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When Heart and Hooves Day arrives, Discord wants to make a Heart and Hooves Day card for Fluttershy. However, he wants to make the card without using magic. Unfortunately, he needs some help to making it. Luckily, the CMC offer to help Discord make the card.

Day Seven of #FluttercordWeek2022: Free Day

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You should read Without Magic, in that story the CMCS challenge Discord to make a card for Flutttershy..WITHOUT MAGIC!

11132504
I read that one.

11132511
How'd you like it? And what did you think of the ending with Starlight and Chrysalis?

11132524
I like the ending with Fluttershy and Discord. As for the ending with Starlight and Queen Chrysalis, I didn't know what would happen in the show if those two would meet. But when Starlight Glimmer reformed and season 6 came out, I was glad the Changelings reformed while Chrysalis did not. In my universe, Chrysalis will reform in the next generation.

11132549
Well nothing really happened between them except in the 6 season finale, I didn't really mind Chrysalis refusing to reform like the rest of her hive and I guess the end of this story's been written before the Cutie Remark premiered either that or it's kinda like a what Starlight never reformed and teamed up with Chrysalis to get revenge on Twilight and her friends

This couple is one for the ages!

11133411
Yes! They're my favorite couple on the show.

The fillies spent the past few hours with Discord, showing him how to make a card by hoof as he tried to get the hang of it.

I think you meant to write, '...next few hours'.

Other than that it is a nice, simple story.

11135844
Thank you! Also, could you not give any negative comments on what I work on in my stories? I really worked hard on my stories and would like to have good comments and thumbs up.

11135895 I finished the two stories and have no more comments to leave. That said, you should be prepared for people to leave far more harsh comments than anything I left. As an author you will need to have tough skin because eventually there will be someone who just despises your stories for whatever reason and is more than willing to say so. Take it from a fellow author. I have had readers cuss me out for what I have written (NOT for children or minors). I am not saying this to be harsh. I am letting you know so you can be prepared for when it happens. Best of luck and keep honing your craft.

P.S. if you really want to see what kinds of comments I have had to deal with, feel free to read my story: The Unity Pact. Just be aware there are VERY adult themes such as battle, emotional and mental anguish, and in the third story there is an explicit scene of a married couple. Do NOT read if you are under the age of 18.

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Don't worry. I'm over 18 and if there are people who give negative comments, I can just delete them. Thanks for looking out for me.

11135899 You have the right to delete them, but keep in mind that although they may make you very upset, sometimes they may have a point. I had to learn that if someone was willing to take the time to leave a long and hateful comment, that meant they felt strongly enough to use some of their valuable, limited time to say it. They spent their time (of which everyone has a limited amount) to tell you something, so I would caution you against just erasing every perceived negative comment. Sometimes hurtful comments are made out of constructive criticism and not just to bring you down. I, myself, am guilty of being too harsh on other authors and I still am on occasion. Just some proverbial food for thought.

11135908 If you do decide to read my story series, please prepare yourself for some hard and emotional scenes. There is a lot, a LOT of cultural comparison and contrast and a lot of very quirky characters. If you decide to read it, have fun, but remember the world is not always fair. All wrongs will eventually be righted though.

If you decide not to read it, then I will certainly not hold that against you. It is not for everyone, though I am proud to hold the title of having written the first story with more than 4 Humans in Equestria and I still hold the record for the most Humans in Equestria in one story series.

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