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SquiggelSquirrel


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“You lot, go get us some more tables, and rope. We've got a whole school full of girls to impregnate, here.”

The sirens are sure going to be busy for a while :twilightoops::pinkiecrazy:

Anyway, I liked the concept of them being some kind of spirits that needed actual, flesh-and-blood vessels to host their souls.

Also, I might be mistaken, but the "gore" tag is unwarranted here; I haven't noticed anything at least.

7752356 Agreed, "gore" tag removed.
For some reason, I had it in my head that any kind of rape implied/required the gore tag, but re-reading the site guides that doesn't appear to be the case.

Well written and, although not exactly my thing, hits a lot of nice marks.

Only one typo spotted, which is a good effort.

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Writing beneath me, Adagio Dazzle

Writhing beneath me, Adagio Dazzle

Huh, I never thought about the possibility of the Dazzlings using host bodies.

That's an idea with a lot of potential.

This was sad I almost want to know of the life that was once lived it was beautiful in it's own way in and I'm not even talking about the clop so it's going to the bucket list bookcase

And now it’s time for a better ending because end my life

Just when the dazzlings had lost all hope Pickle Rick came and untied them, then he proceeded to go inside their vagina’s and remove the eggs.

Afterwards Pickle Rick defeated Adagios siren form using his thing that shoots screws and the dazzlings human forms thank him

Then they use him as a dildo because they all had enjoyed the pleasure

K I’m done

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I’m Pickle Rickkkkkkk!

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Do you mind if I use the idea of the Sirens needing human hosts in a future story? It’s a really neat idea and one I haven’t seen much of.

It was an odd one, but a lot of fun.

would you do one with sunset shimmer where if i had won ?, an alternative ending of equestria girls where sunset if i manage to get the crown back use the mind control spell to control the humans: pinkie pie, fluttershy, rainbow dash, rarity and applejack even to spike transforming him into a kind of lycanthrope anthro under his mind control too
thus defeating twilight and assuring his victory and as an example of this converting all the students and teachers (except for the human versions of the mane six) as he did with snip and snails where they celebrated the victory of the queen sunset wrath with a party basically like adazzle dazzle's body minus the part of oviposition if not more than anything corruption and human mane six are aware while they are corrupted (like enjoyment for sunset for almost ruining their plans) so for 30 moons the enough time to dominate the earth and have a whole army ready when the portal turns open and conquer equestria

I don't know why nobody came up with that? It is quite good and at the same time very difficult to find.

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