In the Crystal Empire, just before the crystal heart could blast him into a thousand pieces, King Sombra teleports away to save himself. And after a few months of hiding, when the empire isn't expecting him to attack, he takes over. And he keeps a yellow pegasus mare as his prisoner.
Formerly named- "My little bat"
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Interesting, though I am cirious how its supposed to be connected to a bat.
Also, strangling a guard to death and killing a innocent pony...he could have just knocked him out or chocked him uncousness. The pony, unless it provoked him, a non lethal demonstration could have had the same Effect.
Its not that i mind, i am just unsure if such brutality fits sombra
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Sombra finds pleasure in killing ponies, as shown in my Darkness of Crystals story. And as to how it's related to a bat, you'll find out soon.
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Okay, just saying
Nice, though hurting a scared mare like that, seems a bit cruel
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King Sombra is very cruel. In this story at least. And thanks for commenting!
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Of course, i just thought he would see the difference between her struggling out of fear and Real defiance
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He knew that she was scared, he just loves hurting ponies.
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Sadist, eh?
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Yeah.
Hey, what about me?
But interesting
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I didn't forget about you :)
And thanks. Hopefully the next chapter will be out sooner.
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Nice!
Nicely done! Makes me wondering about something
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Thanks! I'm interested to hear what it made you wonder about.
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How this sombra would react to hanzal
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Probably a little harsh at first, but he'd become softer over time.
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Oh?
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Yeah, Sombra wouldn't want anyone to think of him as a kind hearted pony (maybe he could've had some bad experiences as a colt from being kind, like if someone is kind, people start using them...) , but after a while, he'd realize Hanzal isn't a threat or the type of pony to use someone, so he'd be kind.
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well. i just thought due to how Hanzal suffered, it could remind him how he was bullied as colt, having a mutual understanding how hanzal feels
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Unless he reads Hanzal's mind, he wouldn't know that at first. After all, no one would just tell someone about their whole past and stuff... And he probably would try to do so, but Hanzal 's reaction would stop him?
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proably, like Hanzal stating sombering it won matter/no pony will before fpr him, catchong sombra by surprise, similar to our old work
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Yeah.
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Okay