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I read this chaptet yesterday before update. Nice
Veeerrry nice
This chapter works greatly towards the first chapter of the story ♡
I just remembered, after the attack on the Ibex they traveld very wide. Should the stuff like the Laptop not be returned to the group? Unless the three survivers of the IBex Team have them in storage gems on the backpacks strapped to themself.
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Thank you! Good timing, then. You get to see what it was before and after.
Thanks again! It’s in the same spirit as the prologue, and I had it in mind when I was writing it.
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It’s a valid question. And all I will say is that the answer is yet to come.
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In other words it was overlooked
or planned for later
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It wasn’t overlooked. I have two answers for that, but I haven’t decided which one to use yet. There’s time to think about it either way.
Just for the record
The link to chapter 23 at the end actually leads to T version of 22
Just to let you know
now, In my years here on FimFic, I've read a LOT of fanfiction. I espeically love big, epical stories with fleshed out background and backstory.
Fallout: Equestria and Project Horizons
Celestia Code
Upheaval series
Thousand Years Change
Shifting Melodies
and few others zhat I don't remember off my head - and at this point, Featherd Hearts officially became one of my top favorites
so...to borrow a phrase here, "For the Love of the Ancestors" finish this thing, and don't leave us hanging, please!
Also, granted your predisposition I really think you might enjoy https://www.fimfiction.net/story/258497/shifting-melodies this one. I'm not sure if you know it, but it even has its own NSFW sidestories just like this one. Sure it has it's own issues, like inserting a lot of oficial characters, but I think you may really like it (centered on Changelings and Thestrals with great backstory on both)
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Argh. I thought I’d checked and double-checked all those. Thanks for pointing it out. It’s fixed now.
Why thank you! That’s some pretty rarefied company to be included with!
Don’t worry. I may be pausing it, but I fully intend to finish it. Once you’ve caught up, you might want to check out a couple other equally epic entries of mine—namely, the two Firefly stories, which I’ve been referencing repeatedly in here. I think you’ll find them right up there with this one in terms of action, worldbuilding and character development.
Interesting. Thanks for the tip. I’ll add it to my read later list.
Thanks for commenting! And I look forward to hearing what you think of the rest of the available chapters. I’ve written this through the conclusion of the first combat arc, so you’ll be arriving at both an end and a new beginning that should hopefully leave you eager for more.
Friendship with benefits is awesome ♡👍
Re-reading after the current status of the story things look very differently now. I must say things are only obvious in hindsight and are clever hinted at when one knows to look for them.
Clever 👍
One must wonder how many Overlords and Cloven manufacturing facilities exit now. Are they perhaps like nomads? Exhausting territory materials before taking everything with them to settle elsewhere, facilities included.
Or do they expand with previous facilities left behind inactive for a fighting retreat or backup contingency?
If I was a cloven overlord I would grow my evolution over decades, going after isolated targets and gaining intelligence of the individual nation while perfecting military doctrine.
Though hey might have done exactly that until someone forced them to change into more offensive tactics like now?
Perhaps Chrysalis interfacing or accidentally awakening them? We know little of Chrysalis activities over the years after all.
If she survived the fights to come a recommendation would be nice.
She is a named character, sooo:
- Redshirt
- Side character
- used for world building
- unused addition to the roaster
Basically the 4 fates of named characters the are not main characters in the story cover or description.