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Ohh noo the gods are watching lol
Well, this was a very interesting chapter to say the least. I can't wait to see more. Stay safe and keep up the great work.
Thanks for the chapter!
I must say it was a chapter full of emotions, the fight against the hydra was very good not to mention that we had a sample of Jacky's powers with his absurd physical strength and apparently he also has the magic of the earth ponies, his introduction to Ponyville it went very well and as always Angel Bunny will start off being unbearable, but I'm sure he will get better, and the welcome party a classic Pinkie that can never be missing and that was very positive from Jacky since he didn't interact with her with the inhabitants, as he has also met some very important figures, in this case Celestia, Lyra, Bon Bon, Gabby, Vinyl and Octavia, I did not expect that they would all be presented in the same chapter. Also the attacking Sunset caught me, already kissed Jacky. And something that took me by surprise Applejack's parents, in this case mothers, alive and young with Grandma Smith also young! DragonSage just blows me away.
And Celestia had a good idea, warning the other world leaders about Jacky soon to avoid misunderstandings and place him as an endangered species so that no harm would be done to him, smart of her.
The goddesses are seeing everything as a show, I confess I already expected it, but Pandora knowing an ancestor of Jacky and having an agreement with him took me by surprise, but it gave a great reason for him to be brought into this world.
I’m glad you like the chapter it took me a while but I got it done and thank you for your wonderful comment.
Thanks for the update!
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About that titbit.
Author, I'm still a little confused and annoyed that Celestia thinks that the other world leaders think Jackie of all people as a "threat"? Seriously, he just got here!?
How can he be a "threat" to them? Sure, he got OP powers bestowed upon him by the goddesses. But it's not like he is violent or anything.
He doesn't even own a gun?
Not to mention that he is also the ONLY male to a female society/world.
I'm tempted that the world leaders would actually want a "piece of him", instead of seeing him as a "threat"?
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Well I you are right but you forget Jacky is still an alien in their world it’s just like marstian manhunter come to earth and was labeled as a threat because he was from a different world an looked different but Jacky is a variant in a female world that bring questions to the believes and natural order in Eques even to some of those that are stuck in the old ways.
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If that surprised you then wait for the next chapter a little spoiler for you I’m gonna show the world leaders reserve the letters from celestia an there are a view that are a view being that are not in the my little pony series but it will surprise you an who knows I might add even more to the story that will surprise you.
Edit: I got tons of things to say to each paragraph I have chosen in here. And I will finish it eventually. I'm finally done.
That's the CMC!? Damn! You gave them a very nice "upgrade" to their mature bodies.
I forgot or didn't realize that he has become very tall too with his new body. So he is the same height as Celestia!? ( 8.9 feet tall. Damn!!! )
P.S. Celestia definitely has the biggest milk tanks.
"Exhausted"? I hope you're over exaggerating.
Because, he took down that Hydra in just a couple of seconds!? I doubt he broke a sweat from that.
And if I remember correctly in the examination, didn't you say that his stamina/endurance is on par or probably surpassed with Applejack's?
So I highly doubt he is "tired"?
I really don't like this cliche with the townsfolk being too easily scared by a new person, and judge him before they know the guy. Don't like this "monster" BS.
I'm glad that Twilight help him out here.
Classic Ponyville shenanigans.
Firstly; The parents are still alive, the "father" is also a mare, and Granny is young and hot again.
And Two; did Twilight just unintentionally make a spell for eternal youth!!?? Why is she not making this such a big deal put of it? This is a life-changing breakthrough!!!
And she has the audacity to once want to change them back to their old wrinkly shelves?
Not cool, Twilight.
And Three; I know it is rude to ask a woman's age. But I have a feeling that Jackie will eventually found out about all their ages in a polite manner later on. Plus, we do need to figure out how long do Ponykind/Marekind and other races live, compared to humanity?
I highly doubt that. Being "friends" with that jerk rabbit?
"Not do it again". Bullcrap!
We all know you like that. And I have a feeling that this won't be the last time this happens.
"Running"? Really? You're fine taking out a gigantic and monsters Hydra. But can't handle some fangirl stuff from Lyra?
"Harms Way", "reckless"? He got powers now, very powerful ones at that. He AIN'T defenseless nor is he a weakling.
Aren't you all being a bit overprotective? There was no dang "risk" when he quite easily took down that dang Hydra in a couple of freaking seconds!?
And if you all remember that if he didn't do anything, Fluttershy and Rarity would have died!!!
And this is coming from a goddess of the caribou of all things? I know that this is a all-female world. But I hope that there is no Fall of Equestria scenario, but is in twisted reverse with a female "Queen" Dainn!?
Egyptian jackals!? Nice~!
One; Hell yeah! He will be the first human male GOD!!!!! 👍
And Two; why name the goddess/mother of Kirins with familiar Hippogriff/Seapony character; Silverstream?
I'm totally confused?
So what you're saying is is that somehow, someway. A normal/regular/mortal human guy "saved" a literal goddess from a different world?
That makes no dang sense!? Isn't she a very powerful goddess, why does she need "saving" from a mortal/human guy that has no powers whatsoever?
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Well you found a view errors in the story but I’ll try to fix those once I find some editors that will help me.
The caribou are different in this world so there won’t be no fall of equestria.
You may also know I couldn’t think of a name for a kirin goddess because I know some of their names are based on weather or seasons and I just made it as I went along.
And for pandoras predicament traveling throw world could be exhausting it left here drained her of her powers an a weaken state only Jacky’s ancestor help her in her time of need.
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Why do you sound like it's a bad thing? Aren't they the ones that summoned him, fixed his broken body, give him a very cool upgrade to his new body, and vast powers too?
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Well he wasn’t expecting to be sent to a new world an given a new body and have these abilities but yet they were thrusted upon him instantly by accident and the other goddesses didn’t bring him to equestria it was pandora for she was settling a debt to Jacky’s ancestor that help here in her time of need and galaxia convince the other to help him and give him these abilities to be the a new wonder in their world an they want to see what comes next from their little experiment.
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That also means something is expected or can be taken at any time
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A suggested name for the goddess Kirin: Winter Snow.
So it keeps the naming pattern and I don't remember any mlp character with that name, not that I mind if it stays Silverstream since it looks like the goddesses won't have as constant appearances as the Young six.
I hope it helps!😁
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Love it why didn’t I think of that name I’m a idiot I’ll try an change the name later.
This is a really good story.
Yeah, boners don't work that way. They happen or they don't. You don't "fight it" nor is it an "urge".