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This was a fun read, keep it up.
I'm super curious to know who the narrator/masseuse was
Oh shit, I can't read this. Hey everybody, I can't read this. Hey! Hey! Hey I can't read this!
Interesting story! I couldn't get myself to be aroused by the adventures in hypnosis, but the writing itself is still very well done. I enjoyed the delivery of the countdown leading up to orgasm, but I personally would've written the act itself a bit more elegantly than "his balls squeezed and a fat rope of cum burst forth from his dick"
To be a little more specific, the actual hypnosis didn't get to me partly because it sounds like a bit of a stretch to become that enthralled and impressionable just by observing the watch, but I have no idea how the process works in real life, so don't pay me too much attention. It was still fun to read, and I definitely plan to check out more of your stories in the future.
The madlad actually did it! Peer pressure is always the right answer, it seems.
It was an entertaining read, and I chuckled at "his balls squeezed and a fat rope of cum burst forth from his dick" line, no offence to the author.
Very enjoyable, and a definete break from the author's other stories.
Neat! I have no idea if hypnosis is actually your kink or if you were solely peer pressured into doing this (I hope not lmao) but I enjoyed it, at the least.
It's nice to see a mysterious character who amazingly doesn't turn out to be evil haha. I think the story did a pretty good job feeling like a nice blend of both classic hypnofic and something new. The hypnosis process itself was somewhat speedran, I think, but it made for some nice quick smut. Enjoyed the hypnotic headspace as well. The ethereal hooves are quite similar to something I've pondered, and also remind me strongly of the "helping hands" stuff if you're familiar with that whatsoever lol. And I think Sunburst's awkward yearning was pretty well portrayed! Thanks for writing it.
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I haven't ever really tried the lewd files, but I like hypno as a non-sexual experience, so I wasn't particularly hard to con into this.
I guess that is more on my writing ability, haha. At least it didn't ruin your immersion.
Oh, this is almost entirely based on that, yes. I got an extremely strong reaction out of that file and I figured I'd try to put that into story form, if I was already writing something like this.
Thanks for the comment and I'm glad you liked it!