• Published 12th May 2021
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Mantra - AFanaticRabbit



Rarity has a single phrase she relies upon to help her through troubled times. It's crass and absurd and entirely inappropriate, but it helps.

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Comments ( 9 )

This was a fun read with a happy ending.:duck:

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I always intend my puns.

D'aww, that was incredibly sweet, and a great look into Rarity's character. And of course, loved the RariTwi in it as well.

During the mirror image fantasy I had half expected an Army of Darkness thing to happen with Bad Rarity dancing around and calling Good Rarity a "goody little two-shoes." Of course, given the mantra in question, I also imagine that all of the other readers were expecting Rarity to dance to Q Lazzarus.

“I’d fuck me.”

and so it begins. (who wouldn't tho, rarity)

i remember this idea being birthed last night. i like the actual concept of it, and i giggled at most of it. Surprisingly, the twist works nicely although Rarity (as a shipname) is OTP.

Although your rather more "serious" take on the whole Rarity on Rarity action, making it a dream, makes me feel a tiny bit silly for what my Applejack (as a ship name) story is gonna be haha.

Good writing! Fun to read :)

This was a fun story, and a great exploration of Rarity's character. Plus, I can't turn down that shipping end.

I really, really, like the narration style here. The flow of going from the description of the past, to the description of the present, and the thoughts of emotions of Rari herself.

It's one of those fics I will try to practice on, to improve my own narrative skills.

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