A Conversation with a Sun Princess

Sunny Starscout has a pretty eventful life after reuniting the ponies of Equestria. Little does she know it has caught the attention of a certain sun princess. This leads to them meeting inside of Sunny's home. The young pony has many questions for the former ruler of Equestria, but will she answer them all or is she there for a reason? Only Celestia knows!

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23 KM To Nerdiness

23 KM To Nerdiness #1 · Oct 2nd, 2021 · 3 · ·

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Treasurehunter20

Treasurehunter20 #2 · Oct 2nd, 2021 · · 5 ·

Uh... a little too simple for my taste, but nice try.

LightShieldtheunicorn

LightShieldtheunicorn #3 · Oct 3rd, 2021 · · ·

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Thanks for the feedback!

Treasurehunter20

Treasurehunter20 #4 · Oct 3rd, 2021 · 1 · 2 ·

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I'm not a good reviewer. And I don’t exactly how to improve the story and i'm writing this on my tablet instead of my desktop wich is on the fritz lately. Not exactly comfortable while typing.

VisualPony

VisualPony #5 · Oct 3rd, 2021 · · ·

I must say that I like the premise of the story, but I recommend you take it to the editors group here on FimFiction, cause it needs some work when it comes to formatting, dialogue and, most importantly, grammar and punctuation.

Block

Block #6 · Oct 4th, 2021 · · ·

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I agree.

ra36

ra36 #7 · Oct 31st, 2021 · 2 · ·

Please make a sequel

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #8 · Nov 7th, 2021 · · ·

Sunny Starscout was walking around Maretime Bay still overjoyed at the fact that all pony races were together again. As the sun began to set, she walked home to her newly rebuilt lighthouse. As she entered, she smiles turning and looking at her father's picture on the wall 'we did it dad' she thought to herself. Sunny walked to the kitchen grabbing an apple and eating it. Sunny then walked to her bedroom as she continued eating her apple. She had been worn out by the days' events's not to mention the wings and horn don't help. Sunny still wasn't sure if it would be a permanent change. As she enters her room, she notices that her box of Twilight and her friends was missing Twilight. "That's strange I was sure I found them all especially Twilight Sparkle" As she began searching for her lost Twilight, she heard a loud noise from the lighthouse above. As Sunny quickly made it to the elevator and up to the lighthouse lamp room, she saw what had made the noise. Sunny stood silently at the figure in front of her. She had never seen a pony so tall, but she soon noticed the pony's cutie mark. As she gasped and tripping over her own hoofs and landing on her rump, the pony turned around to face her after hearing the commotion.

I'm still questioning myself if they're permanent or not for real actually. 🤔

Celestia sighs “Twilight I do not know as being an Alicorn should extend your life almost forever. Spike is probably in a cave somewhere. As for the others as like most ponies they passed on”

Yep, it's probably what happened to them.

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