Granny Smith I want Grand Foals. Big Mac and Applejack we are your grand Foals. Granny Smith then I want great-grand foals.

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I'll admit that was a bit of an oversight on my part, but I'll play it by saying she raised them for so long they're basically her foals.

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But we can exactly Blaine Granny Smith just want to see more foals running around the house and tell them about Apple traditions. She needs to tell Applejack tell her that she needs to put a foal in that blue rainbow one she likes so much.:)

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I don't know when it'll happen, but in my notes its mentioned she already knows about their relationship and will tease AJ about it. Examples would be like:

"Why does everypony put things so high on the shelf? We'll be needin a pegasus to help at this rate."

Applejack is really hard on himself, tho that does fit Honesty is hard to be sometimes, great stuff so far

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Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm hoping to finish this story by the end of the year, and start planning for the actual sequel with Dusk and Nightmare Moon, but I can't give an estimate as to when that'll be.

Of this two chapters so far, what about them do you like?

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love how Applejack feels, He seems like the type who goes to the family when he is thinking something over, And do to what he is thinking about he is cut off form what his normal way of doing thinking, So his already hard question from Dusk is even harder, So in short you made AJ feel real