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Banshee531


I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry Chronicles: School's in Session


The School of Friendship has opened its doors to all creatures, meaning a new wave of adventures soon await our heroes. Now they must juggle their everyday lives with the responsibilities of teaching along with being ready for whatever insanities might befall them. And with old foes returning to cause trouble along with new threats revealing themselves, life will never be boring in Equestria.

Edited by KingJoltik

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Good start with a chapter dedicated to Flash Magnus, this is going to be a great season, season 8 is my favorite for many reasons, (besides the episode where Spike gets his wings which I hope won't be skipped), like Chrysalis' failed plan by stealing the power of the tree, the episode of Starlight and Sunburst's parents, the appearance of the Kirins, etc.

This is an episode I WISH had happened in Season 8. This chapter showed EXACTLY how such an episode could've worked and even how much character progression could've happened. (Yet another reason why I hate the original Season 8.)

I am surprised that Flash Magnus got his own chapter since he doesn't have an episode that focus on him like Rockhoof have but pleasantly surprised.

Here's highlights

"I...see," the mayor replied as he stared at Magnus with a raised eyebrow before looking back at Flash, "I'm happy you're here. These criminals have been causing a lot of damage and destruction. They appeared several days ago and held up a jewelry store. When the store owner tried to fight them off, one of the criminals blasted him backwards with a super loud sound that shattered the windows of every building in the street. Then they stole a bunch of food from the nearby supermarket and took all the cash from the machine. When the store clerks tried to stop them, they were suddenly zapped by something that set the place on fire."

"A super loud sound and getting zapped..." Flash whispered, "Huh. Why does that sound familiar?"

Banshee and Electra, those two troublemakers.

"The plan is simple: Find them, beat them, and make them pay for what they did."

"You're starting to scare me Magnus," Flash replied, "You're not gonna...do something extreme, are you?" Magnus turned to him, seeing him glare at the defender, "Listen, I don't know how things were done in your time. By making them pay, you don't mean killing them, do you?"

Magnus let out a growl, "If that's what it takes. Criminals need to be dealt with.

Damn Magnus, that cold coming from you.

"How'd you do that?!" She glanced back at him, Flash smirking and shifting his head to the side just enough for her to see something green within his ears. "Moss?!"

"What?" Flash asked, holding his hoof to his ear. "What you say?"

"You made moss earplugs?!"

"Come again?" He asked, "Sorry, can't hear you. I made moss earplugs."

"Grrr...you little-"

"I can't hear you, so I'm just gonna get back to fighting! Flash Force!"

:rainbowlaugh:

"I know," Banshee replied, "But you said you fried the other pony. Sentry's not gonna just leave him behind. He'll take him to hospital, and that'll give us plenty of time to get away." But as she said that, a bright light filled the air above them. The mares quickly leapt to the side, seconds before a Flash Force hit the dirt, an explosion coming next.

They both looked up and saw the two pegasi flying down, Flash's sword smoking from the attack he had just unleashed. Electra turned to Banshee, "You were saying?"

Banshee531: The master of Jinxing everyone.

"Come on. Let's get these two tied up before they come around and return to town. I'm sure the mayor will be happy to hear he doesn't have to worry about them anymore. At least until the next group of criminals decide to use this place as their stomping grounds."

Yup, that pretty much minor villains in nutshell. :rainbowlaugh:

Great start to this story. I especially love how you addressed Magnus and Sentry being possibly related.

This was an awesome start to the season! I remember during the your Season 7 finale I was a little disappointed that Flash Sentry didn't really get to interact with Flash Magnus at all, despite having been excited to meet him previously. But I think this chapter more than made up for it, with the two of them bonding together while taking on Banshee and Electra. The moment where Flash explains how his family is apparently connected to Magnus's family tree and that he was named after Magnus was pretty touching, especially when Flash explained that means Magnus really did achieve his dream.

It seems like Flash Magnus is still adjusting to this new world, since he is constantly referring to "his time". He might be behind the curve a bit, but he shows here that he is a fast learner. I thought it was interesting that Magnus decided to stay behind in the village and guard it from any new potential threats. I guess that means he won't be training the new guards in Canterlot here as his job like he did in canon. I admit that is a bit disappointing but this is clearly for a good cause.

"That's impossible," Magnus waved his hoof, "I never had any children."

"You sure? Did you have anypony special back before...you know, you were sucked into limbo?" When Flash said this, Magnus' face grew dim. "You did, didn't you?"

Magnus sighed and leaned back, "Yes. Her name was Sparkling Effervescence. She was an amazing mare. I saved her from a manticore and we grew close. I always hoped I would one day make a home with her...but then the Pony of Shadows appeared and threatened the realm, forcing Starswirl and the rest of us to sacrifice ourselves."

I admit, I mainly like to ship Flash Magnus with Somnambula, so hearing he was hoping to marry someone else before the Pony of Shadows showed up was a bit surprising. Though it is thanks to that relationship we got the rest of Flash's family, so not really a bad thing. Maybe if he ever wants to settle down now he can always try finding love again.

It's off to a good start.
Nice to see Flash Magnus had found his calling, before he became a drill sergeant for the new recruits of Canterlot's Military. If they plan to stick to the original script that is.

double Flash combo they work well together

Wasn't expecting another pillar episode (besides Rockhoof) to start us off, making it a cool surprise! :pinkiehappy: Magnus take on the present world was enjoyable, as well him & Flash taking on those 2 pain in the flank crooks! :rainbowdetermined2:

As for Highlights :

Meanwhile, Flash's class watched as Fire Heart stepped into the center of the room. "Alright class," the teacher said as he touched the crystal. "Today's lesson is about listening to each other and putting your trust in them, even when you can't see what they're doing to try and help you." The crystal glowed and a bunch of walls appeared within the room, forming a large maze around Heart before they disappeared. "In this exercise, the one working through the maze won't be able to see the walls, but their partner will, so they'll be in charge of directing them."

"Wait," Heart spoke up, "Who's my partner again?"

"Take two steps forward and then turn left," Ace's voice replied. The young jakhowl was staring a holographic screen with a layout of the maze and a red triangle that indicated Heart's location.

"Seriously? You gave me Ace? He gets lost in town all the time."

I see we're off to a great start! :rainbowkiss:

"Fine..." Heart sighed before walking left, only to hit an invisible wall, "OW!" He staggered back, turning to glare at Ace. "What the heck?! You said to go left!"

"But before that, I said take two steps forward."

Heart sighed and began to walk forward, only to slam into the wall again. "Ow!" He turned back to Ace, "Seriously?!"

"You changed direction. Turn ninety degrees to your left, then take two steps forward." Flash and the other students couldn't help but laugh at the sight, watching Heart hit wall after wall. And when he eventually stepped out of the maze, he had a lot of bruises on his face.

"That sucked," he moaned while the others laughed again.

lol pretty much what I was expecting! :rainbowlaugh:

"I've decided to assist you with your mission," Magnus stated as he took his shield off his back. The ancient relic shined in the room's light while Flash and Twilight shared a glance, "You said there was at least two criminals. If I go with you, it'll be even, and you'll have a better chance of bringing them to justice."

"I guess," Flash nodded. "But...are you sure you wanna do this? This isn't exactly a thousand years ago."

"Exactly," Magnus replied, "Compared to dragons, sirens and the pony of shadows, a pair of pony criminals won't stand a chance against me.

Open mouth, insert hoof in 3....2,,,,1,,,:facehoof:

"They're here somewhere," Flash continued, only to see a burst of light shine in front of him, making him hold up his sword, "There!" He blocked the bolt of lightning and then swung his weapon, "Flash Cutter!" The energy blade shot off the sword, hitting a tree trunk and causing it to explode.

"Hey!" A female voice yelped as she leapt out into the open to avoid getting crushed by the tree. "Watch where you swing that thing!" Flash saw it was a unicorn mare with a yellow coat and tail that had a cutie mark in the shape of a storm cloud with three lightning bolt rings around it.

"Electra?!" He yelped.

"A mare?" Magnus asked, turning to Flash. "And you know her?"

"Met her a few times," he hissed, "And if she's here, that means-" Before he could finish, a sound filled the air and grew louder, the defender soon spotting a wave of sound flying towards them, "COVER YOUR EARS!" Magnus did so and the pair braced themselves, the soundwaves slamming into them and pushing them back. And as the sound died down, a silver unicorn mare with a mane and tail that was a mix of black and white strips, her cutie mark being a window with glass shattering walked out into the open.

"Another friend of yours?" Magnus asked, his ears ringing a little as he and Flash lowered their hooves.

"Not a friend. Her name's Banshee."

Terrific, the chucklewood duo's back! :ajbemused:

Magnus chuckled at this, but then shook his head. "Sorry Flash, but...I don't think I'll be coming with you."

"What?"

Magnus looked back at the town, Flash doing the same. "This town needs somepony to protect it, and I don't have any place to call home. So...maybe I can make a home for myself here."

"You...wanna stay?"

"Why not?" Magnus asked, turning back at him. "You said it yourself that the town needed better security. I might be out of touch with modern times, but I can still protect this town when it needs it." He glanced over at the mayor, "If you'll have me."

The mayor smiled and nodded, "We would be honored." The rest of the townsponies cheered at this

Can't disagree with you there Magnus! :ajsmug:

Till the next chapter Banshee! :twilightsmile:

Magnus blinked at this, only to feel a great sense of pride fill his heart. "Maybe...maybe you're right. Maybe you are my descendant."
"I hope so," Flash nodded,

I hope not, this universe is getting a little too close as is.

Electra laughed as she fell to the ground on the edge of the river, watching as Magnus shook in pain, only to flop over. "HA! Old fool. Don't you know water conducts electricity?!" Magnus barely heard her, his brain feeling like he had just drunk a hundred tankards of cider. "Later loser!" She covered herself in lightning and shot off, laughing all the way.

Not entirely true, it's the dissolved ionic bonded compounds that carry the current, distilled doesn't conduct water, but more the most part, she is right.

An interesting kick-off for season 8, better than The Maud Couple, but Flash Magnus strikes me as he would more immediately take over the training of the military and set up garrisons, but it is a kick-off.

Honestly, I never liked Mudbriar. He's dull and annoying.

It was okay… I understand why this chapter wasn't very different since last chapter was very original. You did a decent job with this one. (Good use of foreshadowing Sunburst coming to Ponyville and get his job at School of Friendship)

This episode is just the beginning of a lot of controversial episodes from Season 8 (including infamous Marks for Efforts one. :ajbemused:)

Here's highlights

"Oh, that makes sense. A new relationship is always something that takes time to-WHAAAAAAT?!" Wild's jaw hit the floor, with Maud nodding as she pushed his mouth closed.

Classic! :rainbowlaugh:

"So...you have a boyfriend?" He asked, Maud nodding. "An actual flesh and blood boyfriend?" She nodded again, "Huh. Well that's me out of betting pool. Guess Flash is gonna win the pot." Maud raised an eyebrow at this, "Let's just say a lot of ponies had different ideas about how you would reproduce."

Wow! Didn't think Flash and others were actually betting on Maud of all ponies.

Although, I bet Flash must be happy that he won the bet. Cha-Ching!

"Yeah. I always assumed you'd sculpt a pony out of clay and use a spell or something to turn it into a real pony."

Uh… is that Justice League reference? Correct me if I wrong.

"Maud!" She leapt up and hugged her, "Found you!" She then let go, "My turn to hide!" She tried to run off, but Maud grabbed her tail in her mouth, only for Wild to grab Pinkie's face.

"Wild? What are you-"

"Trust me. You're gonna thank me for this." Pinkie raised an eyebrow, only for Wild to run around her so fast that he formed a mini tornado. When it vanished, Pinkie was locked into a straight-jacket tied to a large sack trolley with tape over her mouth.

Funny! Pinkie has been out-Pinkie by her boyfriend! :rainbowlaugh:

"Okay," Wild laughed, "I think we all get it. Maud has a boyfriend. Party time!" He reached into Pinkie's mane and took out a remote, pressing a button that caused lights and a disco ball to appear around them as 'Celebration' started playing. Wild danced on the spot while Pinkie simply stared at Maud in shock and joy.

"Technically, we've already met." Wild couldn't tell if Mudbriar was going along with Pinkie's start over plan or just being really obtuse.

Or both.

"Pinkie!" Wild yelled as he ran after her, "Jeez, I've had to be the voice of reason a lot since Pinkie started being my girlfriend. Not sure how comfortable I am with this." He stopped when he noticed Pinkie now seeing Starlight walking through the town.

Poor Wild! This is what happened when you are in a relationship with Ms. Pinkamena Diane Pie! :pinkiecrazy: :rainbowlaugh:

"No, though a lot of my friends do seem to be in relationships. Guess it's just that time of their life." She heard Pinkie groan as the party pony fell onto her back.

Except Applejack, Starlight.

She and Rogue are not in a relationship… yet. :ajsmug:

"Pinkie!" Wild yelled into the hose, "Come back! You're forcing me to be the voice of reason, AND IT'S NOT A GOOD LOOK FOR ME!"

:rainbowlaugh:

And as a whistle filled the air as the train pulled into the station, Pinkie got on board, only for Wild to run up to her, "WAIT!" He leapt through the train doors, only to hit the floor and slid along till he hit the far wall. "Ow."

"Wild!" Pinkie gasped, "Are you okay?" Wild pushed himself to his hooves as tiny little pegasi began circling his head.

"Wagner loves chicken," he moaned as Pinkie rushed to his side.

Look like Wild is joining Soarin in "Wagner loves chicken" club! :rainbowlaugh:

Trust me. You're gonna thank me for this." Pinkie raised an eyebrow, only for Wild to run around her so fast that he formed a mini tornado. When it vanished, Pinkie was locked into a straight-jacket tied to a large sack trolley with tape over her mouth.

"Impressive." Maud commented as she did one slow clap.

"Thanks. Its something I've picked up while dating her." Wild replied

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:, now that's funny!!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

*Technically* it wasn't too much of a difference but still enjoyable, more so with Wild *trying* to curb down Pinkie's attitude toward Mudbriar somewhat! (not an easy feat:twilightblush:)

So we'll *Technically* get these Highlights out of the way :

Wild wasn't sure how long he was out, but he got to enjoy quite a fun dream involving a roller-coaster flying through space. That is, till he was shaken awake. "Wild!" He heard Lightning call out, making him jolt.

"Wah?" He looked up and saw Lightning staring at him. "Oh...hey."

"Hey, hey, hey," his puppets added.

"Hey bud...got a question." Lightning replied while holding something up: A missing pony poster.

"What's that?" Wild moaned before blinking, only to see Maud was on it. "What the heck?!"

"Your girlfriend's been posting them all over town," Lightning responded, "You wanna tell me what the heck is going on?"

"No idea. I just got back." Wild yawned, slowly stretching his hooves. "But I got a bad feeling about this..."

*sigh* you have no idea Wild! :facehoof:

"The reason I've been unable to spend so much time with my sister is because I now have a boyfriend."

"Oh, that makes sense. A new relationship is always something that takes time to-WHAAAAAAT?!" Wild's jaw hit the floor, with Maud nodding as she pushed his mouth closed.

"I have a boyfriend now. Seeing how happy you and Pinkie are, I decided to take the plunge and ask out somepony I found interesting." Wild was still frozen in place, his eyes wide and his jaw once again sliding open, only to shake his head.

"So...you have a boyfriend?" He asked, Maud nodding. "An actual flesh and blood boyfriend?" She nodded again, "Huh. Well that's me out of betting pool. Guess Flash is gonna win the pot." Maud raised an eyebrow at this, "Let's just say a lot of ponies had different ideas about how you would reproduce."

"Really?"

"Yeah. I always assumed you'd sculpt a pony out of clay and use a spell or something to turn it into a real pony."

"Well that's just ridiculous," Maud responded, "Clay is far too brittle a material. If I was gonna do that, I would use something stronger, like diabase."

LOL wow Maud! :rainbowlaugh: Also does Twilight knows about this bet Flash made?:applejackunsure:

"Trust me. You're gonna thank me for this." Pinkie raised an eyebrow, only for Wild to run around her so fast that he formed a mini tornado. When it vanished, Pinkie was locked into a straight-jacket tied to a large sack trolley with tape over her mouth.

"Impressive." Maud commented as she did one slow clap.

"Thanks. Its something I've picked up while dating her." Wild replied

LOL Wild really knows her alright! :rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy:

"This is just getting stranger and stranger," Wild sighed, "Though I guess having a rock and stick for a pet isn't any weirder then having a bunch of puppets you call your friends."

"Friends, friends, friends."

"Don't patronize me."

There, there Wild! :rainbowkiss:

"So, what about you?" Maud asked, "What do you like in a pony?" Starlight blinked at the question. "So many of your friends have relationships now, you must have thought about finding a pony to be with."

*woot woot woot* launching Glimmy ships!!!:heart:

"Pinkie," Wild jumped in front of the door, "Don't be silly. What about your work at Sugarcube Corner and the school? You can't just up and leave because you're upset with your sister."

"I can and I will," she replied as she curled her tail around the case's handle. "I'm not coming back until I figure out why Maud likes that lame-o!" With that, she reached up and pulled a cord from the ceiling that caused the wall to open up and unleash a vacuum-like hose that sucked her up.

"Pinkie!" Wild yelled into the hose, "Come back! You're forcing me to be the voice of reason, AND IT'S NOT A GOOD LOOK FOR ME!"

Hard playing the straight man in this relationship eh Wild? :twilightblush:

"A geode?" Wild gasped as Limestone nodded.

"That's right," she picked it up to give to Pinkie, "The outside looks like a regular rock, but the inside is filled with beautiful gems." Pinkie's eyes didn't leave the geode, the mare sitting down and looking it over as she thought about what Limestone was trying to say.

"So you're saying I should crack open Mudbriar like a rock!" Wild's eyes went wide at hearing this as Pinkie stood up. "IT ALL MAKES SENSE!

MY LITTLE PONY : MURDER IS MAGIC!!!:pinkiecrazy::twilightoops:

Good chapter Banshee, till the next one! :twilightsmile:

I enjoyed this chapter. You might not have changed a lot of things with the plot of the episode, but I liked all the extra scenes you added that showed different perspectives. Wild Smile was easily the best highlight of the chapter, he made a good foil for Pinkie's reaction to Mudbriar and his reactions to her antics slowly starting to get to him were hilarious. The added scene with Starlight and Maud talking about Starlight potentially getting in a relationship was well done too. It kinda felt like it was foreshadowing a relationship with Sunburst, since it seemed to describe him a lot, especially when he moves to Ponyville to work at the school in Season 9.

Personally, I admit I wasn't the biggest fan of Mudbriar in this episode, but by the time he reappeared in Season 9 he showed to slowly realize how his over-preciseness can be annoying at times and cuts back on it, so he was improving himself. Though at the same time, Pinke was being a bit selfish in the episode by trying to demonize him, but like Limestone said here, she was basically seeing what Maud is like to others without any bias from "sister glasses" influencing her.

And as Wild finished his journey home, he found that Lightning wasn't there either. This wasn't a surprise since Lightning seemed to be spending more time over at Rarity's lately, the unicorn expecting the defender to move out eventually, but right now, he was too tired to really care.

Nice to hear Lightning and Rarity's relationship is still strong.

"Trust me. You're gonna thank me for this." Pinkie raised an eyebrow, only for Wild to run around her so fast that he formed a mini tornado. When it vanished, Pinkie was locked into a straight-jacket tied to a large sack trolley with tape over her mouth.

"Impressive." Maud commented as she did one slow clap.

"Thanks. Its something I've picked up while dating her." Wild replied,

That was equally hilarious and awesome! Looks like Wild can finally match and control Pinkie... to a certain extent.

"Hmm...not really. Romance has never really been something I've looked into. Rarity lent me a couple of her cheesy love novels and honestly, I couldn't get into them. I don't think love is something I can expect in my life."

I don't know Starlight, there was one friend you cared so much about that losing him drove you to villainy for awhile. That's a pretty strong reaction for someone you wouldn't have strong feelings for.

"PINKIE!" He screamed, letting out a sigh as he ran after her. "For once, can't I be the insane one in this relationship?!"

Never thought I'd see the day someone actually wants to be insane, but I guess when dealing with Pinkie you might want a turn eventually.

With that, she shot off as Wild laughed at her retreating form before turning to the two sisters, "Thanks for helping. I owe you one."

"Just keep our sister safe and happy," Limestone replied, "Then we'll be square." Wild nodded before running off, leaving the Pie sisters to get back to work.

Limestone might be my least favorite Pie sister, but you do a good job making her a softie.

was still a lot of fun I enjoyed it is ok to be lazy some times

I like this episode, i like mudbrair but im talking about the good work with wild smile, i have my thoughts in him being the couple of Pinkie Pie, but this episode show me he truly loves her.

Okay, this was fun. I wonder if we'll be seeing more of Flash and the others teaching this season.

I was probably one of the few people that liked Mudbriar when he first appeared. Sure, he's odd, and his quirks are often inconvenient, but I think he has a lot of opportunities to be interesting if only the writers would take the time to show the audience the world through his eyes.

Maud thought about it and smiled. "I like how he focuses on what words to say before saying it. And how he always points out the truth about things. There are so many mistakes that happen in this world because ponies just say the first thing that pops into their heads and don't take the time to explain the most important details."

I think I can understand why that characteristic can be seen as desirable. One unfortunate side affect of being that kind of a person is that you tend to get stuck on words a lot because you worry about misusing or overusing certain words. I should know. :twilightblush: Is that something that's typical for people to worry about? :applejackunsure:

As an autistic, I instantly could relate to Mudbriar, I knew EXACTLY what kind of character he was and it made Pinkie's antics more annoying to me than anything but luckily she seemed to get better by the end of the episode.

A much better take on the story than the show. Wild provided a much-needed 'viewers' perspective. So can we hope for more of the other Pie Sisters?

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I know a lot of people find Mudbriar's fixation on precision annoying, but I kinda understand where he's coming from. Language has a ton of ambiguity, and it's way too easy to misinterpret what people say to you. It's even easier if you have trouble picking up social cues. I'd like to think Mudbriar often misinterprets what other ponies mean when they try to communicate with him, so he overcompensates by trying way too hard to make sure he gives them nothing to misinterpret.

The love that I read in this chapter was something beautiful, Soarin did use all his heart in this one, I hardly know how to write romance but I can understand it a little, you make romance work very well in your stories and that is admirable.:rainbowkiss:

The situations that happened, because of the way the characters behaved, could easily have been an episode of the original series, I know we already had the one with Big Mac and Sugarbelle but even so, your level of writing far exceeded it.:eeyup:

PS: With all this I just hope that in season 9 you don't skip the Dragon Dropped chapter, because that was a great Spike chapter, besides being the last test of Rarity's generosity, and I think that in your fic it will be better since he lost the love he had for Rariry:moustache::duck:

I wonder if this means Dash and Soarin will also be the first to have kids. :trixieshiftright: Eh, maybe save that for the series finale. :twilightsheepish:

Very unexpected but I glad you went with this route than Rainbow Dash being a caretaker of Granny Smith and her friends (I still don't understand why Applejack went to her to look out for them than other Mane Six)

What's a fitting chapter for Soarin and Rainbow finally becomes husband and wife.

I like his parents are nice and willing to help out their son.

Here's highlights

"Got it!" Rainbow exclaimed as she slammed the locker shut, "I'm gonna go get packed right now!" With that, she shot out of the room so fast that the other pegasi had to brace themselves to keep from being knocked over. And when she disappeared, Fleetfoot turned to Soarin and smirked.

"So, you're really gonna do it?" She asked, "You're really gonna ask her this weekend?"

Wait, what? :rainbowhuh:

"Yeah..." Soarin slowly nodded, "I am."

What are you talking about?

"I can't believe it," Misty almost squealed like a little girl. "If this works, you and Crash will be the first married couple to ever fly together in the Wonderbolts."

Spits drink

WHAT?!?!?!?!?! :pinkiegasp:

"In the middle of a fight," Grand replied, everypony now turning to him. The sight made him glare back, "What?! We were in a really bad battle, and I thought we were gonna die! I wanted to know if she would marry me, so I blurted it out before I could stop myself and uh...we managed to win by the skin of our teeth."

"And then she said yes?"

"Yup." Grand nodded. "Best decision of my life."

Well, that is one crazy way to propose to your wife, Grand. :pinkiegasp:

"So...what did Rainbow's parents say when you told them you we going to propose?" Twilight asked, making Soarin raise an eyebrow. "You did tell them, right?"

"Was I supposed too?"

:facehoof: DAMN IT, SOARIN!

"Can't we just fly over it?" Bow asked, only for Soarin to grab a pebble off the ground and toss it over the gate, the Dash family going wide eyed when the peddle was suddenly electrocuted by a barrier that was expelled from the top of the gate and formed a dome around the house. "Nevermind."

Damn... :pinkiegasp:

"You read my mind!" Rainbow cheered as the pair ran out of the room, only for the front door of the condo to suddenly open up.

Soarin went wide-eyed as he saw a light blue pegasus mare step through the doorway, dressed in a red business suit with her graying yellow mane was up in a bun. Behind her was a bulky black pegasus stallion with a navy-blue mane and tail like Soarin's, who was also dressed in a suit and tie.

"Mom?!" He asked, "Dad?! What are you doing here?!"

We finally meet his parents for the first time.

"If Rainbow says yes, they will," Bow instantly replied, only for the others to stare at him, the pegasi instantly slapping his own head, "Idiot."

:facehoof: Damn it, Bow.

"I don't think so," Atmos shook her head

Don't you means his head?

"What's this all about?" Soarin blinked at her, opening his mouth to pop the ultimate question. But as he did this, his throat suddenly dried up. The speech he had practiced with his friends completely vanished from his brain. Fear that Rainbow would say no and ruin their relationship.

"I...er...well...nothing," he squeaked out, "Nothing important. I was just...wondering." Rainbow tilted her head at this, only to nod as the fountain's display came to an end.

"Rainbow Dash, will you marry me?"

Come on, come on, say yes.

Rainbow's brain stopped at this as her heart beat a million times a minute, the whole situation washing over her. Then, she did something Soarin hadn't heard from her in a long time. "Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh!" She covered her mouth with her hooves as tears filled her eyes. "I...I can't believe this is happening!" Soarin's fears began to return, but then Rainbow spoke up again. "Of course I'll marry you!"

YESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!

so when will it be Flash and Twilight's turn?
this was fun was surprised Twilight was among those who looked at their boyfriends at the whole married thing thought she would be too busy

"In the middle of a fight," Grand replied, everypony now turning to him. The sight made him glare back, "What?! We were in a really bad battle, and I thought we were gonna die! I wanted to know if she would marry me, so I blurted it out before I could stop myself and uh...we managed to win by the skin of our teeth."

Was that a Pirates of the Caribbean reference?

Good choice.
Really loved every word of it.

Whoa Nelly, totally blindsided by this move you pulled with Rainbow/Soarin here Banshee! :rainbowderp::heart: Glad you took that overprotecting AJ episode & turned it into something wonderful for RD here! :pinkiehappy: Now I wonder if they'll become parents first now eh???:raritywink:

As for Highlights :

And when she disappeared, Fleetfoot turned to Soarin and smirked.

"So, you're really gonna do it?" She asked, "You're really gonna ask her this weekend?"

"Yeah..." Soarin slowly nodded, "I am."

"I can't believe it," Misty almost squealed like a little girl. "If this works, you and Crash will be the first married couple to ever fly together in the Wonderbolts."

Wait what???? Soarin you sly dog!:raritywink:

Within an hour, the entire friendship council, minus Rainbow, and the Defenders were gathered in the throne room. "So...what's up?" Twilight asked as she and Spike sat in their thrones. "I hope this is important, because I've got a bunch of papers that need grading."

"And I was in the middle of assembling a very important dress," Rarity added.

"Come on everypony," Flash chimed in, "I'm sure Soarin wouldn't have asked us here if it wasn't important." He turned to the pegasus, "Right Soarin?"

"Yeah," Soarin nodded, "it's really important." He looked around at all the expectant ponies, taking a deep breath before stating his intentions. "I wanna ask Rainbow Dash to marry me."

Silence filled the room, most going wide-eyed before the silence was broken by a loud girly squeal that echoed through the castle. It was Rarity, who continued to unleash this sound while everypony else covered their ears. "I don't believe it!" She cried a few seconds later, the mare looking ready to start weeping.

Surprised Rarity didn't shattered the castle's windows there! :raritystarry:

The group exchanged glances, only for Lightning to turn to Grand, "Hey, how did you propose to grandma?"

"In the middle of a fight," Grand replied, everypony now turning to him. The sight made him glare back, "What?! We were in a really bad battle, and I thought we were gonna die! I wanted to know if she would marry me, so I blurted it out before I could stop myself and uh...we managed to win by the skin of our teeth."

"And then she said yes?"

"Yup." Grand nodded. "Best decision of my life."

"Yeah...let's not go with that." Flash commented, his old mentor now glaring at him.

"I don't see you having any better ideas." Grand barked back.

"I didn't say I did." Flash deadpanned, "I just don't think we should put their lives in danger."

"Well I thought it was romantic. I bet Rainbow would like some danger with her proposal." Everypony glared at Grand at this, the defender letting out a huff, "Fine...no danger then."

lol sorry Grand, guess you'll have to take the *monster of the week* back to it's pen! :rainbowkiss::twilightsheepish:

Soarin smiled and nodded back, "I can't believe one of our group is going to get married. I never thought Rainbow would be the first..." The mares in a relationship turned to their significant other, all of which suddenly got very interested in the ceiling and the floor.

Ermmm oh look, a distraction! *throws smoke bomb on the floor*:rainbowderp:

That is, till Soarin suddenly flew past where the fireworks were exploding, Rainbow calling out to him, but Soarin remained silent. He then stopped and turned back to Rainbow, smiling at her as several fireworks shot into the air. And as they exploded, Soarin began flying around and unleashing a trail of smoke behind him like he did during Wonderbolt shows. He zipped around, Rainbow stared at the smoke as she saw that the smoke trail was making a bunch of words.

And slowly, as the sentence formed in the sky, Rainbow's eyes went wide as Soarin completed six words, the fireworks exploding behind him to form a rainbow.

RAINBOW DASH,
WILL YOU MARRY ME?

:pinkiesad2: That was beautiful!!! :fluttercry:

Quite the ride for our daring pegasus mare, looking forward to see what the rest of S8's gonna be like Banshee! :twilightsmile:

This chapter was FIRE !!!!! I loved it so much, great work as always. I have only 1 problem, I would have choose Twilight to preside over the ceremonie rather than Mayor Mare because it would have been a reminder of the joke at the end of the friendship mission of Twilight and Flash at the seperated gender town ( you know what chapter I'm referring to or other will know). Continue this good work my friend.

Holy cow! Now that's how you break the status quo!

I was surprised to see such an important development this early into the season, but I fully welcome it. Soarindash is my second favorite ship in MLP, right behind Flashlight, so I am perfectly okay that they are the first couple to be officially married, especially since they were the first couple to hook up in this series. I thought it was interesting that you essentially used this chapter as a replacement for "Grannies Gone Wild", since although that episode wasn't bad or anything, my personal favorite moment from it was the bit of ship tease Rainbow and Soarin had in the opening scene together. This was a very beautiful and heartwarming chapter though, and I was grinning the whole way through just waiting for Soarin to pop the question. The big display he finally did towards the end was amazing and romantic, and I am also glad we finally got to meet his parents too. They seem nice and I'm glad they got along with Rainbow and her family.

I wonder how the two of them being married will change everything going forward? I would guess that Soarin would probably move in to Rainbow's house with her, and that might mean he will become a more permanent addition to the main cast instead of just being a recurring character. That also means that Rainbow and Soarin could essentially start having kids eventually too, but I think that might be something better for the finale or the time-skip at the end.

I wonder how this will affect the rest of the series?

I like that in contrast to the last episode where it's about Soarin and Rainbow becoming husband and wife but in this one, it's about the couple being essentially divorced.

I also like you chose to expand the world of Mount Aris and Seaquestria and giving development to Sky Beak and Ocean Flow and their reason why they are separate.

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"You both need to go in order to do that?" Apple Bloom asked, causing the older ponies to blush as Scootaloo leaned over to her friends.

"Sounds like somepony just wants a vacation." They all giggled at this, making them blush even harder.

"Easy," Flash growled, "I might not be able to stop you from going on this mission, but I can ground you when we get back."

That shut Scootaloo up while the other girls continued to laugh.

Ha! Not so funny anymore, Scootaloo? :rainbowlaugh:

"Just don't do anything that might cause problems!" The girls nodded again as they all headed for the refreshment tent. As they walked in, they stared at the food before seeing Terramar's father fill a trio of cups with a pink liquid.

Uh… yeah about that. 😬

"This place seems familiar," he commented before snapping his hoof. "Right, I didn't really get a good chance to see it last time. This is the area Queen Novo sent us through when we...were...uh..." he glanced over at Twilight. The alicorn realized he was about to say when they were banished after she attempted to steal the pearl, the princess blushing at this.

Despite Novo forgive her, Flash still never live Twilight down about what she did in the movie. :rainbowlaugh:

"Ugh..." Twilight blushed, "That was...quite an experience."

"Yes, it takes some getting used to. Now, would you like some snacks?"

:rainbowlaugh:

Sky Beak smiled as he placed a claw on the pegasi's shoulder. "The world isn't always sunshine and roses kid. You're one of your kingdom's greatest heroes, so you must understand that with great power comes great responsibility. One day you may find you have to make a choice like mine. To stay with the mare you love, or to do something that'll take you away from her but allow her to live the life she deserves."

Spits drink

Did he actually uses "With great power comes great responsibility" line on Flash?!

I know the lot of you were likely hoping to see more of the actual episode, but damn is that episode not a good one. I don't think I could do it justice. Instead, I chose to look at the other side of what the episode was trying to show. The parent's side of the separation. Hope you enjoyed it.

I agree with you.

The actual episode was just Scootaloo and Sweetie fighting over something that could've easily be fix.

I glad you went the route with Terramar's parents.

Love the chapter.

Looking forward to more soon.

It was a good extension of this great episode, but from the parents side! Glad that Twilight/Flash got to spend some time together that didn't involve a crisis/monster of the week, plus some sweet lore with the hippogriffs is always welcomed! :pinkiehappy:

Highlights include :

"Agreed," Twilight magicked up a list, "Starlight has agreed to take over my classes until we get back. You think Springer will be okay filling in for you?"

"You kidding? That jakhowl's been eager to try his paw at teaching my class for ages. Can't wait to get back and see if he manages to do it, or is completely in over his head."

So it's a 50/50 type deal? Don't choke Springer! :rainbowkiss:

"Oh, COME ON!" Heart yelled, "Why is everypony getting to go on a friendship mission except me?! Soul, Spike and now Scootaloo?! I'm the only one who lives here that hasn't been called!"

"Springer and the jakhowl cubs haven't been called either," Flash pointed out. "Though if they were, I've gotta wonder what would start glowing. Maybe those spikes on their paws?"

Hmmm foreshadowing maybe? :applejackunsure:

Flash stayed at the tent and licked his lips at the sight of some spring rolls, the pegasus grabbing one. He took a large bite out of it, only to spit it out. "Augh!" he moaned, "What kind of spring rolls are these?"

"Sushi," the hippogriff at the stall smiled while Flash frowned

lol that's what you get for letting your stomach decide first Flash! :rainbowlaugh:

Soft let out a small sigh at this, "My son was so determined to see what this place looked like that I...I realized I had to come up and try to make a place for him to live if he ever returned."

Flash grimaced at this, only to reply, "Well...I'm sure that when he returns, you'll have a great home waiting for him."

Hopefully with a better outcome than during the war! *keeps claws crossed*:twilightsheepish:

They nodded as Twilight suddenly frowned. "Um...is there anywhere I can go to the bathroom around here? In fact, how do I go to the bathroom in this body?"

lol that's what you get for not going earlier Twilight! :rainbowkiss:

Sky Beak smiled as he placed a claw on the pegasi's shoulder. "The world isn't always sunshine and roses kid. You're one of your kingdom's greatest heroes, so you must understand that with great power comes great responsibility. One day you may find you have to make a choice like mine. To stay with the mare you love, or to do something that'll take you away from her but allow her to live the life she deserves."

Those words made Flash's mind go back to when he had met the Fire Heart of the future. He knew what it meant, and given the scar Heart now wore...it was still going to happen. "I know what you mean." Flash sighed, "I just...I just hope I never have to make that choice."

Oh geez! *dread senses tingling* :fluttercry:

Good chapter Banshee, till the next one! :twilightsmile:

This was a great episode in canon because of how much we got out of it, and it was pretty fun that you managed to show a different side to it by showing Twilight and Flash's perspective instead of the CMC's. I also think it is funny how Fire Heart is still upset he hasn't gotten one himself yet. I bet chances are when he finally gets one he'll end up regretting it, like it being at a bad time like Spike's was or just not enjoying the task.

The actual episode kept it a little vague on whether Sky Beak and Ocean Flow were actually divorced or just living in separate homes now, but it is easy to see how it could be referencing a divorce. A bit sad that it is much more thoroughly confirmed here that they are no longer married, but at least they clearly still care about each other.

Still it was pretty fun to see more sides of the hippogriff and seapony cultures. It was interesting how Queen Novo got the idea to split the pearl shards among everyone due to being told what happened to Wingill, and Flash got to talk to Soft Current some more, which I thought was nice since their last conversation was cut short due to Flash and the others getting kicked out. Ocean Flow talking about life in Seaquestria was one of my favorite parts, especially when she talked about how they can control what gender an egg hatches as depending on the temperature.

The last big event had been Rainbow and Soarin's wedding, the pair having yet to return from their honeymoon in Rainbow Falls.

I know I enjoyed that event all week. I hope those two are enjoying themselves, and I'm excited for their return.

Sky Beak smiled as he placed a claw on the pegasi's shoulder. "The world isn't always sunshine and roses kid. You're one of your kingdom's greatest heroes, so you must understand that with great power comes great responsibility. One day you may find you have to make a choice like mine. To stay with the mare you love, or to do something that'll take you away from her but allow her to live the life she deserves."

Those words made Flash's mind go back to when he had met the Fire Heart of the future. He knew what it meant, and given the scar Heart now wore...it was still going to happen.

Wow, another grim reminder of Flash's fate. I know Heart's scar means the future and events he told Flash about are still happening, and I have to admit I'm still nervous about Flash's fate and what he can try to do to change it.

Great reworking of this épisode.

Yeah, I have opinions about this, but I'm not entirely comfortable expressing them here given how sensitive the subject matter is. That being said, it's nice that Ocean Flow and Sky Beak are so amicable with each other. It's a quite a lapse on their part that they failed to account for how the separation was going to affect their children, but stuff like that happens. At least, they're not badmouthing each other or trying to force their children to take sides because that does happen, and apparently, it's happened often enough that professional advice-givers have had to explicitly tell parents not to do that.

not sure they divorced in the show but it was a interesting idea

I just wondering what would Zephyr Breeze think of this?

It was good chapter for Young Six and the lesson is good.

Poor Sandbar, he always step on Cow poos. :rainbowlaugh:

Here's highlights

Flash, Twilight, Pinkie and Rainbow were now in the teacher's lounge. "So," Twilight floated a cup of tea up to Rainbow, "How are you enjoying married life?"

"It's pretty good," Rainbow responded as she took a sip, "Soarin moved in with me, so that's fun. I never knew how much I missed coming home every day and finding somepony else there. Plus, Tank really likes him, so that's good."

Look like we will be seeing Soarin a lot and it's nice to see how their married life so far.

Sandbar let out a laugh, "Whatever it is, I'm sure we'll knock it out of the park. The six of us together are a crew that can't be beat."

"Too bad Ace and Mira aren't in this class," Ocellus added, "Them being with us is even better."

"Yeah," Smolder nodded, "But Sandbar's right. It's just gonna be a simple exercise. We can beat that easy."

You will regret saying that, Smolder.

Gallus then unlocked the door, pulling it open, only for a series of moos to fill the air before the cows began to charge. "WHOA!" He yelped as they rushed past him, causing the griffon to spin around on the spot before falling to the ground.

Sandbar laughed at seeing Gallus laid out, his eyes spinning. He laughed so much that he didn't notice something right behind him, stepping back before feeling his hoof surrounded by something hot and slimy. "Ew!" Gallus then got up at this and started laughing at him.

"I think that's called a cowpat, but ew works too." Sandbar sighed as Gallus kept laughing.

You deserve that, Sandbar! Karma! :rainbowlaugh:

"If bees make something so great, I say let as many bees as possible come by!" Silverstream cheered, nobody disagreeing with her. Their hatred of bees had transformed into respect and love. It was clear now that every creature on the planet deserved to be there, for each one played a vital role. And as long as every creature was respected, the world would always bee in perfect balance.

You made that pun on purpose, did you Banshee?

Flash, Twilight, Pinkie and Rainbow were now in the teacher's lounge. "So," Twilight floated a cup of tea up to Rainbow, "How are you enjoying married life?"

"It's pretty good," Rainbow responded as she took a sip, "Soarin moved in with me, so that's fun. I never knew how much I missed coming home every day and finding somepony else there. Plus, Tank really likes him, so that's good."

I wonder how Zephyr Breeze feel about this?
Great chapter by the way.

Is the game played by Ace and Mira a reference to Pooh Sticks?

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Zephyr Breeze will be heart broken but he'd get over it.

This was a pretty relaxing chapter. It is nice the Student Six are getting a little more focus to flesh them out a bit more and show how well they are progressing. Interesting how something as simple as being scared of a bee can result in learning a lesson like this.

I have to admit, the running gag of Sandbar stepping in cowpat was hilarious.

"Why should we care about a bunch of disgusting bugs?" Smolder asked as Ocellus turned to glare at her. "Not you. The tiny ones that look gross."

Watch those kinds of comments Smolder. You don't want to get mistaken for a racist like Neighsay.

Flash, Twilight, Pinkie and Rainbow were now in the teacher's lounge. "So," Twilight floated a cup of tea up to Rainbow, "How are you enjoying married life?"

"It's pretty good," Rainbow responded as she took a sip, "Soarin moved in with me, so that's fun. I never knew how much I missed coming home every day and finding somepony else there. Plus, Tank really likes him, so that's good."

"Ooh!" Pinkie's body vibrated. "Are you guys gonna have kids?" Twilight and Flash stared at Rainbow, the pegasi now blushing and twiddling her hooves.

"We're...gonna hold off on that. We just got married, so adding a kid into the mix right away might be a bit too much. Plus, I'd have to stop Wonderbolt activities while I was pregnant. No way I'm giving that up yet." Pinkie's mane slightly deflated as the others nodded, only for Fluttershy to walk in with a frown on her face.

Good to hear they are doing well. I knew Soarin was going to move in with Rainbow, but nice to see he and Tank are getting along. It also makes sense they don't have any plans to have kids just yet. Some married couples usually want to wait a few years before they start having kids. Guess Pinkie will need to wait a little longer before getting to throw parties for more babies.

Smolder raised an eyebrow at this, "Isn't that a bit childish?"

"Yeah, so? We're kids."

"And even if we were adults, Springer always said there's no point in being grown up if you can't be childish sometimes."

Wise words from the 4th Doctor.

"You're really good at...whatever you were doing," Silverstream replied, "But what are you doing? Is it some kind of game?"

"I'm learning to use a chain mace," Heart responded, "Flash wants me to be an expert in every single weapon for some reason. Don't know why, since I'll only use one when I get my Celestic Gear. But it's still cool to use all these different weapons."

Flash probably wants him to be prepared for whatever type of weapon his Celestic Gear turns out to be.

"Victory dance!" Sandbar cheered before feeling his back hoof land in something the cows had left while waiting for them. "Oh, come on!"

Wow, Sandbar can not catch a break!

At the School of Friendship, life was pretty fun. Many of the students were currently in class, either designing or making dresses with Rarity, baking with Pinkie Pie or getting cats out of trees with Flash.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

"Check it out," Ace replied, "It's a game Springer taught us. We both drop a stick into the water on one side of the bridge and run to the other side."

Oh, my gosh! Yes! Pooh Sticks! :pinkiehappy:

"And even if we were adults, Springer always said there's no point in being grown up if you can't be childish sometimes."

Dr. Who reference?

That was a fun chapter. I wonder if the twins and the cubs are going to have adventures of their own in later chapters.

Sweet chapter featuring the Young Six, especially since we didn't have a lot of those in canon. The lesson was well done, even if poor Sandy got the *luck of the irish* this time around! :pinkiesick::rainbowlaugh:

Ok class, here are your Highlights :

"Everyone," Fluttershy frowned, "There's nothing to be scared of. It's just a bee."

"Of course there's something to be scared of," Sandbar yelped, "I got stung by one once and it felt horrible. I make it a point that whenever I see a bee, I run in the other direction! Besides, if there's one there could be a whole swarm!"

The others students all nodded, Gallus turning to Smolder. "What are you so scared about? Bees can't hurt you."

"They can't?" Smolder asked, Gallus proving his point by poking her with his talons, only for her scales to keep her safe. "Oh, sorry. Never seen one of those things. We don't have them in the dragon lands."

Forgot about your armored scales there eh Smoldy? :twilightsheepish:

"It's pretty good," Rainbow responded as she took a sip, "Soarin moved in with me, so that's fun. I never knew how much I missed coming home every day and finding somepony else there. Plus, Tank really likes him, so that's good."

"Ooh!" Pinkie's body vibrated. "Are you guys gonna have kids?" Twilight and Flash stared at Rainbow, the pegasi now blushing and twiddling her hooves.

"We're...gonna hold off on that. We just got married, so adding a kid into the mix right away might be a bit too much. Plus, I'd have to stop Wonderbolt activities while I was pregnant. No way I'm giving that up yet." Pinkie's mane slightly deflated as the others nodded

Whoa whoa Pinkie, let them walk a bit before running girl! :rainbowderp:

"Alright. And one last piece of advice. If you find yourself having difficulty completing this, remember that everything in connected." The students blinked at this, remembering Professor Fluttershy saying the same thing the previous day, only for Flash to yell, "And go!"

Nice hint there Flash! :raritywink:

Gallus then unlocked the door, pulling it open, only for a series of moos to fill the air before the cows began to charge. "WHOA!" He yelped as they rushed past him, causing the griffon to spin around on the spot before falling to the ground.

Sandbar laughed at seeing Gallus laid out, his eyes spinning. He laughed so much that he didn't notice something right behind him, stepping back before feeling his hoof surrounded by something hot and slimy. "Ew!" Gallus then got up at this and started laughing at him.

"I think that's called a cowpat, but ew works too." Sandbar sighed as Gallus kept laughing.

lol you had that coming Sandy! :pinkiesick::rainbowlaugh:

"It was a walk in the park," Smolder added before she suddenly started coughing feathers. But as Ocellus patted her on the back, the room flashed red as a beeping sound filled the air.

"What that?" Yona asked.

"The fail noise..." the changeling gasped, "We...we didn't accomplish the mission."

"How is that possible?" Gallus yelped.

"What did we miss?" Smolder added, the group now staring at their teachers as they smiled.

"It's not a test if we give you the answer," Flash responded.

You need to *bee* more observant kids! :raritywink:

Gallus opening the barn doors and this time leaping to the side so the cows wouldn't stampede over him. "Ha!" He cheered as the last cow left, the griffon stepping back in front of the shed. "Not this time." But then he realized one cow was missing, only for it to suddenly shoot past him, "WHOA!"

Sandbar laughed at that, "I thought by now you'd know not to do that." But then he backpedaled into slimy hot goo again. "Augh!"

"You were saying?" Gallus cackled before they quickly got the cows lassoed up and pulled them to the safe zone

Seriously Sandy, did you pissed off a black cat this morning? :facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

The students shrugged before grabbing their own sticks from the nearby trees. They all returned a minute later, each with their own stick...except Yona. "That's a branch," Sandbar told the yak as she held a two-foot tree arm in her mouth.

"Does it not still count as stick?" Yona asked, the others rolling their eyes

Yak always go big eh? :twilightsheepish:

"Don't knock flowers till you've tried 'em," Sandbar chimed in, "But I don't get it. Why did the flowers and grass die? They looked perfectly fine after the fire."

"I think that's what we have to solve!" Silverstream exclaimed, "The fire did something to make the flowers unable to survive, so what do plants and flowers need?" They all exchanged glances, most thinking about water or sunlight, only for Ocellus's eyes to go wide.

"Pollination!" She gasped, "They need pollination!"

"Pollen...what?" Gallus asked.

"It's what allow plants to develop seeds that they can use to reproduce," Ocellus responded, "But they can't be pollinated by themselves. There are certain types of animals that do it: Hoverflies, hawkmoths, and the most well-known pollinators-"

"Bees!" Smolder's eyes went wide, remembering the beehives she had seen when she first saved the chickens. "We didn't save the bees!" They then remembered the incident yesterday and how Fluttershy had tried to explain why bees were so special, which none of them believed or even listened to.

"It's just like what Professor Flash and Fluttershy said," Silverstream whispered, "Everything is connected."

Ding Ding Ding.....and book bug gets it!!!:raritystarry:

"Honey?!" They all yelped, Fluttershy soon explaining what it was and where it came from.

"If bees make something so great, I say let as many bees as possible come by!" Silverstream cheered, nobody disagreeing with her. Their hatred of bees had transformed into respect and love. It was clear now that every creature on the planet deserved to be there, for each one played a vital role. And as long as every creature was respected, the world would always bee in perfect balance.

Wow that pun kinda *stung* :rainbowlaugh:

Cool chapter Banshee, till next week! :twilightsmile:

was nice to see them all shine

Great chapter.
And a great lesson too.

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