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Steel Quill
A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!
Steel Quill
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I must read.
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I certainly welcome it!
This is one of those rare stories where it's oddly hard to find anything to say about it. The continuation was welcome, the sex was delightfully raunchy, the relationship was, and is, still surprising and works surprisingly well... but something about it feels incomplete. This story might not be long enough for the characters' journeys within it.
The growth idea is pretty clever, it makes Celestia feel like any other mare when said mare is attracted to a prime example of the opposite sex. I have a feeling that Celestia will be doing this more often from now on as long as Sunburst is cool with it.
Cougarlestia is BEST Celestia. That is all.
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I can understand that reaction. In a way, it is a rather abrupt story, like a snapshot into their lives in the aftermath of the first story. But that was my intention: I wanted to write something for fun and entertainment, but nothing that would be really heavy or take time to get into. The real story behind this one is the prequel. In there, I go through much more development and work for these two to come together. I do appreciate you taking the time to read it, however, and I am glad you enjoyed it.
Hot damn, this was a fantastic read
! Loved just about everything in it; it hit so many of my kinks. I especially loved the size difference angle, as well as the transformation bit at the end there (I can totally see them using that new form for some roleplay later on, like some princess offering herself as the foreign king's bride to bring peace to their lands, or something
). While I wasn't expecting a sequel for this crackship to begin with, I'm now more than eager to see if there will be more between these two! Keep it up, man!
P.S. Also noticed and loved the couple of nods to your Flash Magnus story (the librarian outfit, and the spanking response
).
Well this had been a fun read, I hope this leads to another story sequel.
A lovely continuation. Their chemistry is still adorable and Celestia still got them ‘ara, ara~’ vibes. Yummy!
Well, good thing Cady didn't mind!
Though Shining Armor may never be the same after next Saturday!
Fun way to start the new year indeed, heh. Love the ongoing couple dynamic we have with these two
though I wish the big-Sunburst thing was for the entire fic 
Stashed and liked.
Lewds aside, I kinda want to see a multi-chapter spin-off now with these two as they explore their relationship outside a M-rated manner.
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Not a bad thought! It'd probably be like, snippets of dating, real life, etc.
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Okay, read this. Twice, actually, first when it came out, then again as a pair with the original just now. This is going to be 80% a review of story 2, but story 1 will get some attention as well.
Gonna have to forgive me, I haven't written a real review of anything in years, so I'll use lists instead of my infamous paragraphs.
Positives:
1. Celburst is something I never knew I needed butt now I can't get enough of.
2. The interactions are genuine, fun, and natural; they make a great couple.
3. The sex is H-O-T, full of back and forth, interplay, some banter, and enough vivid imagery to fill a horsecock.
4. You made 6000 words of continuous sex feel exciting the whole way through.
5. The balance of Celestia's more old and serious side with her playful underlying personality was handled well.
6. The prose is very well crafted and maintains a great flow with varied constructions, sentences, and paragraphs.
7. The evolution of the relationship is nicely done, the first fic does not feel like a rush to get Tab A into Slot B.
8. Fic 2 is a nice sequel / side story that does everything is sets out to quite nicely.
Negatives:
1. If you aren't into chubby / big ass fetishism, the first story will have much less appeal.
2. The second fic is pretty much just porn gratiae pornis.
3. Both fics definitely needed more grammatical polishing. I again offer my services.
4. Both fics, which very nice, don't have much meat for analysis.
5. The first story is short on drama; until the foreplay starts, it is somewhat boring.
6. I know you can write even better plot with a plot.
In short, very nice quick romance and some lavish, high quality porn. I wish I had more to say about it.
K93
Sequel? Good story with funny moments 😂
WOW!!!!!!!!! THE GROWTH SPELL WAS WELL-PLAYED !!!!