Twilight Sparkle dies while defending Equestria and discovers that the afterlife is real.
She's also about to discover that the Creator is not merciful.
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'Visions are worth fighting for. Why spend your life making someone else's dreams?'
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This was nice. I rather agree to be honest. It was well written. Thank you.
The only deal that thought was sad was that the villians could not change in all of eternitys. I thought it was...interesting. But I understand the choice so...
Ps. Don't bother with the downvotes. Im not suprised really. Either way its good story with a clear message.
Wow, that was proper good. I really like this take on the afterlife, it was sort of strange at first going for a second person point of view but once you get into it it makes a lot more sense. The ending is great too, How you end it with a very melancholy and sad idea but also happy in a sense, it's not an easy thing to do.
This has actually inspired me. I write fics of my own over at AO3 and I've had a terrible time trying to make the next chapter. Obviously I won't steal your work or ideas but it has given me some good ideas to work with.
Thanks a lot.
There are some situations where life is... unpleasant, unpleasant enough to wish for nothing, but annihilation is the end of all things, good or bad.
Great read, a pleasant twist, in a grim way, things are not always what they seem.
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Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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Thank you! This was originally written from Grogar's perspective, but I didn't like how it got too dark at the end, so it was switched to Twilight.
Good luck on your chapter!
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Indeed. The idea of oblivion being a good thing is one of those ideas that doesn't come to you until you get older, and you begin to understand the ramifications of how existing forever might not be a good or pleasant thing, especially if reincarnation is real.
Huh, nice story, I like it. The ending is sort of bittersweet of course, but that's the point. :)
For a little more than half of the story, I was expecting the 'intelligence' to be Discord, since he isn't named anywhere. Plus, he seems to be the type to be driven insane being immortal. My headcanon : Discord is actually a survivor from a previous universe, and he's lived so long he's gone insane (and also accumulated great power through his life). What he did to deserve such cruel treatment, I have no clue, but I dunno, I think it kinda fits.
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I didn't write the Intelligence with Discord in mind, but I like your interpretation!