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Dragon Shimmer
Just someone who really like dragons. Especially mage dragons and rare dragons.
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It's not bad I think maybe it's because of caribous.
The story is not that far so you can change it up maybe go with adventure through (name of planet) it would be a great way to show off the world and the people there by having them explore the world maybe have dearing do join in for and epic battle fantasy world tour
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I have plan to that world but... 2 more season. This story focus on Caribou kingdom (not Fall of Equestria story, don't worry)
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Hope Lord Dainn isn't in your story because that guy is a big jerk on women. Especially mares and does.
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Sorry for disappoint you but he is in the story. The different is he can't step a foot to Equestria.
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Okay that’s reassuring. I just someone would go to the kingdom of the caribou to beat Dainn up.
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How about an old human who already retired?
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That’ll do.
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Say, what do you hate Dainn most?
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He is just a ridicilous Mary Sue character, and just serve the audiences' fetish. Really, anyone who like that universe just have fetish brain.
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As in he's a plain villain?
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Yeep, he is. When I read about that universe and you know what? Everything is not make sense at all. The people like that universe don't care at all.
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I know right? It's always about raping and enslaving mares. Something I hate about them.
Does this fic involve rebelling against Celestia, or the other way around?
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Rebelling Dainn, not Celestia
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You know, I'm gonna guess that it's not the anthro version of Dainn isn't it?
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Actually, it is though. Should I drag the anthro tag in the story? Oh wait... I realize that I made a mistake. Thank you.
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I thought Dainn would be like an ordinary caribou. Could you blame me? I don't even know your story has some anthro version of it.
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Also, you're welcome. Plus, me and my pal War Monkey made a story similar to yours but only 7 humans came to their homeland known as Caribouria and they also allied with the Resistance led by a caribou named after the dwarf from the Hobbit.
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Dainn's the bad guy, not Celestia. Dainn is the worst villain in the FiM fiction story. He and his caribou think that the strong get what they want while the weak should obey or perish. And they're also sexists who thinks that girls are weaker, especially the mares. Even their own does who looked down on them as cows, which is an insult to the does.
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Well, I have changed into the orginial version. Not anthro, man I forgot to make this world more unusual
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That's because there's no anthro tag on the story and I thought Dainn was an anthro caribou.
i'm going to place this fiction on hold for now. Since it's incomplete. However I will read the first chapter sometime tomorrow. Ps Please be prepared! (reading all my follower fictions)
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Eh... i remember that I didn't put on review, right?
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Correct... just stopping by to see how your works. Since i did say im reading all my follower fiction event.
not very strong sentences in the first 7 paragraphs.
1. Celestia can move the sun which is more enough. Also she also moved the moon for 1,000 years.
2. Luna can move the moon with magic.
3. Fancy pants is making a 5 year project of solar panels (good job this was the smartest thing but I doubt that he would do such a thing since he seems more of a butler.)
4. Old ways causes many diseases I doubt that since magic is an easy fix.
5. Black mage.... this makes me think of final fantasy 14 0_0...
Chapter 1 seems a bit messy.
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. Rip, she is not going to like it.
1. Well yeah. But mind-controlling spell will be a disaster though.
3. What!? I thought he is a noble.
4. Nah. Magic is not easy to fix since the healing spell is rare here though (Like in MLP original)
5. People in Earth(en) give the orange dragon that title. SIlly, right
..why is the author's note blank on the chapter called after battle?
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Opps. Let me fix that.
P/S: there you go
ok..just read up to this chapter..and i have NO idea why this story is hated so much...i mean..its as good to me as the other story's you have on this universe...
also...is there an eta on the next chapter?
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thanks
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Well... it related FoE because I borrow its concept
I don't know. Just think and write for myself. Plus, my editor is working on the third story so I can't push him
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..but still..
Well... it related FoE because I borrow its concept
is not a good reason to me of why this story has so many down votes..cause i mean..this is very good stuff..and i think that most of those people dont even read the story and are JUST looking at the comments
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I made this fic like "if you don't read the previous story, you can't read this one" so they will confusing like "what's going on" when reading this one.
Well, I think that was my mistake since beginning this story.
P/S: you can follow this one, that's mean you have read the previous one. Thank you so much
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i have read ALL of them from start to finish since i do NOT like just starting a story before reading the story's leading up to it...like..how you are still making some typos from way back from during the first story...
and also..i have read ALL of your story's up till now..exept for The librarians and the cat of life
..also..the only other story i have read from beginning to finish like this was shark wars..the book series.
...also..did you know that there are Ninjago crossover story's on here?!?!
i was just taking a peek at how many chapters the cat of life story has and i saw a link to a Ninjago story!
did NOT know there was Ninjago stuff on this site at all.
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I won't surprise, because some people want to make a crossover that never appear before (like me... eh this crossover lack of world building so I choose it
Ninago is a good world building in the beginning with. I wonder how that author handling to that world though.
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i duno
i have not read it yet
want me to send the link on a comment here??
or no?
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I can find it myself
No need.
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ok..also..dubble checked about an hour ago..there are more Ninjago story's than i first thought.
i agree with the last words of this chapter...the in story tomorrow is going to be FUN.
you should look back at this... again >.> it still needs more work.
Sister might be a character but it isn't a characters name... you should fix this on all chapters.
oh this is still chapter 1
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about this "Sisters", I throught Celestia and Luna have that title "The Sisters"
Wel
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This is true... but putting a title of their sister should never be capitalized unless it's a beginning of a sentence or actual name their name. Otherwise people might get messed up as seeing sister as a new character. (which can confuse the reader on why it is capitalized)
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You're right. I fixed it
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make sure you fix this on all chapters.
keep it up very good !!!
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yes
dragon queen ha ha !
Hehehe
This chapter has set up a story for next chapter all on its own