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Bendy


I like big ponies and I cannot lie.

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After washing her hooves Pinkie Pie struggled to turn off the tap. How long can her patience hold out before she snaps and goes crazy?

Teen Rated: Mild profanity.

Note: Some of this is based off real events that took place in my life.

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I don't think it's very funny. I'm not downvoting it, because I only downvote trollfics for the most part, but I honestly think you should have looked at this a few more times.

1. You write like it's a telly-telly childrens book that you're trying to get published. Nothing flows correctly, in my opinion.

2. Why would there be a tap in ponyville if nopony knows how to use it. You can make funny concepts, but keep them logical, please.

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Thanks for not downvoting it. It's a fan fiction, I like to throw logic out the window.

I know full well I can't write to save my life.

Certain aspects in this fan fiction I based on events that took place in my life, such I fixing a tap with a sledge hammer's weight to suppress tap to stop it from running.

fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/264/1/8/tap_fixed_with_sledge_hammer_by_jackermon-d5felb1.jpg

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I did bash the tap with a hammer in anger as Pinkie Pie did, but that only made it worse, but the sledge hammer fixed it.

Quite honestly, the photo in the comments makes this funny. :pinkiehappy:

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But otherwise it's not? Ah, well can't write good all the time.

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It had its moments of humour but I was expecting Sugarcube Corner to explode or something.

Just deleted a spam post from rwkjndwkj.

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Hmm, yes. Perhaps I should have done that, but then again it's based off events that took places in my life.

And then the tap blew up.
:pinkiegasp: Oh BUCK no...

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Alternate ending?

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Plausibly.
Of course, at that point Pinkie would just massacre the house and tell the Cakes they're going to live in tents as she sadistically taps the sledgehammer.

I can't help but feel sad that now my tap is fixed from that plumber.

fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/278/f/e/tap_now_fixed_by_jackermon-d5gvlc7.jpg

Comment posted by CrimsonEquine deleted Feb 21st, 2014
Comment posted by Bendy deleted Feb 21st, 2014
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