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Discombobulated Soul


As a writer, my expansive vocabulary and thorough knowledge of grammar are my only saving graces. Please help, the world is too vorticose and gyratory!

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Pound Cake spends Hearth's Warming Eve with his fillyfriend, Flurry Heart.

Flurry Heart is an alicorn.

Alicorns love only one thing more than sugar:

Snuggling.

This can only end in fuzz.

(And candy, but mostly fuzz.)


Written for Kikio3000 for Jinglemas 2022. I hope she and you find it an enjoyable read!

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Comments ( 5 )

This story is so sweet I got hyperglycemic shock just from reading it.

Well played.

This was cute, I loved it.

Pound rushed forward once more in hopes of catching her in a classic romantic move seen in all the movies, but a pair of crystal ponies beat him to it. The mares caught the spiraling princess easily enough and immediately set to removing the various tangled decorations from around her form. The young stallion made it over to them just in time to catch the end of what sounded like a light chastisement as they finished removing the mess.

I'm sure a pound would have catch her

Pound Cake's fillyfriend was a pinkish torpedo, one that impacted his creation at speeds rivaling that of sound itself as a demented squeal of glee issued forth from her lips. Flurry's alicorn teeth met the hardened, tempered and reinforced gingerbread, (plain gingerbread wouldn't have held up a whole house, after all, and Pound wasn't one to take chances) with one force being simply too great for the other.

Pinkie Pie would be so proud of flurry heart

Awww this was a pretty adorable story I'm a little late for the Christmas holiday stories but I still like this and I really like the shipping between those two even though I really wish we could get to see more character of those young kids growing up how they've been doing and everything but hey it's still nice to see them and I could definitely see how flurry heart will act if she hangs out with Pinkie Pie so much but it's a very nice story and how much these two really care for each other keep up the good work

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