Short but a fine long quicky non the less 👍

Very nice. Gotta love Fluttershy craving a stud, but being all cute and shy the morning after.

Meh... That's a lot of crude, crass dirty talk for such a short story. It's been done to death.
Also, arbitrary zebra who gets a lot of tail and still would bang anything, even a vampire who jumped him.
Also, we have to do Pinkie Pie dirty, because of course.
Also, no action from behind, like on the cover art.

anything that remained of Zandre's muscular body was almost impossible to tell

And here I thought things got a turn for the dark, horror stuff. Would be a nice change of pace, actually, if Flutterbat sucked the beefcake dry, leaving only skin and bones behind.
But nope, it was just a broken sentence, unfortunately.