Synopsis-When Twilight and her friends are given a task to find a missing draconequus, they enlist Discord to help them. As they search for clues that might lead them to the missing draconequus, Fluttershy starts to develop some feelings for Discord. Will it be enough to help them solve this case?
I worked on this story in 2016 when season 6 came out. There are some changes that are different from the show. For example, instead of Flurry Heart being the daughter of Shining Armor and Cadance, it's an alicorn oc I made named Pure Heart. The new form of the changelings doesn't appear until the next generation in my universe stories I plan on working on and there are more draconequuses besides Discord that live in a dimension called the Chaos Realm.
I began to work on it after seeing the new Disney movie 'Zootopia'. This story contains references from mostly Zootopia, other movies, and shows. Most of the ocs in my story are references to the characters that are from movies and shows. My brother and I worked on this story together and completed it by the end of 2016.
Then why'd this story come out in 2018?
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I posted my story on fanfiction in 2016 and I didn't have an account on Fimfiction. My brother suggested that if I posted this story on Fimfiction, many people would read it. I thought about it for awhile until I finally decided to have an account on Fimfiction and post my story. Hope this makes enough sense.
Zootopia reference
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I know. I put that reference in the author's note.
I feel like “draconequi” would be more grammatically correct
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Well people on fanfiction are okay with it.
The zootopia references are off the CHARTS
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I know. I loved that movie so much I watched it 5 TIMES!!!!!
In my mind I’m just gonna think “sugar bell “ instead of “cheerilee” if you don’t mind
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That's okay. I thought of the shippings between Big Mac and Cheerilee and Party Favor with Sugar Belle in my fanfictions and other stories before season 7 came out in 2017. I'm okay with Big Mac and Sugar Belle shipping on the show.
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I love this already!
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I'm glad you do!
What do you like about it?
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I hope you'll comment on what parts of the story you like.
First chapter, and already I am struck with Nostalgia. THE THEIF AND THE COBBLER?! I honestly never expected to see that in an MLP fanfic. So far, the story is interesting, it may take me a bit to get used to fluttercord since this is the first time I’m reading a fanfic of this ship, but I watched the bride of discord, so it shouldn’t be that different. I’m not so on board with the ship personally, but I won’t let that get in the way of me reading this story. I will not allow that to make me biased,
If there was one nitpick, it would be that why did Spike suspect someone’s would steal the emerald? And why Spike specifically? It doesn’t make sense why Spike so out of the blue would assume someone would steal an emerald he knew next to nothing about. Kind of feels out of nowhere. And why only Spike would be concerned? Why not a royal guard, or perhaps so you can keep Spike, make it that he somehow noticed something off about it (maybe some unknown dragon sense or something) and then that would give his suspicions more weight.
If a character is going to do or feel something, there should always be a reason. I hope this didn’t come off as mean, just some constructive advice to make the story points connect.
Of course, it’s on,y the first chapter, so who knows what can happen. 😄
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I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm also glad that you won't be biased on my ship of Fluttercord as you read my story.
To answer your question about why Spike was worried about the emerald, my brother and I want to add elements from the Thief and the Cobbler movie because we loved watching that movie when we were little and what better way to add something that would cause Spike to worry.
Can't wait to see what other comments you'll post for my story.
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I can understand that, but in context, it would make sense for him to have a reason rather than it being because it's a reference. Even references should have a purpose in a story.
I'll be sure to leave my thoughts in later chapters.
Will you ponies please look out the window?!
Also I always think Spike gets his worrywart side from Twilight.
Missing draconequus that’s kinda a weird thing more importantly what do they look like?
Love the introduction of Discord’s sister, Antic.😊
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I know. My brother and I thought it would be funny.
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Thanks!
Dang, things just got real. This chapter was more of a setup, no not much happening aside from a few antics. I hope Antic will show up more.
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She will. You'll see.
Discord EXPOSED
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That's right!
...later:
"Phew. I'm glad nobody stole it. I've saving this lil' nugget for a while. Come to poppa!" (Crunches on tasty emerald)
PENALTY! It's: "Clever like a fox..."
...although I have known a few clever squirrels in my day. That and the 3000 ants that were accused as dressing up as grains of rice and held up a Chinese Food restaurant...
...
I don't think they did it. I know some of them, and they wouldn't do anything like that.
Truth be told the only reason I follow and read your story first place because it has fluttercord in it don't get me wrong I love the story but fluttercord was the main reason
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Thanks! I understand. Hope to see what other comments you'll post.
What was the video below meant to be?
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It was suppose to be the song "Am I Feeling Love" from The Thief and The Cobbler. I'll fix it.
I think that this was an interesting chapter. I like the thief a lot, though I felt sort of sorry that he got beaten up by Granny Smith... Sort of.
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Thanks! Wait til you see more of the Thief in the story.
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You're welcome.
I think I saw a Big Hero 6 reference in here, too.
(P.S: this story is so underrated, like it’s so well done. )
Thank you so much!
I don’t get the joke that pinkie pie just did.
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Which joke?
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The one with the four headed dog being gifted.
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I'm sorry that you didn't understand it. It was a reference from the joke from the movie 'The Lion King 1 1/2.
Who do you think Antic‘s Voice actor should be?
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It's Kaley Cuoco. She played as Penny in Big Bang Theory.
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Nice! I made a drawing of him too. He's called Mr. Hoof.
https://www.deviantart.com/cheerful9/art/Mlp-oc-Mr-Hoof-818070366
When you mean small ponies, do you mean like midgets?
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Yes. Here's a link to the one who was talking looks like.
https://www.deviantart.com/cheerful9/art/Mlp-oc-Fifi-751949377
Even so, I don’t think it would be wise to disobey the princess, And seeing how Applejack is the element of honesty, I doubt she would lie about them having other things to attend to. Besides, unlike chief Bogo, Gruff is only second in command as number 2 said in chapter 3. So it’s not really his call to make. Speaking of Bogo, I never did like that guy. Always being disrespectful to Judy Hopps just because she’s a smaller creature and thinking he could get away with it because he’s in charge. That’s what I call abusing power. Makes me think that he should be the villain and not bellwether. After all his voice actor was the same one who played Shere Kahn In jungle book 2016.
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I know. My brother and I worked on this story together.
Honestly pinkie pie, when are you ever going to learn to keep your big mouth shut.
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I know. She never learns. Wait till you see what happens to her when ponies try asking her questuions.
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I did. Instant Karma.
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I know. Instead of Fluttershy getting nervous about answering questions, Pinkie Pie was the one getting nervous instead that she was caught in a loop.