A Shitty Birthday

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Bobathan

Bobathan #1 · Aug 10th, 2022 · 9 · 4 ·

What in the fuck

Zerocool7785

Zerocool7785 #2 · Aug 10th, 2022 · 6 · 6 ·

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Well said. That is what Fimfiction.net has become. Pony porn. Once I've finished writing and posting my story I am out of here.

23 KM To Nerdiness

23 KM To Nerdiness #3 · Aug 10th, 2022 · 4 · 5 ·

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I don't get it either. Humanity is messed up, but judging by the count, I have some faith in it.

I'm just sticking around for my close peeps, if they ever come online again...

Rimmer

Rimmer #4 · Aug 10th, 2022 · 7 · 4 ·

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I'm glad you all enjoyed it!
If you're looking for more, feel free to check out some of my other stories!!!!

Haver

Haver #5 · Aug 10th, 2022 · 4 · 3 ·

Good

TsubakiHime

TsubakiHime #6 · Aug 10th, 2022 · 4 · ·

1) Take a shot every time you feel uncomfortable. I am currently in the ER with liver failure.

2) >PONUTS

3) I just kept waiting for it to end but it never did????

4) I don't think this is what God intended when he gave us these body parts.

5) why did you describe it all in great detail I never want to use the bathroom again

6) what a great SHITpost ahhhhhh my soul is dead

Mix-up

Mix-up #7 · Aug 11th, 2022 · 3 · ·

Well this was interesting read, keep it up.

Rimmer

Rimmer #8 · Aug 11th, 2022 · 2 · 1 ·

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Thx! Glad you *actually* enjoyed it!

Mix-up

Mix-up #9 · Aug 11th, 2022 · 6 · ·

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I am open to a lot if various kink fantasies, while do have limits( Ex: heavy gore and mutilation) and I don't kink shame people and as long as no one is hurt in real life and that it is consensual between consenting responsible adults it's none of my business.

Fcuk-A-Dcuk

Fcuk-A-Dcuk #10 · Aug 21st, 2022 · 1 · 1 ·

Judging by how Sunburst describes the taste and texture of Starlight and Stellar's "cake", I imagine he's quite the poop connoisseur.

Honesty, that's probably my favorite part of this story. I love how he uses words and phrases (i.e. bitter, sour, spicy, firm, earthy, like a brownie) that could pass as an accurate description of how gross poop is, but are also used in a way that makes it sound pretty tasty. In my opinion, the best scat stories are the ones that have a lot of sensory descriptions in them. Anything that goes into detail on what poop feels, smells, and tastes like is a huge turn-on for me (you especially did a great job of this with Twilight Bakes Some Brownies).

Rimmer