A Guardsmare of half height and double spirit finds love twice as tall and thrice as strong: a Reverse Gender Roles Equestria story of epic proportions and minuscule stature.
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Yep still loving this.
The plot thiccens.
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You sound thirsty.
Care for a Pepsi?
Wait, so Anon's boss basically warned the guards that Anon, a reporter, would be going to an event where there's no reporters allowed?
Was she born that stupid, or did she have to work at it?
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Cloak N. Dagger is just that nosy.
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I think this may tie into Cut having Anon's picture at the ready. It may be a publicity stunt, and Anon's the sacrifice. 😔
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Bobbles is right. Jargon didn't have to tell anything, Cloak's just a freak 😔
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How.... How could she have possibly learned that? Like, I get that Cloak is a freak, but that definitely seems like the kind of thing Jargon keeps no notes of nor makes any mention anywhere.
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The very real and honest answer is I really don't remember what the justification was when I wrote this over a year and a half ago. It seemed obvious then, but now with my now much-improved story construction skills, it's much more opaque. As far as I recall Jargon and the staff of the Canterlot Canterer are just very unsecure blabbermouths and Cloak due to being a natural spy just overheard. I also did not mean to imply either Cloak or Jargon think Anon is going to anything durastic. As far as Cloak knows he is only going to be at the castle. Hence why in the future chapters Cloak is griping about not getting stationed close to the front gate, since why would a dumb stallion reporter be anywhere else? In her mind, he's obviously just going to try to ask the Kirin some questions as they arrive like all the other reporters. The only reason Astral is expecting more is because she knows Pike well enough that she knows Pike wouldn't date a chump who would settle for that. All things that I really didn't properly establish in hindsight, just imply. Oh well, you live and you lean. Me and Bobbles will have to touch that up in the coming chapters.
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Cloak literally digs through her own sister's trash. IDK if she was specifically looking for the receipt of Anon's bra or something else and found that out as well, but I think it's safe to say that she probably knows a pretty disturbing amount of personal information about those she's close to.
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Well, props for the honesty.
Unrelately, in the Greentext version of the story, what exactly are the [spoilers] supposed to indicate?
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I was kind of figuring them out early on. Especially very early on. Once I got a better feel for them they were either supposed to be intrusive thoughts or shameful thoughts, depending on the context. When it's actually on 4chan, putting the spoilers in actually does spoiler the text which adds a nice visual element to it, which I sought to take advantage of.
I predict absolutely nothing will go awry with this.
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My entire thought process for it was: "little spoon is more comfortable, and therefore would be more desirable." And such, I made it so. In RGRE, the mare gives up comfort for her stallion, she'll live with one of her hooves falling asleep.
Anon won't be breaking in Astral.... he will walk in the front door
Umm...Does it seem werid to anyone, the writer is keeping tabs on the cadet in pike's squad? Are they hinting at another story or is this a plot point for later?
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Aw rats, good eye I thought we caught all of those. If it exists in the ponebin (it probably does) I'll go fix it asap.
i think the fact that the sister of cut n' paste is cloak n' dagger
Just supports my theory that anon WILL get stabbed on the heart 15 times.
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Gib chaper 6 of see barn
I don't know where this train is doing, but I FUCKING LOVE THE RIDE!!!
Well I finally managed to get the time to read the story, and it's not bad so far, I feel it is one of the more interesting Revers Gender Role Equestria fic without going overboard on the sex stuff. I think the subject is broached pretty lightly with the focus being on the romance without forgetting about social context. I would like to see how stallions actually act in general and what are their personable and popular views on Annon, from the regular stallions to the more Stallionnist. I do like the idea of ball braw, and wonder how it came about. I wonder if Annon will eventually actual really bad sexisms' like, and less of the passive stuff that he gets, which he seems pretty okay with it, but sounds like it's starting to be grading on him. I wonder if we would see a sort of conversion therapy camps or very isolates towns that treat stallion more as property and see how used to works. I am surprised that Annon, being a confirmed extra dimensional being by the crown, who had contact with Luna apparently might try to leverage his contact with them to see that interviews with Kirin. Also wonder if some Stallionist try to act and look look mares like having longer more elaborate mane styles, makeup and longer eyelashes?
I wonder what is the pay gape different mares and stallion in general, if it is anything like in the USA, it would be less then 70 cent for woman each dollars and man does, and it's even less if you add minorities to it.
Fun story keep it up dude
damn i'm diggin this story. just wish the chapters were longer. can't wait for the next one!
Cloak sounds a bit creepy...
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The fact about wage is not true men work longer hours and women work shorter hours therefore a pay gape
Pike, if that is enough to ruin your friendship then you need better friends
You might lose some efficiency in the physical training department, but the likely improvements to moral and mental stability within the squad should more than make up for it
Eh, I can think of a thing or two
Is everyone related to JJJ somehow?
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Poor bastard, he's getting the shorty end of the stick.
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It just occurred to me: Why would any of the reporters be at the front gate when the Kirin are obviously going to arrive via the flying chariot entrance?
Gotta admire how well loose lips make certain happy accidents possible...
I understand:
F-cup ball bra
F-cup breasts bra
They both can wear a bra and if they don’t want, they don’t.