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Banshee531


I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry Chronicles: Evil's Uprising


Years ago, a group of ponies came together to defeat a great evil. Now, these ponies have become the greatest heroes Equestria has ever known and have faced threats and danger that most can only dream about. Their lives have changed so much since that night, and now they must prepare for their new roles as leaders of Equestria. The Princess, the knight, the farmer, the athlete, the dressmaker, the baker and the animal lover. Together with their friends, they will work to keep Equestria safe for the next generation.

But unbeknownst to them, a dark force has amassed that wishes to destroy everything they hold dear. And as a returning evil also emerges, it will become a threat greater than any other seen before. The end of Equestria may be nigh, unless our heroes call upon the Magic of Friendship one final time.

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So, here we are at season 9. Quite a journey it has been. I looking forward to seeing how it all plays out.

a good lesson about accepting things come and go but as long as the memories are remembered they live on

Here we are! The final chapter of Flash Sentry Chronicles! We are at the endgame!

I notices a lot of dislikes in this story… I bet it must be those trolls. :ajbemused:

I only got one highlights since I recently got my 3 wisdom teeth removes on this Monday and doesn't help Ace and Mira talking about wisdom because I am going to be in a lot of pain in this week. :ajbemused:

Mira gasped as she sat up, glancing around to see she was back in her new room at Aurarora. She shook her head at this, only for her door to slam open as Ace ran in, "Mira!" She turned to him, "Did you just have a dream about the Tree of Harmony?!"

"I did," Mira nodded, "And I don't think it was a dream."

Before she could say anything else, Springer walked into the room looking half asleep. "What the heck are you two doing up so early?"

Hey Springer! Good to see you back.

I just have one question: are you going to do an upgrade on the canon "Sweet and Smokey" episode? Because I swear that was the worst of that entire season. At least I don't like it. And I'm sure you can make a version a hundred times better. I just hope you plan on making one. If not, it doesn't matter. It is your story and you decide. Great job and best of luck.

Wow, I can’t believe it but we’re finally here, the final season :fluttershysad:
I’m sad that the series is coming to an end, but I’m also excited to see what banshee has in store for us. I’m especially hoping we get to see his version of “Dragon Dropped”. Yes I’m a Spike x Gabby shipper and I kinda wanna see Rarity be an overprotective big sister to Spike :twilightsmile:

the final season was a fun run but can't wait for how this goes.

And here we are officially on the final season of the show, it has been quite the ride till now! :fluttercry:
Love how the Young 8 came together to bring the Clubhouse of Harmony to life, although I think the jackhowl pair may have hanged out too much with Pinkie with what they pulled here! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

Looking forward to see what other changes you bring to S9 here Banshee, for now let's look at today's Highlights! :

"YAHOOOOO!" He cheered as he did several midair loop-the-loops on the bike. "Hahaa!" However, the fun wouldn't last forever. In that moment, the rocket sputtered out, all power now gone.

"Huh?" He looked down at the dashboard, "Out of gas?" The bike began to fall at this, Ace letting out a scream, the young jakhowl barely managing to leap off his bike before it slammed into the earth. An explosion came next, Ace hitting the dirt, rolling a good ten feet before coming to a stop. He moaned as he picked himself up, holding his head as he stood. "Ow..."

"HELP!" yelled a voice, making him spin around to see Mira...a whole bunch of Miras, who were marching through the town, carrying one of them, "But I'm the real one!" She cried, trying to escape as they held her.

"Mira!" Ace quickly formed a Bone Breaker and charged, using it to pole vault over the Mira clones so he could grab the real one. He pulled her away, both landing as the clones turned to glare at them. "Run!" Ace exclaimed, the pair rushing down a street as the clones chased after them. And as this happened, they cut a corner, evading the clones' sight before Mira pulled Ace into a gap between two houses. The clones passed them at this, both sighing in relief.

Was wondering what the Jackhowl duo would dream about, very interesting! :rainbowhuh:

"More like a nightmare!" Gallus added as Mira glanced around for any sign of Luna.

"I know, right?" Sandbar looked up at the skyscraper-sized cupcake holder. "How do I pick just one? They all look so good!" The others frowned, unable to believe he was worrying about that while they had had to face horrible visions.

"That's your version of a bad dream?" Smolder yelped.

"You have been way to sheltered," Ace groaned.

I second that! :ajbemused:

They expected Twilight to tell them to get to the tree, only for her to say, "But the Tree couldn't have called you! It's gone! Shroudheart destroyed it!"

"Oh no!" Ocellus gasped, the others doing the same, Ace full-on fainting as the changeling added, "Who's Shroudheart?"

Spike let out a long sigh at this, "He's an evil pegasus villain who uses shadow magic. Don't worry about it, its a super long story." The dragon turned to the Twilight, "You know, maybe next time you should ease in with those truth bombs."

"W-w-what about the Elements of Harmony?" Sandbar asked, Twilight shaking her head.

"Those are gone, too."

"Wait," Spike scratched his head, "Sandbar, you live in Ponyville. Weren't you here when Shroudheart took over the town and turned everypony into mindless slaves?"

"What?!" Mira yelped, Ace fainting again after just getting up. "When the heck did this all happen? The three of us move away and our hometown gets conquered?!"

Spike *It was a crazy weekend to be honest!* :moustache:

"Wait!" he yelped, "That's...not part of the tour!" They stepped up to the curtains, as they slowly moved open to reveal something they would see in Madam Pinkie's fortune telling tent. A small round table was in the middle, with Ace and Mira sitting behind it on pillows.

"Welcome!" Ace cheered, "To the cave of wisdom!"

"I thought this was the cave of harmony?" One of the mare's asked as they sat down in front of the pair.

"Have you come seeking answers to the questions and problems of your life?" Mira chimed in, "We were chosen by the Tree of Harmony to help ponies in need." The mares looked impressed by this. "Please, tell us what troubles you?"

"Um?" The mares looked at one another before glancing back, "Well, I've been trying to decide where my career should go. I was offered the chance to study under a great teacher, but it would mean leaving my home for a couple of years. What should I do?"

Ace and Mira looked like they were about to answer, but stopped themselves and shared a look. "One moment," Mira asked before the pair turned away from them. The ponies tried to listen, as the jakhowls seemed to argue about going or staying, only for Gallus to fly in.

"Don't listen to them. They have no idea what they're talking about." He pulled them away and shut the curtain right as the pair turned back to the duo.

"You should-" Ace stopped as he saw that the ponies were gone, making them both sigh as they heard more movement outside. The two pulled on some cords, allowing the curtains to open and show Silverstream painting parts of the cave.

Please you 2, don't channel the pink one! :pinkiecrazy:

"Yona have idea." She stepped out of the cave and returned a few moments later, dragging a large wooden cart full of something they didn't think they'd ever see again.

"The Tree!" Ocellus gasped, marveling at the crystal chunks inside the wagon. "Where did you find it?!"

"Oh, I didn't move it too far." Sandbar chimed in, only to for the others to give him a look that screamed 'seriously'. "It was kinda heavy."

"And you're just mentioning this now?" Gallus yelped as Sandbar scratched the back of his head sheepishly.

Damn it Sandy!!! :facehoof:

Twilight let this information sink in, then smiled as she looked up at the structure. "The Tree has always been good at surprises." She flew up to get a better look. "When Starswirl planted the Tree's seed, he didn't even know what it would grow into. I guess the Tree is still alive, changing and adapting to be whatever Equestria needs."

Gallus flew up to her, "A cool place to hang out?"

Twilight giggled and flew down. "Something tells me this is more than that. It seems the Elements of Harmony may still be with us in their own way."

Spike let out a sigh of relief, "That's actually really reassuring."

"You're telling me," Mira added, "Do you think this means the Friendship Map still works? I've been wondering about that ever since I learned what happened."

That's actually a very good question, hopefully yes??? :applejackunsure:

Great start here Banshee, looking forward to the next one! :twilightsmile:

A great way to start off the final season. I can't wait to see what happens next. As for highlights:

In the School of Friendship, Spike the Pyro Dragon was using his Mystic Dragon Magic to clean. Each of his fingers was letting out a stream of fire, each forming its own fiery claw on the end. The claws had a broom or cloth, which he was using to clean the floors, windows and walls. Once he was sure the job was done, he put the cleaning instruments over in the corner and looked down at the floor. A smirk was on his lips as he could see his own reflection in it. "Lookin' good." He gave himself a wink, only for a flash of purple to suddenly appear in front of him.

Show off :moustache::twilightangry2:

"What?!" Twilight shook her head, "no!" It was then that Spike saw a box floating behind her, the alicorn holding it up and pulling out a bunch of orange bens. "We only have twenty highlighters! And they're all orange! How will everyone color-code their notes?!" She shoved one of the highlighters into his face, knocking him down.

I just realized you meant to say "pens" instead of "bens" lol:rainbowlaugh:

"What?!" Mira yelped, Ace fainting again after just getting up. "When the heck did this all happen? The three of us move away and our hometown gets conquered?!"

It's Equestria what do you expect:ajbemused:

Mira nodded. "A while back, I heard somepony talking about turning the place into their own private home. They also said something about having a skull or something up on the top of it."

Why does this sound familiar? :rainbowhuh:

"Alright, who wasn't wishing hard enough?

:ajsleepy: *slowly raises hand*

Ace laughed at this, "That might be the cutest rock ever."

Agreed:twilightsmile:

Mira rolled her eyes as Twilight and Thorax flew into the cave. "There you are!" The changeling king glared at her, "The hive has been worried sick! Why did you leave without telling us? The last time you and your friends did that, it almost brought our kingdoms to war!"

It would've been funny if Thorax was exasted from raising his new kids just like Shining Armor was when raising Flurry. Would've been a great place for a "Now I know what Shining Armor went through."

Ace and Mira both bowed to their opponents at this, then to Mirage, who nodded with pride. She turned to Springer and nodded, the jakhowl leader smiling as he signed their permission slips.

Aww what a cute family:pinkiehappy:

Yona was right. Nothing lasts forever, but even if something is lost that didn't mean it couldn't help birth something new. And as long as that understanding was remembered, Equestria would always have something to help it stay strong.

:raritywink:

Alright, after a long journey the final season is here at last! It is hard to believe this has been going on ever since you joined this site, over 6 years.

Felt a little odd not having Flash appear in the first chapter, but this was fun seeing the pups side of things while trying to honor the Tree of Harmony.

Before she could say anything else, Springer walked into the room looking half asleep. "What the heck are you two doing up so early?"

"Springer!" Mira jumped up, "Is the new Rune Gate ready?!"

Springer blinked at her, "Uh...yeah. Why?"

"Can you please activate it for us? We need to get to Ponyville! The Tree of Harmony needs us!"

Springer tilted his head at this, only to let out a long yawn, "Its too early for this. Follow me."

It defiantly feels like Springer is acting like a dad to the two of them.

I will tell you that I admire you a lot as a writer. You spent so many years writing these amazing stories, finding a way to make them cooler with each sequel. You have a patience and dedication that only a true professional writer can have. And that is you. I write too, but I don't think I'll be able to achieve what you did: continue, despite your other obligations or difficulties. I hope that one day you will receive a well-deserved position as a great writer for some company, or something similar. Good luck and keep writing with conviction.

Man, where did these dislikes even come from? This has way more than the other stories.

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Probably just a few petty trolls with a grudge against Flash, Season 9, or Banshee's successful series. I would probably even bet some of them are bots or something. It is clear none of them matter though, since all the comments are positive and all the likes from real readers and fans outnumber them anyway.

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But the Jokes on them my friends for this fan fic are getting more likes than dislikes. So to them 😝. By the way great Jon Banshee and Congrats 👏!

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Yes, I admit that it is strange, I recently published a new story and it was full of dislikes at the time of its premiere, of course people are free to express whether they like it or not, but even so I think it is strange, I might suspect that it is bots, cause the comments are all good.

Smolder growled. "I wish that Shroudheart was still around so we could teach him a lesson!"

Dang, girl! Don't jinx it. :facehoof:

Ace and Mira both bowed to their opponents at this, then to Mirage, who nodded with pride. She turned to Springer and nodded, the jakhowl leader smiling as he signed their permission slips.

This is the Way. Whoops, wrong universe.

I don't have much to add. Aside from the pups, it's not too different from canon. I still feel as though the pups are straddling this weird line between the Young Six and the twins. I guess you can make the same argument regarding Flash and Springer with the Knights and the Mane cast, but for some reason, it's not as odd with Flash and Springer. :applejackunsure:

this feels like a good way to start what is to be the final one as its about accepting things start and end these stories been fun but now its startig to come to a end and need to get ready to say good bye even if its months away

Well, I am glad Heart no longer moped about Cozy's betrayal and focus on moving on with his life while putting Cozy behind.

And of course, Armalum won't stop until he avenges his master's death… through, what he did to the thieves are rather ominous. :twilightoops:

Here's highlights

The Rune Gate lit up before a pair of ponies stepped through the pillar of light. It was Ruby Scarlet and Jaden Chalice, the pair having saddlebags on their back. And as they stepped out of the gate, they saw Flash, Heart and Twilight waiting for them with the males carrying their own bags.

Ruby and Jaden are here! And they are the one that Heart get along with.

"You okay?" Heart didn't respond, only for the Rune Gate to activate again. This time, three individuals walked out into the room. First Aid, Heather Bloom, and too Heart and Jaden's surprise, the young filly known Asclepia, also known as Raisins.

Oh… I means it make sense to bring First and Heather for a camping trip but I didn't expect to see Raisins again.

"What are you even doing here?" Jaden added, "Ruby said this was a camping trip for knights and their apprentices." Raisins smirked, making the pair's eyes go wide. "No way."

"Asclepia has a pretty impressive knowledge of medical magic," First declared, "She has also been studying under Heather to improve her botanist skills."

"So, you're both taking her on as your apprentice?" Ruby asked, the pair nodding. "Interesting. I've never heard of two knights training one pony. But I guess there's no rule against it."

:pinkiegasp: RAISINS IS OFFICIALLY APPRENTICE OF ROYAL KNIGHTS?!?!?!

Welcome to the apprentice club, Raisins! Joins Heart, Jaden and Gallus! :pinkiehappy:

"What?" Jaden asked, "It's a catchy song. Don't be such a grumpy gus." He started singing out loud, but Heart remained stoic, Jaden then stopping as he turned back to Heart, "Alright then. If you really wanna play hardball, I'll just use the song nopony can resist singing along to." Heart raised an eyebrow as Jaden cleared his throat. "Lollipop, lollipop. Oh, lolly, lolly, lolly. Lollipop, lollipop. Oh lolly, lolly, lolly-"

He stopped singing and waited, as Heart's face started to twitch before yelling, "Lollipop!" Jaden laughed at this before he started singing again, Heart singing with him, "Lollipop, lollipop. Oh, lolly, lolly, lolly. Lollipop!" The pair made a popping sound with their hooves and mouth. "See?" Jaden saw Heart was now smiling, "That wasn't so bad now, was it?"

"Shut up," Heart tried to stop smiling, but was having a hard time not smirking. Jaden continued singing and now, Heart couldn't fight against it. The pair sang every song they knew as they gathered the last of the dry twigs they would need before heading back. And when they got there, they saw the older ponies had the site set up. There was one tent for Flash and Heart, one for Jaden and First and a larger one for Ruby, Heather and Raisins.

Despite what he went through, it's nice to see Heart having fun singing Lollipop song with Jaden… even through it's only temporarily.

"Heart," Raisins poked him with her stick, "I think it's cooked." Heart glared at her before chomping into his blackened marshmallow. "Would you lighten up? You're being all moody."

"Yeah," Jaden nodded, "Why are you so grumpy today?"

"I'm fine," Heart grumbled, "Let's just...go on a hike or something and try to find some of that stuff Heather was talking about." The others frowned as he got up and walked away, Flash quickly getting up to follow. The others put their stuff into their tents as First used a barrier to surround the fire and block out the oxygen. This caused it to burn itself out, but still be ready for relighting when they needed it.

Oh no… Heart is bottling up! It's not very good to bottling up the emotions, the more you bottling up, it get worsen for you.

"NOTHING'S WRONG!" Heart screamed, making everypony flinch as he got up. "I'm sorry I'm not the gullible idiot you remember me as! But if I'm gonna be a Royal Knight, I can't let anything lower my guard! I let somepony trick me and it almost caused all the magic in Equestria to be lost, destroying it. And when I let my guard down again, me and my friends get framed for a murder and almost have a war with the jakhowls start. Then, I lowered my guard again and the Elements of Harmony are destroyed and I get turned into somepony's mind slave! I'm not gonna let it happen again!"

:twilightoops: Yup… the sad thing about his rant was he's right… Cozy, Razor and Shroudheart really messed the kid up.

They all looked atop the wagon, now seeing a pony in black armor staring down at them as a pair of shadowy wings flowed from his back. "Who...who are you?" The other earth pony asked as the figure remained quiet.

Oh no! Not him! :flutterrage:

"Good. Then I will take that hatred and use it to destroy him." With that, the wings exploded into giant clouds that shot down and consumed the thieves. Their screams filled the air, only for everything to go black.

Wow… didn't see that coming. :pinkiegasp:

he was acting a bit like Jason todd for a while but glad he recovering.
a good lesson on trust

I think he went to become an engineer somewhere out in the desert," Grand replied, "I believe he's somewhere called...Coal Town

No way, Dr. Wolf was in this story?! When?! Did i miss a chapter?!

Glad that Heart finally got it all out regarding *scummy* brat, alongside the recent events! Now he can finally start the healing process for real, course Junkpile seem to be feeding off Ponies negative encounters with Flash & CO from what I saw at the end there.......yikes!!!!:twilightoops:

Highlights for this week's chapter include :

"Better stick a fork in your sides!" The pony exclaimed before leaping at them, "Because you mooks are done!" The figure flew over their heads and landed atop the train carriage, revealing their identity to all: Fire Heart.

"A kid?" The unicorn asked as Heart's entire body burst into flames.

"Feel the heat!" He quickly unleashed a stream of fire, striking and knocking back the unicorn. He screamed as he was burnt, the others looking shock as Heart leapt down and threw a flaming fist right into a pegasi's face. He then spun around and launched several fireballs from his tail, hitting the other pony and setting parts of his coat ablaze.

Heart landed and slowly turned to the pegasus, making him gulp as he tried to backpedaled. Heart prepared to attack and as he used his back hoof flames to propel him forward, the pegasus got to his hooves. "I surrender!"

But Heart continued to charge, slamming a flaming punch into their face, burning him as well. Now neutralized, Heart panted as he glanced around, waiting for the thugs to get up, "Come on! I know you're just faking it to make me lower my guard. Well, it won't work." But they didn't move. Instead, they vanished.

Whoa Heart, forgot to turn off charbroiled mode there! :pinkiegasp:

Heart heard this and glanced at Jaden, who was humming the tune Heard had sung when they had been travelling together. "What are you doing?"

"What?" Jaden asked, "It's a catchy song. Don't be such a grumpy gus." He started singing out loud, but Heart remained stoic, Jaden then stopping as he turned back to Heart, "Alright then. If you really wanna play hardball, I'll just use the song nopony can resist singing along to." Heart raised an eyebrow as Jaden cleared his throat. "Lollipop, lollipop. Oh, lolly, lolly, lolly. Lollipop, lollipop. Oh lolly, lolly, lolly-"

He stopped singing and waited, as Heart's face started to twitch before yelling, "Lollipop!" Jaden laughed at this before he started singing again, Heart singing with him, "Lollipop, lollipop. Oh, lolly, lolly, lolly. Lollipop!" The pair made a popping sound with their hooves and mouth. "See?" Jaden saw Heart was now smiling, "That wasn't so bad now, was it?"

"Shut up," Heart tried to stop smiling, but was having a hard time not smirking. Jaden continued singing and now, Heart couldn't fight against it. The pair sang every song they knew as they gathered the last of the dry twigs they would need before heading back.

LOL no one can't resist that song!!! :rainbowlaugh:

"But there's something wrong with him," Raisins barked back, "He was way more happy and expressive the last time I met him. And his sister said he's always got a smile on his face. So why is it he's so grumpy and moody right now?"

"Yeah," Jaden nodded, "What happened to the pony that helped me show my skills to Ruby even though I was super nervous?"

"Nothing. I just grew up."

"Flash is grown up, and he's able to at least crack a smile." Heart grit his teeth at this as Jaden added, "I thought we were friends. Friends tell each other what's wrong with them."

"NOTHING'S WRONG!" Heart screamed, making everypony flinch as he got up. "I'm sorry I'm not the gullible idiot you remember me as! But if I'm gonna be a Royal Knight, I can't let anything lower my guard! I let somepony trick me and it almost caused all the magic in Equestria to be lost, destroying it. And when I let my guard down again, me and my friends get framed for a murder and almost have a war with the jakhowls start. Then, I lowered my guard again and the Elements of Harmony are destroyed and I get turned into somepony's mind slave! I'm not gonna let it happen again!"

Wow guess that bottle finally popped!!! :pinkiegasp:

"So...so what do I do?" Heart asked, "Go back to being the gullible idiot that anypony can trick?"

"Of course not," Ruby shook her head, "But you shouldn't let what Cozy did to you destroy the kind pony Flash chose to be his apprentice. If you do, she'll have won. Letting your enemies get to you will also grant them victory. If they know they can make you do something you'll regret, they'll do whatever it takes to make you lose yourself. And even if they lose the battle, they'll win the war if they're able to change you."

Heart just stared the two, those words entering his ears. He had been feeling miserable lately, but every time he thought about it, he remembered what almost happened...and he hated it.

"We are not telling you to trust whoever you meet," First continued, "But you cannot constantly be untrusting either."

"So...what do I do?"

"There is an area between trust and mistrust," First responded, "Whenever you meet somepony new, place them in that category. You do not have to trust them, but you have to give them a chance to earn your trust. You are right that you trusted Cozy too quickly. But simply not trusting her from the start would not have been a good idea."

"So you're saying when I met Cozy, I should have still been nice to her but not completely open?"

"Exactly," Ruby nodded, "Your heart should have a door. One that isn't locked, or wide open. It should be ajar enough for somepony to look inside, but still able to be shut itself if and when that pony should do something you don't find trustworthy. Understand?"

That was profound! :ajsmug:

They all looked atop the wagon, now seeing a pony in black armor staring down at them as a pair of shadowy wings flowed from his back. "Who...who are you?" The other earth pony asked as the figure remained quiet.

"Flash Sentry," he replied, "He is the pegasus that defeated you." The group glared at that statement, "Do you hate him? You must, since he was the reason that group of ponies was there. If not for him, your plan would have worked perfectly."

"Oh yeah, I hate him!" The unicorn growled, the others all nodding as the armored pony chuckled.

"Good. Then I will take that hatred and use it to destroy him." With that, the wings exploded into giant clouds that shot down and consumed the thieves. Their screams filled the air, only for everything to go black.

:applejackconfused::fluttershysad::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh::twilightoops::raritydespair: welp that just happened!!!:derpyderp2:

Looking forward to more Banshee, later! :twilightsmile:

Nice to see Heart is finally starting to recover from Cozy's betrayal. Heart has been down in the dumps for the last few stories ever since that incident, but it is nice he finally realizes that he can't let that one bad experience define him from now on. Just like Soul said, Cozy didn't deserve Heart, but one day hopefully Heart will find someone that does.

I like how the other Knights got involved with helping Heart since they could relate to his feeling of anger and being betrayed a bit better, and why getting angry about it and pushing everyone away won't help. It was also interesting to see Raisins was now the apprentice of both First and Heather. I didn't think she made that good of an impression in her first appearances but this should definitely help her.

That ending scene with Armalum has me concerned though. We have no idea what he did to those crooks, but I doubt it was pleasant. I thought Armalum was going to try making his own villain team up like the Legion of Doom, but maybe he is trying something else.

His mind then thought back to the last Hearts and Hooves Day, when he had learned about love. He had learned so much on that day, but it was Iron's words that were now flowing through his mind.

"A heart can't survive without being fed. And once it's dead, it's almost impossible to revive. It'll just rot away, taking everything within you along with it. You'll stop caring about others and slowly start thinking the only pony you have to look out for is yourself."

That's a bit funny. I found Heart's situation with Cozy to more closely relate to Discord's advice about the dangers of a broken heart. But I guess Iron's advice was more beneficial.

Heart landed and slowly turned to the pegasus, making him gulp as he tried to backpedaled. Heart prepared to attack and as he used his back hoof flames to propel him forward, the pegasus got to his hooves. "I surrender!"

Did you mean to say “backpedal” instead of “backpedaled”?

"I know," Flash responded, "But what am I supposed to do? I don't have any experience when it comes to overcoming heartbreak. I don't know anypony that does."

What about Spike?:moustache:

"I think he went to become an engineer somewhere out in the desert," Grand replied, "I believe he's somewhere called...Coal Town." Flash let out a long sigh, only for mentor to put a hoof on his shoulder, "Flash, you need to do something. Heart's not gonna get any better on his own, and as his mentor, it's your responsibility to help him through this."

Dr Wolf and Analysts Anarchy reference

Heart's eyes went wide. "You're kicking me out!?" He leapt off the couch and flew over to Flash's hooves. "I know you're mad about what happened earlier, but please give me another chance! I won't survive out there! I don't even know how to do laundry!"

:rainbowlaugh:

"We have been looking to take a break from our work," First responded, "All work and no play makes First a dull colt." Heather and Ruby laughed at this, clearly getting a reference to something Flash didn't know. "Anyway, I am sure this will do the young ones a lot of good. And help your apprentice overcome his heartbreak."

That’s the second time you put a Shining reference in this series

"Speak for yourself," Ruby interrupted as she started setting up the tent. "Are you forgetting my best friend turned into a shadow monster and brainwashed my entire city?"

Yes but you have been getting some feelings for him again don't deny it :heart::trixieshiftright:

Another great story. I’m glad Heart is starting to heal from Cozy’s betrayal, I hope he finds someone new and better than her. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

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What about Spike?:moustache:

Good point, but I feel this is a different kind of heartbreak. Spike was heart broken because he found out his crush was already dating someone else and she accidentally led him on. Heart however found out his crush was evil and manipulated him and his friends for months and almost killed them all.

"Good. Then I will take that hatred and use it to destroy him." With that, the wings exploded into giant clouds that shot down and consumed the thieves. Their screams filled the air, only for everything to go black.

What the heck?!! :pinkiegasp:

Ugh. I sure hope this installment ends on a happy note because Heart being moody was a lot harder to endure than expected. :fluttercry:

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At least Heart could burn Cozy Glow to get even, which Spike couldn't do to Lightning Blitz since he's one of the good guys now, hehe.

That was a joke, I wasnt speak seriously.

For that part, I hope Banshee writes his version of Dragon Dropped.

Wow, I never imagined that you would adapt this chapter, I thought it was funny, but I never considered that this was another lesson for Twilight, that's why it's very important, but hey, it was better to adapt this chapter instead of the trivia one, I know they wanted to go back to show the crazy Twilight, but what the hell were the writers thinking?

And what about the Sparkle Seven chapter? Although it wasn't that important, it was the time Spike was recognized as Twilight's little brother.

It was a really good adaptation, keep doing the god work Banshee👍🏾

That was a good one. And Derpy having a perfect record, I did not see that coming.

Yeah, it was unexpected you chose to adapt this episode since it was a filler episode but then again, it was important to Twilight's character development.

Derpy was another unexpected choice to replaced Twilight as Best Book Borrower but then again, like they said, that mare is one of mystery the world is unable to solve.

Very ironically that Flash didn't care about reading books and yet, get upset when he find out the librarian can lose their job if one book is not return. (Through, to be fair, it gives Dusty a wake up call and find a more happier life.)

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Dusty laughed at this as she looked between Twilight and Flash. "If that colt ever manages to settle down, it'll need to be with somepony learned enough to help him become a wise enough pony to work as a Royal Knight." Twilight nodded, thinking the same thing. "Somepony that enjoys reading a lot and keeping a reckless stallion like him grounded."

"Oh, she sounds perfect." Twilight commented, "I bet we'll be the best of friends if he ever finds a pony like that to be with." She marched over to Flash and pulled his back hooves off the table, shutting his mouth with her magic to stop him from crying out in the library before the pair started a light-hearted bicker as they made their way out of the library.

I do find it ironically that the mare Twilight talk about would be herself since she ends up dating Flash.

"In the basement." She leaned over and whispered, "Because of the shame." Twilight looked like she was about to have a panic attack as she slammed her head into the desk. Flash had finally had enough.

"So let me get this straight. If somepony has a book out for too long, you send them to a room designed just to shame them." The librarian nodded, "But what if the pony had a good reason for not returning it for this long?"

"Like what?"

"Alright, if I took a book out of the library, took it home and then got into an accident that put me into a year long coma, would I have to be shamed if I returned the book as soon as I came out of said coma?"

"Umm..." The librarian was about to answer, then stopped as she clearly didn't have an answer for that.

"See? Sure, Twilight forgot to return the book. But she was a little busy at the time preventing Nightmare Moon from bringing on eternal night. You think forgetting to bring back a library book is bad, then you won't like what Nightmare Moon might have done to this library to stop ponies from learning how to raise the sun. So which do you think is more important? Return a book, or save Equestria?"

"Um..." The librarian didn't say anything again as Flash turned to see Twilight and Spike staring at him.

Damn, Flash… come down. I get you were defending your girlfriend but damn! You lay a smack down on that librarian! :pinkiegasp:

Well, this was a fun one. I think this filler episode was important to Twilight in the long run, given it helped her finally realise she didn't always need to be perfect. Hope you enjoyed it.

Yeah, it make sense cause Twilight is always big on perfect until she realizes she doesn't need to be perfect all the times since Dusty is a lot happier after leaving her "perfect" life.

Nice adaption to this episode, plus that twist ending was a hoot!!! :rainbowlaugh:

Highlights galore! :

"Oh," Derpy blinked, "Oops. It just looked important and I wanted to make sure it got here in time."

"Now that's dedication," Flash chuckled, "So...what's in there?"

Twilight tilted her head at this, only for Spike to run up to the box, "Is it a deluxe set of special edition Ogres & Oubliettes figurines that I'm totally surprised by and have been hinting that I need forever?"

He turned to the ponies, only for Derpy to reply, "Well, it's for Twilight."

"Awww..." Flash rolled his eyes as he gave Derpy her letters back.

"Spike, we give you an allowance and we pay you for cleaning up the castle. If you want those figurines, save up and buy them yourself." Spike pouted as Derpy flew off.

Sorry purple buddy! :moustache:

"You don't understand, Spike! I have a perfect library book return record!" Spike quickly cleared his throat.

"Had a perfect record."

"Oh yeah," Flash chuckled, "I remember how much you loved boasting about that record. Even let it bleed into your own librarian life." He turned to Spike, "Remember when Time Turner almost had an overdue library book the first year we were living here?"

"Oh yeah," Spike laughed, "She waited up until midnight for him to return it. And when that elapsed, she teleported over to his house and banged on the door for ten minutes to get him to wake up. Good thing he hadn't perfected his noise cancelling headphones yet."

Ouch karma's a bi***! :rainbowkiss:

Flash had finally had enough.

"So let me get this straight. If somepony has a book out for too long, you send them to a room designed just to shame them." The librarian nodded, "But what if the pony had a good reason for not returning it for this long?"

"Like what?"

"Alright, if I took a book out of the library, took it home and then got into an accident that put me into a year long coma, would I have to be shamed if I returned the book as soon as I came out of said coma?"

"Umm..." The librarian was about to answer, then stopped as she clearly didn't have an answer for that.

"See? Sure, Twilight forgot to return the book. But she was a little busy at the time preventing Nightmare Moon from bringing on eternal night. You think forgetting to bring back a library book is bad, then you won't like what Nightmare Moon might have done to this library to stop ponies from learning how to raise the sun. So which do you think is more important? Return a book, or save Equestria?"

"Um..." The librarian didn't say anything again as Flash turned to see Twilight and Spike staring at him.

"What?" He turned to head down the stairs, the pair following as they descended into the darkness.

"Don't you think you were a bit mean to her?" Twilight asked, "She was just doing her job."

Flash turned to her, raising an eyebrow. "Her job involves making ponies that likely already feel upset feel even worse by telling them they should feel shame because they didn't return a library book on time? How is that not mean?"

"Well...I mean...still." They reached the bottom of the stairs and glanced around, seeing the place was covered in layers of dust and cobwebs.

Dang what's with that epic burn Flash? that is Spike's job! :rainbowlaugh:

"Dusty Pages isn't working at the library any more because I didn't return this book!" The face she gave looked like she had stabbed somepony by accident. "Spike, I think I got her fired!"

"We don't know that for sure," Flash cut in, "It still doesn't make any sense that she'd be fired just because of one-and you're running away!" Twilight shot down the street, Flash and his growling stomach groaning as he and Spike ran after her.

LOL sorry Flash, she's in full-on Twilighting mode now! :ajbemused::rainbowkiss:

"I know I said Luna and Celestia didn't need to enter a retirement community yet, but forget that. If I live long enough to retire, this is where I wanna go."

"You realize Twilight's probably gonna be running Equestria until the day she dies, right?" Spike asked as they headed to a bar located in the community. "I don't think that pony understands the meaning of the words: Take it easy." Flash couldn't help but laugh as they arrived outside the bar, knowing the dragon was right.

lol out of the mouths of babes! :moustache:

"I have a question. If Twilight doesn't hold the Best Book Borrower title anymore, who does?"

"Give me a minute," she took out a bunch of scrolls that she started looking through, the trio glancing at each other as they waited.

"It's probably Moondancer," Twilight commented, "Her library etiquette is just as good as mine."

Spike nodded in agreement, only for First Folio to add, "Ah, yes." They turned to her. "After Twilight, the pony with the best library return record is somepony named...Derpy Hooves."

That made all three's eyes to go wide, "What?!" Twilight yelped, "But how...when...why..."

Flash laughed at this, "There are many mysteries in this world that will never truly be solved. That mare is one of them." Twilight instantly fainted at this, Flash and Spike rolling their eyes as they saw the mare now realizing that Derpy of all ponies had a better return record than her.

"We're not gonna hear the end of this for a while, aren't we?" Spike asked, Flash nodding.

Never underestimate the Derpy one! :ajsmug:

Cool chapter there Banshee, till next week! :twilightsmile:

I wonder how much longer can Flash keep his secret about his future

Wasn't expecting this episode to get adapted but excellent choice! It might be a slow slice-of-life episode but it had a surprisingly important lesson in it. Plus I like how it ties to the Pilot episode similar to how "Amending Fences" did. It was pretty funny how Flash constantly spoke up about some of the more bizarre parts of the episode, like Twilight feeling bad about the overdue book due to saving Equestria, how the library seems like a strict or borderline terrible place at first, and how amazing Dusty's retirement home is.

Also, the twist ending where instead of Moondancer being the new Best Book Borrower like many fans would expect it turns out to be Derpy. She is a strange and unpredictable one alright, but we love her for it.

"Aww..." Flash sighed, "can't we play one round." His ear was suddenly twisted, making him grunt as he was pulled over to his girlfriend.

Wow, feels like forever since Twilight pulled Flash by the ear.

Dusty sighed, "All the amazing books in this building and that colt chooses to read a comic."

I can forgive Dusty for saying this just because she's elderly, but I think younger librarians have an unspoken policy where they generally avoid judging other people's reading preferences. :rainbowderp:

"Are you kidding?" Flash countered, "She grew up in Canterlot. Ninety percent of the ponies that live there are obsessed with doing everything perfectly. Twilight...Dusty...even Velvet wouldn't release a book until she read the whole thing through six times to make absolutely sure it was perfect. It's just something most ponies living there have ingrained into their being."

That makes a whole lot of sense actually.

Flash turned to her, raising an eyebrow. "Her job involves making ponies that likely already feel upset feel even worse by telling them they should feel shame because they didn't return a library book on time? How is that not mean?"

And so the product of a perfectionistic culture continues perpetuating said culture. :ajbemused:

"I'm just glad this isn't the Silver Shoals Luna was talking about," Flash chuckled, "I know she and Celestia wanna retire, but I doubt they need to go as far as moving into a retirement home."

I assume you had issue with Celestia and Luna moving in with a bunch of old ponies. :rainbowhuh:

"Uh oh." Flash whispered as he saw Twilight's begin to morph.

Twilight’s what begin to morph?

Dusty laughed at this as she looked between Twilight and Flash. "If that colt ever manages to settle down, it'll need to be with somepony learned enough to help him become a wise enough pony to work as a Royal Knight." Twilight nodded, thinking the same thing. "Somepony that enjoys reading a lot and keeping a reckless stallion like him grounded."

Looks like Cadence wasn’t the only one shipping these two:raritywink:

"Yeah," Flash added, "You clearly haven't checked out any of the books here since moving to Ponyville. If you had, somepony would have noticed you had that book out passed the due back date."

I don’t mean to be rude but you wrote “Passed” instead of “Past”

"So let me get this straight. If somepony has a book out for too long, you send them to a room designed just to shame them." The librarian nodded, "But what if the pony had a good reason for not returning it for this long?"

"Like what?"

"Alright, if I took a book out of the library, took it home and then got into an accident that put me into a year long coma, would I have to be shamed if I returned the book as soon as I came out of said coma?"

"Umm..." The librarian was about to answer, then stopped as she clearly didn't have an answer for that.

"See? Sure, Twilight forgot to return the book. But she was a little busy at the time preventing Nightmare Moon from bringing on eternal night. You think forgetting to bring back a library book is bad, then you won't like what Nightmare Moon might have done to this library to stop ponies from learning how to raise the sun. So which do you think is more important? Return a book, or save Equestria?"

"Um..." The librarian didn't say anything again as Flash turned to see Twilight and Spike staring at him.

Awwww Flash can be a meathead sometimes but he knows when to be a gentleman and stand up for someone:twilightsmile:

"Um...Twilight?" She looked back at him as he pointed at the door, Twilight turning to see Dusty's face on it.

Is Spike or Flash saying this?

"Though I wouldn't mind going a few rounds once we're done here," Flash chuckled.

Count me in:rainbowdetermined2:. There’s actually festivals in the real world where there are giant food fights

Spike nodded in agreement, only for First Folio to add, "Ah, yes." They turned to her. "After Twilight, the pony with the best library return record is somepony named...Derpy Hooves."

All hail Derpy! The best pony!:derpytongue2:

Overall another great story Banshee

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I bet that when Flash “dies” at the end of the season and comes back Twilight will do this before kissing him.

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That would actually be a great chapter

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We could’ve had a four way battle between Twilight, Shining, Spike, and Flash

perfection and power are overrated best to be the best you can be also to much work

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We could’ve had a four way battle between Twilight, Shining, Spike, and Flash

You do know Flash is technically not sibling cause he dating Twilight.

Even Banshee stated Flash wasn't adopted by Twilight's family but rather "fostered".

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Well you know what I mean

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Personally, I think it would have been interesting if due to Flash being a Royal Knight he had to assist Shining Armor with the defenses, and maybe recruited his friends to help out, essentially turning it into a boys vs girls plot. Also, since Scootaloo is Flash's sibling here it might be cool if she and Spike work together against their older siblings and split the title.

another of them married when is the next one?

While this chapter have same plot concept as Viva Las Pegasus, it very differently since it's about Pinkie bonding with Wild's family.

I like you subvert my expectations with Wild's family, I was worried they would be your typical family who doesn't approve their child's lover and antagonizes them but surprisingly, Wild's family ultimately didn't mind Pinkie and actually appreciate her effort.

Wild and Pinkie are officially Married Couple! :) (Pinkie is now second Mane Six to be married following Rainbow)

Now, here's couples who are not married yet and who will be joining them?

* Flash Sentry and Twilight Sparkle

* Iron Core and Fluttershy

* Lightning Blitz and Rarity

* Rogue and Applejack

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"Besides," Mrs. Cake continued, "It's not every day you're invited to your boyfriend's family vacation. You'll finally get to meet Wild's family." Pinkie smiled at this, being very excited for that. Despite being with Wild for a long time, she had never gotten to meet his family. Wild had tried on a few occasions to set up a meeting between them, but his parents were always super busy or a big world ending threat would occur.

OOOHH!!! :raritystarry: we are finally meet his family?

Pinkie nodded again, not needing to ask about his mother's family. Wild had long since told her about how his mother had been raised by her aunt after her parents died in an airship accident. Her aunt had died not long after Wild was born, getting sick and having complications. Luckily, his father's family had been happy to welcome her into their clan so she never felt alone during it.

Damn… I feel bad for Wild's mother, at least she got herself a family.

"Yeah, we'll hang out Wick. But not the whole vacation. I wanna help Pinkie get to know the rest of the family." Wick heard this and spun around, now seeing the mare waving again, only for him to glare at her, making her wave come to a stop.

Oh no… a jealous type.

"Sure," Wild smirked as he used his magic to lift the sand flame up and carefully placed it on the top of the candle. Wick smiled at the sight before turning to Pinkie.

"Thank you!" Pinkie gave him a toothy grin back, the adults all watching the exchange. For all the strangeness this mare exhibited, she certainly knew how to handle young ponies.

That's a relief… I glad Wick is not jealous one.

"And I love you, Pinkamena Diane Pie." Pinkie laughed at the use of her full name, "More than anything else in the world." He pulled back, "You're the most important pony in my life. You saved me from the darkness of my heart." Pinkie smiled at this, "I know you are who I want to spend the rest of my life with."

Wait a minute… is he?

Wild took a deep breath and took both her hooves in his. "Pinkie Pie...will you marry me?"

WHAT?!?!?! :pinkiegasp:

"Tell your family what really happened in the Battle of Canterlot." Wild leaned back at this, "If we get married, they'll be my family. And I can't keep a secret like that from my family. So if you want me to marry you, you have to tell them what happened."

To be fair, Pinkie was suffered when she found out about Cadence and Shining Armor having a baby but she can't spill the bean to Twilight and she certainly not want to go that route again.

Wow, that was a big surprise! I liked how this chapter introduced the rest of Wild Smile's family and had Pinkie meet them all and interact with them and slowly get along with all of them. But then all of a sudden Wild turns everything on its head by asking Pinkie to marry him! I didn't see that coming!

I admit, I was a little surprised to see how mature and in control Pinkie was when Wild asked her, with instead of her jumping up and down and immediately saying yes, she said her one and only condition before she could agree was for Wild to tell the truth about his role in the Battle of Canterlot to his family. I get why Wild wanted to keep that a secret from his family, since even way back before he and Pinkie were a couple he said he was uncomfortable with even the possibility of telling that story to their hypothetical future kids. But I'm glad Pinkie convinced him to be honest with them and that they don't hold it against him.

The wedding was a lot like the one between Soarin and Rainbow in Season 8, short and a bit disappointing we didn't get to see the full thing and reception, but still very sweet and heartwarming. I'm actually glad that Wild and Pinkie were the second of the main couples to get married, since I predicted that awhile back and thinks it fits them. If I were to guess the order for the rest of the main couples to get married it would probably go: Flash and Twilight, Lightning and Rarity, Iron and Fluttershy, and Rogue and Applejack.

"Are they all compass directions?" Pinkie asked, Booker reading through and nodding. As he did, Pinkie crossed her hooves as she let this info sink in. As she did, her head started turning clockwise with a ticking noise that made everypony turn to her and grimace with the exception of Wild. That is, till her head was completely upside down, only for it spin back up and ring like an alarm clock. "I know! The words are meant to be the opposite!"

That reminds me of what she did in "Too Many Pinkie Pies"!

At the bakery of Sugarcube Corner, Pinkie Pie was staring at a suitcase, which was currently empty as she looked around at everything that she should take with her on the trip. "Let's see..." He grabbed a set of party balloons

You accidentally wrote “he” instead of “she”

"Ready to go, Gummy?" She turned to her pet alligator, who was dressed in a hawaiian shirt with sunglasses, and a suitcase hanging from his tail. "Great. Let's get going." She picked the aligator up and placed him on her back, then headed downstairs.

"Ding dong," Wild's voice called out, Pinkie spinning around to see the stallion carrying his own suitcase while his puppets were each carrying a case that was tied to them. "Hey!" he waved at her, "ready to go?"

Yup, they’re perfect for each other:twilightsmile:

"Alright," Wild laughed, "Hope you brought something to do. It's a long train ride to Silver Shoals." Pinkie nodded back, Wild saying bye to the Cakes before the duo left. It wasn't long till they got to the station, both waiting on the train.

Huh, we seem to be going to Silver Shoals a lot.:rainbowhuh::trixieshiftright:

The train arrived a little while later and the pair climbed aboard. The ponies all the train were a little worried about an alligator being aboard, but Pinkie was able to stop their worries by showing his toothless mouth

That probably won’t work once Gummy gets bigger:unsuresweetie:

The three then pulled away, the mare looking Wild over. "Oh, honey. You're practically skin and bones. We'll need to make sure you get some good meals when we get to the hotel." Wild rolled his eyes at this, then turned to Pinkie as his parents followed his hoof.

This is classic mom behavior

"This girl is...sane, right?" Ginger turned to her son, who slightly glared back at her.

"She's just as sane as I am," he replied with his puppets saying 'just as sane' over and over.

That’s still up for debate, and also a Harry Potter reference :pinkiehappy:

"Yeah, we'll hang out Wick. But not the whole vacation. I wanna help Pinkie get to know the rest of the family." Wick heard this and spun around, now seeing the mare waving again, only for him to glare at her, making her wave come to a stop.

Uh oh:twilightoops:

"Is that an alligator?" One of the younger ponies asked, seeing Gummy still holding onto Pinkie's tail. The adults turned to him and gasped at seeing him blink, revealing he wasn't just an accessory.

This is gonna be a running gag isn’t it :ajbemused:

As soon as the sun was up, the younger ponies were instantly awake, ready to have fun. The adults, being adults, wanted to sleep in, but thanks Pinkie and Wild being still children at heart, were also up around the same time as the kids. This meant the adults could enjoy their morning sleep as Pinkie and Wild had the children downstairs for breakfast, then the nine rushed out into the beach.

You forgot the “to” between “thanks” and “Pinkie”

Wild was a little worried, since some of the younger ponies had gone out swimming as the tide could be strong, but Pinkie appeared from under the water and Wild noticed something around her waist. The mare had somehow tied a rope to the younger colts and fillies that she also tried to herself. The rope was long enough that the ponies could swim about without issue, but still short enough for Pinkie to reel in before anything bad happened.

Pinkie would be the type of mom to know when someone is up to something before it even happens

And as they walked, the adults watched as Pinkie made the young ponies all laugh and smile. "Alright," one of Wild's uncles spoke up, "I'll admit it. That mare's something alright. Great with kids, has a good career and has apparently saved Equestria a few dozen times." He turned to Wild, "She's a keeper. Try and hang on to her."

Wild nodded back, "I intend to."

:pinkiehappy::heart:

Wild took a deep breath and took both her hooves in his. "Pinkie Pie...will you marry me?" Pinkie's eyes went wide as the words sank into her mind. Her heart started beating harder as an incredible amount of joy flowed through her body.

:raritystarry:EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

Her family was at the front row, her mother actually crying while Maud was smiling and Limestone was trying to look tough, but allowed herself to smile

Wait, where’s Marble?:rainbowhuh:

Another great chapter Banshee. I can’t wait to see what kind of shipping fuel you’ll give us next week

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I admit, I was a little surprised to see how mature and in control Pinkie was when Wild asked her, with instead of her jumping up and down and immediately saying yes, she said her one and only condition before she could agree was for Wild to tell the truth about his role in the Battle of Canterlot to his family. I get why Wild wanted to keep that a secret from his family, since even way back before he and Pinkie were a couple he said he was uncomfortable with even the possibility of telling that story to their hypothetical future kids. But I'm glad Pinkie convinced him to be honest with them and that they don't hold it against him

Shows how much Pinkie has grown over the series.:pinkiesmile:

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Now, here's couples who are not married yet and who will be joining them?

* Flash Sentry and Twilight Sparkle

* Iron Core and Fluttershy

* Lightning Blitz and Rarity

* Rogue and Applejack

My guess is Fluttershy and Iron

Wow, I was a little worried that the wedding chapters were going to end up being a rehash of Soarin and Rainbow's, but you found a way to make this uniquely Pinkie and Wild's. I guess it helps that we were kept unaware until the end.

Maybe Heart can fall in love with Ocellus!

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:raritystarry: Either her or Smolder but I like the way your brain thinks.

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Personally, I was thinking more of Heart getting with Diamond Tiara since she's essentially a good counterpart to Cozy Glow, Heart's previous crush. But I do admit him getting with Ocellus sounds like a nice choice too. I personally liked to ship Ocellus with Sandbar before he got with Yona, but that's another story.

And another one bites the dust, so to speak! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Pinkie getting to meet Wild's family & getting married on the same chapter was handled well, while keeping it different from Rainbow's! :rainbowwild: Also mentioning the Battle of Canterlot as the final wall in Wild's past to tell his family was a good move! (dang that was sooooo long ago!:twilightoops:) Wonder if we'll have the rest of the Mane 6 tying the knot before S9's over? :ajsmug:

And now I'm sending Pinkie some Highlights as a wedding present! :

"Mom, dad. This is Pinkie."

"Hi there!" Pinkie waved excitedly, the mare bouncing over to them. "It's really nice to meet you!"

"And you," the mare smiled, "My name is Ginger Snap."

"And you can call me Cistern," the stallion replied. "So, you're the mare that's been keeping our son from visiting home so often." Pinkie suddenly gulped at this, only for the stallion to add, "I can see why. You're certainly a pretty little thing."

Ginger moved up and pinched her face, "Such a beautiful face. And I love how wild your mane is. Almost like candy floss."

Careful Ginger, that mane's a black hole for storing stuff! :twilightsheepish::pinkiesmile:

"This'll get use there faster." The parents raised an eyebrow at this, leaning back as they then saw her pull a can of helium out of her mane and used it to blow up several of the balloons. And once they were all blown up, she tied them around the three ponies.

"What are you DOING?!" Cistern yelped out as he, Ginger and Wild were lifted into the air. Pinkie had also tied some rope to them, allowing her to weigh them down as she leapt onto the skateboard. The next thing they all knew, Pinkie was racing down the street and pulling the three floating ponies behind her.

"I can't believe this!" Ginger cried, "Where did she get this idea...and that helium?"

Case in point! :pinkiehappy:

"Wow," one of the fillies whispered. "Wait...so when did you meet Wild? With all the insane stuff that happened to you, how did the two of you even meet?"

"Oh, we met during the Battle of Canterlot." The adults all went wide-eyed at this, Wild flinching as she continued, "Yeah, we met when he was fighting and-"

"We just happened to run into one another," Wild interruped, "But we didn't really interact until afterwards.

Oh vey, someone needs to come clean it seems!:trixieshiftright:

Pinkie smiled and hugged him back, the pair basking in each other's warmth. "I love you, Wild Smile."

"And I love you, Pinkamena Diane Pie." Pinkie laughed at the use of her full name, "More than anything else in the world." He pulled back, "You're the most important pony in my life. You saved me from the darkness of my heart." Pinkie smiled at this, "I know you are who I want to spend the rest of my life with."

This made Pinkie blink at him, "What do you mean?"

Wild took a deep breath and took both her hooves in his. "Pinkie Pie...will you marry me?" Pinkie's eyes went wide as the words sank into her mind. Her heart started beating harder as an incredible amount of joy flowed through her body.

*happy squeeling noises* :heart:

Wedding music filled Ponyville's town hall as everypony inside stood up. They turned to the doorway, where Pinkie was being led down the aisle by Igneous Rock.

She was dressed in a beautiful wedding dress, her usually stoic father having a smile on his face as he led her to her future husband. And as she made her way down the aisle, she saw many of her friends on her side of the hall and Wild's family on his side.

That was beautiful!!! :raritycry:

Another cool chapter Banshee, till the next one! :twilightsmile:

I wonder if Banshee plans to include/fix some of the storylines from the season 10 comics like the Knights of Harmony or heck, maybe even bring in Cosmos….actually we already have a all powerful villain so never mind

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