This story is a sequel to The Adventures Paused
Anna, the archer in Greenwood Village. She lives so happily with her family until one day when she checks the crystal and it's gone. She accuses a swordsman hero stealing the jewel. Now the team welcomes the new member and starts a new journey
Crossover with Epic Battle Fantasy 4 (EBF4), owned by Matt Rozak
Cover by PtolemaiosLS
Warning: Sunset is a dragon along the journey, maybe OOC.
Editing: By LitterallyAL
P/S: If the chapter have (...) mean it edited.
Chapters (17)
Yay!!
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Wait, you want Sunset to go back to Equestria or something?
Hahaha Imagine the Team winning because of Lack of sleep of their enemy🤣
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Coffee and energy drink is a good way to counter it right :p
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Yeah but I can see that the Godcats are wayyy to arrogant to do that they would be like "Coffee and Energy drink!? Why would we need that we are gods! We have no need for mortal products!"🤭
Ohh is she finally going back!? I'm so excited for next part🥳
isn't cheers post to be cheer?
big bag behind; Anna feels
Matt Silently walks away; Anna sees
Plus, she can cast spells and stuff."
ok so... waterballs is not two words put together... it should be separate. However... turn over is one word. I know right... don't hate me for it...
"Well..
is that a stop like a pause if so then it's truly a ... instead of ..
this is all present tense
return needs and s (returns)
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. I am more appreciated when you did that.
Why should I hate you?
IF I guess this means pony meant to shout.... but however.... member, right?
Oh, sorry for my rudeness it needs a comma every time you start with oh it's always a comma.
but the man talk, one more,
any time, you see that it's the right time."
not sure if team was post to be capitalize... Unless that's their title? (No no no it can't be.)
as the team walks, they find two turtles have stone shells and a rock scorpion tail is charging at them.
there is only 1 guard...
The guard is quiet for a while as he looks at the team.
"Of course,
I think you meant to lowercase the s in so... (you can blame your pinkie) A joke I love to discover!!!
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Thank you for pointing that out.
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Chapter corrected and update - thank you for the heads up!
This chapter was updated! Sorry for the wait chapter 8 is now up!
The latest edit is up!
The middle was inspired by Pheonix Wright - Boot to the Head
https://youtu.be/2wC2jOSj8xU
Enjoy the added pictures. Think it adds a nice touch to the story for those who are not familiar with the game.
Chapter 11 was edi updated
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Sleep deprived cats? Hmmmm it would funny if the cats were just tired after getting only 16 hours of sleep.
Diana how many of those catnip 2 hour energy drinks have you had?
Just 4 or 5 and wow I stayed awake for 4 hours! Imagine 4 hours without a nap...
The last paragraph had past tense, so updated it:
Snow is falling around the tower's base. With the unexpected lull, the team can get some much-needed rest. They are all exhausted; however, Anna and Nolegs find enough strength to venture out for some additional firewood. Despite her warm clothing, the archer is feeling cold. An icy wind is starting to blow across the area. Suddenly Nolegs hisses a warning. The archer quickly feels terror grip her, and she runs back to the shelter with all her strength. Her voice barely louder than a whisper, she manages to get out.
“There’s something out there.”
My Little Reviews & Feedback the link to review.