I do not care for the clop, but the story as a whole was well written and a good sequel to the morning.

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To be honest, I was hesitant writing the clop. I wasn't sure if I should release it at all, but I wanted to challenge myself a bit and I wanted to test the reception to it. Thanks for reading though! I am very happy you enjoyed it!

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should have entered it into the NSFW contest.
could have won the plot category i think.

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Really, you think so? Awfully nice of you to say... But there was a contest? In a group, or is there a designated site location for those?

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Yeah, seeing how this is mostly plot with the fap tacked on, i think you'd have good chances:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/216529/dezmos-nsfw-contest
There are many stories suddenly popping up because of this.

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Aw, shucks. My story isn't eligible for being too long, and the deadline was yesterday. Real shame, but whatever. I wrote this for fun. But I'll keep that in mind for later. Thanks for the link!

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Keep writing please.
I may not like clop, but otherwise i enjoy reading well written stuff.

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Not planning on stopping anytime soon. I'm sure you'll see me around again.

Doesn't Sunset have her own house?

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She lives in an apartment, not a house. A rather small one, in fact. It's not even equipped with a kitchen. The YouTube Short called "Monday Blues" gives a good sense of their living arrangements.

That was all really cute. Keep up the great work!!!

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Thank you kindly! I intend to!

My favorite pair being adorable.

Yea, the universe had it out for you Sunny, but it balanced the scales in the end.

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Yeah, I think so too. And I'm glad that you found it cute. I've been finding that cutesy stuff is pretty fun to write.

Put a little bow on the end of a bad day. Love wins. Excellent.

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Thank you for the compliment! I'm always happy to hear when people are enjoying my stories. As for Nightlight... I like to imagine that he did a little fist-pump out of pride for his daughter after that call. I always imagined him as that kinda dad.
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Nothing does a bad day better than spending some quality time with your lover.

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Thanks! I'm pretty satisfied with how it turned out, and I'm always happy to hear that others enjoy it as well.

I like how... for lack of a better word, 'realistic' it all was. Like... they weren't going at it for hours, they didn't display the stamina of professionals, it was just... a nice first-time exploration. It was cute. It was endearing. It was heart-warming. Including all the awkwardness that was to be expected. And they took it in stride and giggled about it. Sounds healthy.
I enjoyed the ride.

Thank you for writing!

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That was the intention, and I'm glad I managed to capture it well!
Thank you very much for reading, and especially for commenting! I very much appreciate it!

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You're welcome. I know how much of a difference that can make.
You did good.

Twilight immediately moved in for a kiss, once again surprising Sunset. At first, it was gentle and experimental, and then she went in for another. Then another. Each was more forceful and eager than the last, slowly building back up the intensity that they shared on the couch. Soon, her hands let go of Sunset’s and brought them to her shoulders, leaning harder into her.

And here it starts..

“Holy crap… this is s-so much better than doing it myself… C-can you put another finger in, p-please?” Sunset’s ragged and erratic breaths were making it clear just how much she was enjoying this, with her voice becoming shaky.

Wait.. I'm not even gonna ask-

Although her tongue was growing tired and numb from the exertion, Twilight was determined to make Sunset orgasm right here and now. She kept up the pace, deciding to move her hands away from Sunset’s thighs and back down to her own loins, feverishly fingering herself as she continued licking away. As soon as she removed her hands from Sunset’s thighs however, she found that her lover was too far gone in the throes of bliss and absentmindedly locked her legs around Twilight’s head, squeezing hard as her climax continued to build to a peak. Surprisingly, Twilight didn’t mind this at all, and in fact it aided her in her own delight. Being smothered by Sunset’s firm flesh increased the sensuality of the situation by several magnitudes, and her oral efforts were redoubled as a result.

Come on, Sunset. Twilight's doing all the work here.

(I can't wait for more–)

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Thank you for your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much, though I'm unlikely to continue this plotline. I definitely enjoyed writing this though, so maybe someday I'll find another reason to write smut. I'm definitely not done with pony (and especially SciSet) stories, but I'm taking a break from writing fanfics at the moment. I've been working off-site on some original projects that are eating up all my time... I digress; thank you again for reading!