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PegPony


I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.

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Eldorado
Moderator

How old is Pistachio meant to be in this story? You don't really specify, and though there are a fair amount of references to childish things (like having to check with parents in order to go out) it's hard to tell a difference between children and adults when characters are this sexed-up.

Fimfic policy doesn't allow under-18s to be human or anthro, and there's a fair amount of people here who react pretty negatively to stories that ride the line like this one does. It would probably behoove you to more clearly establish the legal ages of all characters involved in stories like this.

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I apologise, but this story takes place after the events of "The Cherry Pop Chronicles: Rarity" as evidenced by the flashback segment in the prologue that harkens back to that story and the presence of his pink schoolgirl attire which he acquired in the same story. In "The Cherry Pop Chronicles: Rarity" I specify that Pistachio is 18. However, if you feel it necessary that I include a sentence that reconfirm his age, I will do so.

Eldorado
Moderator

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It wouldn't be the worst idea ever, but I wouldn't force it. This is borderline but it just barely scans as possibly being an 18-year-old.

Coco, still blindfolded went "Well... who is it then? I thought it was your secondary bitch who was fucking me, you didn't tell me someone else was going to get involved! Is it Hoity Toity? Fancy Pants? Oh no no no wait, it's Photo Finish isn't it? It has to be, everybody knows that she's hiding a massive dick in between her legs". Rarity was enjoying Coco's ignorance far too much, as Pistachio pulled out of Coco's cunt and stood up Rarity removed his ball gag and put it away, then took off Coco's blindfold to finally reveal to her who exactly it was that had just pumped her full of hot sticky man milk.

MtF Photo Finish canon?

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