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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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Let me be the first to say:

Nice.

Please tag as gay or homosexual! I won't downvote or anything, but it would have been a nice avoidance!

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Oops, sorry for the confusion! Given how most of my stories are gay-based ships, I kinda figured most of my readers would get the hint from seeing my name related to a Sunburst solo story. Still, I added the note to avoid any further complications.

Also, your stories are fantastic!~

are you making fun of yourself in this story? then you're gonna like what i'm gonna do to you in one of my fics…please don't worry it's nothing terrible! just a reference in a song parody;) wow sunburst is kinky0.0

Wow. Sunburst is one lucky stallion to have the Princess of Love looking after him like that.

Good stuff.

mapu #6 · Jun 24th, 2018 · · 1 ·

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Assuming that all your readers are familiar with your prievius work is a bad idea. Especially if someone is searching by tags. I really must emphasize the importance of proper tagging to avoid backlash, and attract your preferred audience.

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Yes, I'm aware of that. I just meant that since this is a story with a single stallion doing lewd stuff by himself, I think it's fairly clear it isn't exactly heterosexual content.

Por que todos se estan quejando? El significado de un regalo es una sorpresa, o tal vez no les gusta la sorpresas?

First off, I'm a strait guy and I don't click on Gay Tagged stories, but mistakes do happen and I find myself reading a story like this one. Ill be honest, sometimes Ill be pleasantly surprised. This story is a great example. Its well written, has great flow and kept me really interested all the way through.

(And Oh Boy, do I have theories about that toy. I was kind of disappointed that I'll never know if I was right or wrong. Oh well, such is life. )

Great job to the Author.

The Monk

This was a nice read, always love Sunbirst clop in it.

Well, I really liked the story. I think the plot was an interesting idea, and I love the way you built up Sunburst's character. I actually skipped reading a few words here and there because the pace was too slow for me to actually feel immersed within the story. However, making it slower paced is truly smart because this is Sunburst's first time having sex. He's going to be nervous and awkward about it. I also liked how you picked up the pace at the end, when things got heated and Sunburst didn't have a chance to be slow and steady about things.

Overall, you have written an excellent story in my opinion.

I vote that a sequel chapter and or story needs to be made pronto!

"terrible drake" is that a bad-dragon reference?

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Por que todos se estan quejando? El significado de un regalo es una sorpresa, o tal vez no les gusta la sorpresas?

Translation:

Why are all complaining? The meaning of a gift is a surprise, or maybe you do not like surprises?

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Were ponies complaining?

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All I did was translate what you said.

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Don't get me wrong, I thought ponies were complaining that it was in Spanish, that's why I have 2 dislikes, and I thought that why you translated it.

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Which is why I gave you a like and translated it into English, to make it clear what you mean. I honestly thought I was helping out.

Worthwhile and pleasantly awkward read .)

I want one.

Really well written -- howzabout some more? :pinkiehappy:

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Literally no one cares that you're straight, it's completely irrelevant

Comment posted by coduss deleted Nov 25th, 2018
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