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TalB


The relationship that never was.

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On a night where Princess Luna decides to not go into the dream realm due to no nightmares occurring, she decides to take Megan Williams over to the castle and share her deepest and darkest secret to her even if it could get her into trouble. At first, she is told that there is common ground between them, but then is almost brought into a shock to find why she wasn't around for so long. Could sharing this secret make Megan feel more or less for Luna after knowing about it? This is a crossover between G1 and G4.

Proofreader: Majestic_Donut

Cover image: VulpesIncult

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 13 )

So far, this is getting good. And I thought I can do good generation crossover stories.

Comment posted by TalB deleted Oct 25th, 2021

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BTW, this isn't my first fanfic as I have written two others before this one.

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The only reason I have this person help edit is mainly because I'm not that good with grammar. Even a published story can still be edited to make them sound better. However, I don't need it to be promoted, I will leave that to the individual to give it a like.

BTW, both The Moon Rises and having both of them sing Lullaby for a Princess are actually fan made songs. This means you won't find these songs anywhere in the series no matter what episode you watch. The first song was pretty much how Luna turned into Nightmare Moon, though the only big difference is that she doesn't have her helmet when taking that form. Also, when hearing the first half, it does want to make you feel bad for her at first, but then as the song takes a more aggressive approach, you realize what she is really going to do. As for the second one, that one is after the original battle, and it does represent Celestia's confession on Luna became that. One major thing is that when you see the battle, it's much more intense than shown in the series, and you not only see Nightmare Moon being more relentless, but you also get Celestia fighting while crying as if she really doesn't want to fight back against her own sister even though she has to.

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It was scenes from that video that got me how to describe how Luna became Nightmare Moon especially where it showed her getting very angry and shouting at her sister not to mention slamming the doors at her. When listening to the duet version, it's interesting how many verses that they have in common. Meanwhile, when I watched The Moon Rises, I find it interesting that Star Swirl is there as well and does nothing to stop Luna from doing what she will end up doing. Then again, it could have been because there was probably nothing he could have done anyway even if he wanted to. Another thing is that when you look at here sitting on the throne with the green flames, it's very similar to when Daybreaker sat on the throne in the episode A Royal Problem and the flames occur. Still, those songs were very nice to listen to and I found it amazing to not just see it with animation that looked as if it was in line with the recent movie, but also as if whoever was doing their voices almost matched them from the series. On a side note, you can find a PMV (Pony Music Video) using The Moon Rises with scenes from the show.

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The link for that video is in the author's note at the end of the second chapter.

Thank you for writing this it was a fun read.

If that portal was to turn her into a pony, she would look like this.

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Hey TalB! I don’t know if you remember me, but it’s your proofreader 😊 It’s awesome to see how you’ve grown! As for me, I had to delete my account because I got in trouble with my parents. Things are good now, though I’m not sure I’ll edit for people again. Hope you’re doing well!

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First of all, it's nice to see you back again. Since you have left originally, I have finished the stories that I call "The Return of Megan Williams" series. My latest fanfics are now reimagined episodes of what it would have been like if she was to appear in the show itself, and this Megan isn't the one from G1, but rather a rebooted version, which is what if would have been if Hasbro really did do that.

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I noticed that! I haven’t read any of your new stories yet, but I look forward to reading them! I’m sorry I couldn’t finish editing this story. That’s about when I got in trouble (in the rated M section) but things are good now and I simply monitor what I read

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BTW, Danny and Molly are also G1 characters and happen to be Megan's younger siblings if you didn't already know about that.

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