I can't help but imagine how this setup would work with TwiDash instead of RariTwi.

"You said you wanted help figuring out your new appendages, and that's exactly what I'm going to do."

nice job on story

well this was nice. 8/10 great job.

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Great work.

I started to read this, but I feel the writing is too clunky with sentences that are too long without pause, or short sentences in awkward places. The premise is interesting, but the story could use editing, in my opinion.

A fun and sweet story.

A word of advise: try to avoid Lavender Unicorn Syndrome. There are many instances of that in this story, and it gets kind of distracting. It's especially bad when you use terms like "horned mare", as it's not clear which mare you're talking about. There are also a few grammar and spelling issues here and there.

Otherwise, this is a good story. I encourage you to keep writing, as your talent would otherwise be wasted. Well done.

This pushed a lot of buttons for me. It was so sweet but so good, thank you for sharing

Absolute top-tier lewd story you got here.

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