Hello there! I'm from Chile, and I've been here for a while. Not that much of a fan, but I still like Equestria.
Rainbow Dash can't sleep and she knows why, so she does the one thing that helps her relax when she's feeling down...
Fly.
No restrictions.
No troubles.
No sadness.
Only speed.
And that's when she runs into another stallion with the same problem as her.
Written for Bicyclette's "A Thousand Words" contest. Under the 'Fluff' category.
Cover image made by 'Chimicherrychanga'. If he/she wants me to take it down, feel free to contact me about it.
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Would love to see more from this.
Nice short and simple story.
Nice, cute little story you got here. Simple premise with simple resolution. Well-paced for that 1000 word limit; ended right at the perfect time. My only complaint might be that Rainbow's issues might have been presented a bit too explicitly, but honestly, that was such a minor thing that it didn't drag down the story at all.
It's sweet, but...
When is this? I figured part of Dash's lack of relationship was the unapproachable nature of the celebrity she achieves by the end of the series, but the entire main cast finding coltfirends so quickly threw me for a loop.
Aside from that, a nice little meet
cutecool. Thank you for it and best of luck in the judging.it's a good technique, to introduce the issue at the heart of the story as an "it" and then slowly reveal it, but there's a stumble here. without any specificity or details, this feels like the author not bothering to come with anything (even just names of background ponies would do! this is a fanfic).
hello, how can i reach across dimensions and murder all of these horses? not to mention this Equestria, if it's a place where stallions act this way. thank you
in a world where Rainbow is straight and stallions are awful, yeah, an encounter like this would be refreshing and make Rainbow happy! ah, really says a lot about society. certainly gave me something to think about, thank you for it!