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Banshee531


I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry, Chaos and Disharmony


Life has returned to normal after the defeat of Discord, the Spirit of Chaos. With this, Flash and his friends are once again enjoying their life in Ponyville. But as life in Ponyville has shown them time and time again, things are not what they always seem. With this in mind, Flash and friends find the next chapter in their lives to be crazier than before in the land of Equestria.

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"I'LL GET YOU, YOU BLASTED YELLOW ELECTRIC RAT!" Springer roared as he swung his Bone Breaker around, Flash quickly blocking each attack to make sure nopony would be hurt by it. The jakhowl continued to yell as he rampaged with more attacks. "I'LL GET YOU AND YOUR WEIRD RED CIRCLE CHEEKS! I'LL DESTROY YOUR POPULARITY, YOU BLASTED ELECTRIC MOUSE! RRRAAAUUUGGGHHHH!!!"

... Somepony has unresolved issues with Pikachu.:rainbowlaugh:

That is, except Twilight, who just facehoofed. "You have got to be kidding me. He made all that fuss and then he goes and-"

, Well what did you expect, you keep acting like his mother, he's going to act like your child.:derpytongue2:

Nice to have a taste of Flash's early history, so no 'Lesson-Zero'. Well wait and see what parts of Season 2 of the show proper makes it's way it. Here hoping for "Sisterhooves Social"

I loved this chapter.

The sugar muffin incident was hilarious. I'm excited about the next chapter. I understand that it will be a long chapter and will take time to complete, but I'm looking forward to it.

"I'LL GET YOU, YOU BLASTED YELLOW ELECTRIC RAT!" Springer roared as he swung his Bone Breaker around, Flash quickly blocking each attack to make sure nopony would be hurt by it. The jakhowl continued to yell as he rampaged with more attacks. "I'LL GET YOU AND YOUR WEIRD RED CIRCLE CHEEKS! I'LL DESTROY YOUR POPULARITY, YOU BLASTED ELECTRIC MOUSE! RRRAAAUUUGGGHHHH!!!"

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: That was hilarious. I kind of wish that someone was able to animate this.

Well that's one way to start a new story. Now Flash knows his real name and where he was before he met Twilight. I hope he'll meet his real parents one day and finally get some real answers.

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Maybe "Lesson Zero" happened off-chapter. I know in S1, "Look Before You Sleep" and "Over a Barrel" were off-chapter.:applejackunsure:

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But Twilight's descent into madness is so funny.:pinkiecrazy:

Hold on. Is this story featured on your fimfiction home pages? It is in mine. :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

I mean, home page as in fimfiction.net, not my profile page.

Sees 8450304's post, checks it out... :pinkiehappy::ajsmug::raritystarry::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::yay:

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It is in the popular list instead of the featured list, but it is still awesome to be in either.

Loved the Dr. Wolf reference

8455235 Sorry man. It came to me just as I was about to publish and I added it in. :scootangel:

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Why do I get the feeling that this chapter will lead into a story arc?

Flash was particularly glad that the spell didn't exactly affect him, allowing him to mostly stop the almost rampage that happened from the mass hypnosis, which included a hypnotized Springer fighting a crazed Big Macintosh.

Boy, do I wish that was animated! :rainbowkiss:

Also, since when did Iron become LEGO Batman?

The shipping is strong with this one. :ajsmug:

Speed Stinger? :ajbemused::facehoof:
Well aside from that, all in all, a good chapter. I think the Iron should remain mostly disagreeable. If for no other reason than to be a counterbalance.

Well looks like Iron is here to stay. Maybe with time they can do something about his attitude. Is it just me or do I sense an attraction between Iron and Fluttershy?

Thanks for a new chapter. It looks like Iron is going to be growing in new ways now. I can't wait to see how he influences the events in Ponyville now.

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I'm pretty sure its called IronShy:trollestia:

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Sounds too much like 'I am shy'... granted my title sounds too close to another Fluttershy ship.

"I CAN TALK!"

... I don't know if anyone else does, but I this reminds me of the scene from the animated film adaptation of Charlotte's Web from 1973 by Hanna-Barbera, when Wilbur discovered he could 'talk' to the other animals?
Okay, let's be clear I grew up with it on VHS...
I am not helping my case...
But I can't be the only one to make that connection?

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I remember that...but I never made the connection.

More development for Springer yay! Now that he can talk it may make things easier for him, not needing to rely on Flash to translate.
A chapter based on an episode next time huh? This early I would guess it would be Luna Eclipsed, that is a fan favorite and one of my favorites from season 2, though I’m not 100% sure it would still work given what we have seen of Luna so far in this continuity.

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Well, Halloween is in two weeks and Nightmare Night is that world's equivalent. Granted it would make sense to publish that on the 31st, and these tend to be weekly... :applejackunsure:

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I remember that movie and that scene and the cute song that went with it and all the annoyed animals.

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I KNOW RIGHT!!! oh childhood... how I mmiss those simpler days.

Wow. That reminds me of Ash's and Greninja's abilities. Great job. I think you did a great job. I can't wait to read when the episodes remakes occurs.

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I remembered it but couldn't remember Where from. Good old vhs. Still have a boxful of tapes and a couple players.

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This is the scene in question that came to mind when Springer realized that he could speak Equestrian

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Yeah, I remembered as I read your comment. A classic movie.

Nightmare Night, what a fright. Give me something sweet to bite!:pinkiehappy:

Oh, Pinki, you positively, positive, pink, party-planning pony, you almost got Nightmare Night canceled.

But I thought I was helping sale Luna being scary:pinkiesad2:

:facehoof:, Bashee, you deal with this.
All in all a nice take on the episode. Flash's costume is a classic, simple but effective. :ajsmug: and his story... hold on for a second...:raritycry:,:fluttercry:,:raritydespair:... okay I am good now.
But I thought Twilight got the bells right for her costume, something most don't.:applejackunsure:

I never really was one for Halloween. I don't really do costumes, I have a Venetian Mask though.

Still I get why Halloween exists, so I tend to listen for Halloween music. This is a fun one.

And of course:

Although Phantom Manor in Disneyland Paris, the English soundtrack is delightfully gothic.

I vaguely remember riding the Phantom Manor at the age of six, and having no idea of what was going on, primarily because I don't know much French. If this had been what I heard then maybe I would have become a Horror Fan, especially the Gothic Horror feel of the ride itself. But because of red tape demanding it be in French the world was denied what is most likely Vincent Price's last association with Horror.

Is it me or do Twilight and Flash bicker a little more this season than they did last season? Oh well, at the end of the day, they're still best of friends who totally get each other better than anyone else does. Maybe that's why they bicker so much.

Happy Halloween and one year anniversary of being on this site! One of my favorite season 2 episodes reworked for this continuity.

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Well to be fair, Flash and Twilight didn't interact this much compared to season 1. Season 1 of this series spent a lot of time establishing Flash's character (Which was completely necessary) since the first story of the series was there to make Flash's backstory. We now know Flash a lot more now, so it makes sense that it would start concentrating on the other characters more and his interactions with them, including Twilight.

Good job with this chapter. To be honest I was expecting Springer to dress up and go to get candy. But he got the easiest candy job there is. Great job.

Your story is getting more interesting. But quick question, where did the idea and inspiration of speed stingers come from? I was trying to picture them of what they look like, but what I'm getting is a Velociraptor from Jurassic Park with a stinger of some kind on its tail.

Ah was so despite for mah Cutie Mark...

The despite I think should be desperate.

Another good chapter with Springer. I like how he questions Zecora on her rhymes, but she seems to be avoiding giving an answer. Now I’m curious what this “weirder side” is for next time.

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It's About Time?

"A lovely new sharpow will cheer you up," Rarity exclaimed as Scootaloo and Sweetie looked at her with glee, only for Applebloom to still be frowning.

I think the word you're looking for is "chapeau." It's French for hat.

Also, this was fun. I'm guessing Flash is a "Friend to All Children" in your headcanon, too.

Do you plan on eventually doing the eg movies?

"Twilight? What are you talking about?!" Flash replied, giving him a look of pure confusion.
Spike just blinked. "Uhh...you don't sound like it. Your voice sounds kinda...funny."
"My voice?" Flash asked, tilting his head before touching his throat. "What are you-my voice is fine Spike."

The 'voices are mental' trope.:facehoof: Seriously:ajbemused:

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