as a base and then let you own charm and eccentricies work with you, and then you have a way to get that block out.. :twilightsmile:

Also, if that is somewhat of a foreshadowing, I have it very interesting that Starlight appears to be the Naru character...

This had me cracking up you can really see the mlp personality's shine through them.

I'm loving this story so far and can't wait to see where this goes.

This was a really good chapter.

This was a really warm and fun funny chapter.

Why make this rated M? A Love Hina/My Little Pony crossover sounds more fitting if it were rated T.

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Because there will be detailed sex scenes

You walk back to the tea house and give the smokes to your aunt, who says, "Thanks Spike. Now, I suppose I should tell you about our residents. First there's Starlight Glimmer. She's here for study purposes, but she's got a short temper, and she'll kick your ass if you bother her enough. Then there's Berry Punch, she's a stereotypical drunk, I don't think I've ever seen her sober to be honest. Still, if she's drunk enough, she'll kick your ass. Next, Screwball. She's in junior high, but she's a complete psycho, and she'll kick your ass for absolutely no reason if she's bored. Then we've got Ember. She's studying martial arts, but she's got a bit of a drug problem, and she's even more short tempered that Starlight, and if you annoy her, she'll kick your ass before you have a chance to say sorry. Rarity basically told her parents to go fuck themselves cause she didn't want to move. She's a nice girl, and she enjoys designing clothing, but don't for a second think she won't kick your ass if you cross her. Derpy Hooves on the other hand is more likely to kick her own ass, given how clumsy she is, but she'll kick your ass. Trixie is our newest resident, and she's some sort of magician. She's good at what she does in magic, and she can easily kick your ass without even touching you. And finally there's Tempest. She's an exchange student from Ferghana. I can't tell you much about her, other than the fact that she takes a sick, twisted pleasure in kicking people's asses. Basically, every girl here will have a reason to want to kick your ass at some point. Other than that, all you really need to know is how to do basic math to collect rent, and I'll take care of the upkeep."

What is with this masochist fetish within old anime shows and in here!?


They don't seem any different or any better than Spike's own abusive and bad parents. F****** hypocrites, all of them! :facehoof:


Personally, they won't last seconds against the likes of me. Since I know freaking Mortal Kombat and Injustice.

Or that I have many selected powers, weapons, and armors of the Doom Slayer/Doom Marine, BJ Blazkowicz, Kratos, Agent 47, John Wick, Robert McCall/Equalizer, GTA Protagonists, CoD weapons, Master Chief/Blue Team, Noble Team, Red Team, and other Spartans combined, DBZ/DB GT/DB Super GoD's Hakai energy, Ace Combat/Project Wingman Jets/Planes and Super weapons. And secretly a alternate version of the God-Emperor of Mankind from Warhammer 40K. Etc..

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To be fair, this was more inspired by the Love Hina dating sim game, and that paragraph is essentially in the game, your aunt who works at the hotel telling you about the tenants, who are all hot girls who know how to kick ass

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I doubt you, me, or anybody else want to get your/our own ass kicked by them, unless you're into that mess up fetish. :applejackconfused:

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It's less of a kink and more of a warning not to piss them off

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What if you're a badass yourself that can definitely defend yourself. I'm not saying you have to start a fight with all these girls. But at least you're not a freaking wimp or anything.


Would be cool to have a male protagonist that doesn't have a weak spine, that can actually defend themselves. And dates other badass girls too.

Although those girls could at least heavily tone down the freaking hostility? Otherwise, they would constantly get arrested for assault irl.

Or they piss off the wrong person.

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Yes, despite the first chapter having Spike act out of character when his mother is abusing him, he knows how to fight back

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