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Damn. Heavy, almost too much so for how fast it moves, but the theme of digital corruption, its aesthetic, how the whole story is formatted is really neat. Good cover art and overall decently written, I can especially admire that you did it all in present tense. I don't know if it was the intention but the tense comes off as if reality is being corrupted right before Applejack?